Mysterious Resurrection: Rebirth of I Am the Third Generation of Kings

Just bring out Yang Jian, what are you playing with? Any TV station will announce it. If there is a ghost, his name is Yang Jian. Yang Jian ate all the ghosts, and the world became peaceful. Even if you don't tell him, Yang Jian can play by himself, why does he still need to take you with him? Whenever your butterfly effect affects others, will they kill you first? Are they not good men and women? Don't get angry and try hard write less about protecting your home and country. Even the elderly won't dare to help you if you haven't time traveled. If you have time traveled, it has nothing to do with you. What's the point of national justice? Wang Lu and his wife said that protecting Dadong City was a bit ridiculous. I really want the second generation of the Wang family to live, just go and look in the ghost mirror or go to the post office and tear up some letters. The whole generation of the Wang family has been summoned. Looking in the mirror, maybe there are four generations living under the same roof. I don't want to live any longer, and I describe how sad it is, so I'm quite speechless.

The author can refer to this book more and then write his own characteristics

Everything else is okay, except what is the name of the protagonist, Young Master? This is the War God and Soldier King from more than ten years ago. Such an ancient title gives off a strong second-class aura. I suggest you change it to Mr. Wang or Team Wang. And the Ghost Controller you wrote is too emotional, right? Do you want to take a look at the emotions of the people in the original work? Numbness, corpse odor, hoarse voice, expressionless face, coldness, this is the ghost, the ghost master

The writing is too conservative and not suitable for me 😅 I can't say that the writing is bad, I can only say that it is not suitable for me. The three generations of time-traveling kings start out as aliens and are followed by two generations of the Wang family. It can be said that the beginning of the story is Tianhu, but the writing is timid. As for this opening, it can be said that as long as you don't touch the other people and the later copies of Yin Yang Road, you can completely push forward all the events in the early stage. As for the invincible combat power that the author arranged for the protagonist at the beginning and the plot written out, it is not interesting at all. Or don't make this kind of opening, give it and don't write about invincibility. Use the invincible combat power in the early stage to write 😅😅😅 on the child's play house

"Mysterious Recovery: The Rise from Three Generations of the Wang Family"

This book is confiscated, written by He Yin'er, you can change the track of this book. The third generation of the Wang family and the spirit summoner join forces.

The author has just started writing his first novel, and this is mainly because his writing style is sometimes a bit off. He will gradually improve it as he practices more. Please be gentle with your words.

The author's later thoughts will add the three generations of kings to the headquarters part. At the same time, I am currently considering whether Mr. Qin will face the ghosts + ghost paintings alone, and the protagonist will face the newspaper ghost + Hundred Ghost Night Walk, or Mr. Qin will solve the newspaper ghost, and the protagonist + Mr. Qin will face the ghosts + ghost paintings. I can give some suggestions. The current idea is to consider connecting it with Fo Ye's next book Tianqing. In the later stage, it will fill in the holes that the original work cannot fill.

Personal opinion. I have just read a dozen chapters, and there are a lot of typos. Also, the whole book of "Mysterious Resurrection" is biased towards horror and despair. But when I read your book, I felt it was too relaxing and not scary at all. That's my personal opinion. Some people may like it a little more relaxed. There are also titles. The people under the protagonist call the protagonist young master, young master. I can understand a little bit about calling him young master, but I don't understand the young master very well. And calling him the second generation master Wang makes me feel like reading a fantasy novel. There are also supporting roles, when the protagonist deals with the ghost theater. One of his subordinates said, "I didn't expect the young master to be so fierce." Another one echoed. There is a feeling that people are watching the excitement. As for the protagonist, I just looked at the previous point, and it can be seen that the author wanted to write Wang Chaling to have that kind of chic and elegant sense of sight. But this doesn't mean that if you feel elegant, just write about his elegant posing in the article, so that what you write later will be nondescript. Elegance should be that the protagonist is calm no matter what he encounters. Never in a hurry, including speaking and dealing with things calmly and having his own bearing, similar to Marvel's Ebony Maw. Instead of posing, Wang Chaling in the original work is not elegant at all, he is just an intellectual. The author can refer to the appearance and speech of the mysterious Wang Chaling. I feel that the Wang Chaling you want in your article is similar, but what you wrote is a bit off. There is one more. What is at the heart of the mysterious resurgence? It is the Three Laws of Creation, and the overall writing style revolves around the three laws, which is rather dark and despairing. But the author, your writing style is not fixed, not dark, not light-hearted, and sometimes even funny. The wording leans toward fantasy, which is weird for a fan horror novel. The author may be more suitable for fantasy novels

The biggest problem is that it's very tiring to read, and it's the same as me trying to make up the number of words when writing an essay.