Douluo Dragon King: The Light and Dark Dragon Emperor

Current questions in this article 1. The protagonist's father's surname is Tang, his younger brother is also surnamed Tang, but the protagonist's surname is Mu. The author does not give you an explanation. 2. After awakening the twin holy dragon martial spirits, the twin holy dragon martial spirits cannot be compared to the gold and silver dragon king. Whether the author wants to introduce Dou Si, whether to introduce all of them or unilaterally introduce the setting of Dragon King. 3. The heroine, to be honest, the only thing I see in The Dragon King is that the heroine is Gu Yuena. If she doesn't accept Gu Yuena, she'll be a loser. 4. In the apprenticeship session, Leng Yaozhu forces the protagonist to become an apprentice. If it doesn't fit her character, she won't be afraid of the protagonist backstabbing him in the future. This alone has dissuaded many people. 5. The author has not explained whether he wants to follow the Shrek route or whether he is going against the Tang Dynasty. 6. The protagonist said that he would give Yun Ming a level 1 god status in the future. However, Yun Ming, as the master of the Poseidon Pavilion and the helmsman of Shrek Academy, and the author as a member of the Spirit Transferring Pagoda, actually wanted to give him a level 1 god status. If the author wanted to go against the Tang Dynasty, he would never cooperate with the author. I hope the author can give a reasonable explanation.

Looking at this introduction, it's not about licking Tang San's son, right? , This is definitely a poisonous point. If this point is not changed, not many people will read it 😅 Moreover, Gu Yuena is not accepted and they are allowed to be together. This is also a poisonous point. If these two poisonous points are not changed, this book will be dead 😅

There are many poisonous points. The protagonist's biological parents are level 98 Douluo, but after their death, the protagonist was sent to Tang Wulin's parents to be raised. This is not logical at all, and it is placed in such an ordinary family. I understand that the author wants to take advantage of the plot, so why not just set the protagonist to be Tang Ziran's biological child?

You can either plot the bloodline of the Golden Dragon King or go to Devil's Island to get the source of destruction and life. Otherwise, you can't play. The suppression is too strong. You don't even need the Golden and Silver Dragon King to suppress you. The Dragon Leap in the book can suppress you.

If you don't love the original heroine written by a fan, who will? Who would come to read the original heroine, and the whole descendants of Yan Shaozhe 😊, very poisonous

Aren't these two spirits suppressed by blood? Then what else is the protagonist going to do?

I didn't expect that Gu Yuena could give the child to Tang Wulin's parents. I didn't expect that there would be a super Douluo. Also, the main character's family is the Holy Dragon Family. They were targeted by the Holy Spirit Cult and both of their parents died. Please, the Angel Family is not dead yet. Why is your family targeted by the Holy Spirit Cult? There's also a new female protagonist. What's the point of being Tang Wulin's eldest brother? Just kneel down and see that the Tang family is your father. There will never be a new routine, so why not use your own martial arts to cooperate with Gu Yuena? The spirit of the plane and the golden book are both confronting Tang San's parents. You are afraid of the stupid Old Tang. Moreover, Old Tang woke up after Tang Wulin broke his first bloodline. Of course, it is not ruled out that he woke up long ago. This book can't be read even if you don't use your brain to read it.

If you don't understand, brother, just compare and contrast the original works. Since when was the Holy Dragon of Light the product of martial soul fusion skills? It was the Holy Dragon of Gold. Do you really think that ultimate attributes are some shitty thing? Even the Phoenix of Light can be called ultimate attributes? It would be understandable if you write that the protagonist is a Holy Dragon of Light with the ultimate light attribute, and has the bloodline of the Dragon King of Light, but it would be outrageous if you write that an ordinary Holy Dragon of Light is the ultimate light

The Holy Dragon of Light and the Phoenix of Light have the ultimate light. Dou Er said that Shrek has only developed three ultimate attributes in ten thousand years, and Huo Yuhao has only one ultimate attribute in his generation.

The original heroine of the fanfic is given away a popular female character from the original work. Isn't this asking for death? Anyone who can achieve results like this will never write a fanfic.