Douluo: Trinity, I Ran Through the Timeline

The quality dropped drastically after it was put on the shelves. I originally thought it was just temporary, but after reading chapter 130, the situation still hasn't improved. I can only give up.

I really like this book overall, both in terms of setting and plot. In terms of setting, the trinity and the three nodes have achieved the same goal in terms of path selection, goals, and realization paths. They work hard in the same place and continue to promote career development through anchoring beliefs, forging, entities (soul, Ayin, Abyss, Blacksmith Association), etc. In terms of plot, the plots of the three modules overlap smoothly and do not cause confusion when writing from one end to the other. The plots of the three modules are organically connected through the protagonist's new abilities and new ideas.

Almost all attributes in the Tang Family Three Young Masters series: Gold, wood, water, fire, earth, wind, thunder, light, darkness, ice, poison, yin, yang, time, space, cold, sacred, evil, creation, destruction, life, death, spirit, strength, stars, annihilation, chaos, chaos, corrosion, decomposition, astrology, stability, purification, luck, misfortune, nature, destiny, creature, creation, speed, defense, attack, space-like, creation, none. There are a total of 45 known attributes Among them, there are 18 elemental attributes, including metal, wood, water, fire and earth, wind, thunder, light and dark ice, yin and yang, time and space poison, creation and destruction, and stars. Yes, poison, yin and yang, creation, destruction, and stars are all elements in the entire worldview of Douluo Unifying the Universe. The following is not important, the word number of water Summary of classification and classification of Douluo attributes 1. Basic element categories 1. Origin of the five elements: metal, wood, water, fire, earth 2. Natural derivation: wind, thunder, ice, cold, poison 3. Yin and Yang poles: Yin and Yang 2. Opposite attribute categories 1. Light and darkness: light, dark br>2. Good and evil: sacred, evil 3. Life and death: life, death 4. Creation and destruction: creation, destruction 5. Blessings and misfortunes: luck, misfortune 3. Time, space and universe 1. Laws of time and space: time, space 2. Power of stars: stars, astrology 3. Chaos and order: chaos, chaos, stability 4. Power Quantity and Law Category 1. Original Law: Creation, Destiny, Nature, Destruction, Life, Death 2. Energy Form: Spirit, Strength, Speed, Defense, Attack 5. Special Status Category 1. Purification and Pollution: Purification, Corrosion, Decomposition 2. Nothingness and Existence: Nothingness, Creature 6. Other Supplementary Categories 1. Unknown Or composite attributes: living things (may belong to the branch of life), stability (may be related to defense) Under God, in God, above God Creation, Creation, Creation Destruction (destruction), destruction, destruction The nine attributes of Rotten Salted Fish: Earth, Fire, Water, Wind, Light, Dark Sky, Creation, Destruction The nine attributes of Laolong God: Earth, Fire, Water, Wind, Light, Dark Time and Space, Stability

There are several settings that are explained separately here. The first is the protagonist's time travel, which is divided into three parts. One part reaches the Douluo World (Dou Er Period), which is the world itself. The other two parts enter two illusory nodes in the long river of time. One is the fixed Dou Yi Period, and the other is the naturally evolved future, which is the Dou San Period. Understanding this, many settings are easy to accept. For example, the changes caused by the protagonist of Dou Yi will not affect the timeline, and will not affect Dou II and Dou San. However, the changes caused by the protagonist of Dou II will appear in Dou San. Because of the existence of the protagonist of Dou San, some situations in Dou San are anchored, and the timeline will be closed when it evolves. What the protagonist of Dou San has experienced will remain unchanged

The main reason is that Douluo's ladies are not smart.

Change the parallel time and space, otherwise how can you explain where the protagonist of Dou Yi is during the Dou Er period? Where are the two protagonists of Dou Yi Dou and Dou San in the Dou San period? If there is a timeline, the two of them must exist. The little Yakuza can intervene in the lower world. There is no reason that the protagonists of the first two parts cannot. This must be written in parallel time and space, otherwise it will not be possible to write.

Some people scolded Tang San because Yu Xiaogang didn't become a god. I'm really speechless. Can the number one alchemist in Zhongzhou be chosen by someone like you, who has half a level of innate soul power? ? ? Ren Yaochen's talent is to become a Dou Emperor. Do you know what a ninth-level alchemist is? ? ? What is Yu Xiaogang? Level 29 great soul master? It's really a matter of friendship and hatred. If you don't have talent, you don't have talent, and it's the master's damn fault. Did the grass jelly I gave you go in vain? . . . In other words, he only ate two of Tang Shen Wangba's fairy grasses. The rest were divided according to distance. Can you say according to your own conscience that the Seven Monsters and the other six Gouba are the ones who can become gods? . . . Yu Xiaogang didn't become a god, so he scolded him, calling him inhumane, unfaithful and unfilial. Later, Tang San's parents were arranged to become gods and scolded them again. Scolding him to use any means necessary to make his parents become gods. . . . . . How could there be such a schizophrenic person? . . Finally. Yu Xiaogang, this 29th-level great soul master should not compete with the ninth-level alchemist. Yao Chen originally had the appearance of fighting an emperor.

Even your own daughter can be divided into two parts, one part is made into Wang Dong, and the other part corrodes the auspicious beast. If you, an outsider, seek refuge with Tang Shenwang, think about what Tang Shenwang will do to control you. If you just become Tang Shenwang's dog, it really won't be that much of a problem.

Past, present, future. Wanye Corpse Immortal!

Well, to be honest, I think the author should divide the story line into three parts. Otherwise, it will look too fragmented. First write the story line of Dou Yi (past), and then write Dou II (present day) to fill in the pit where Dou Yi got the opportunity. Finally, write Dou San (future) to fill in the pits dug earlier. It is divided into three parts like this. Otherwise, it would be too confusing to write the three story lines together.

The most powerful thing about Douluo Continent is that the percentage bonus does not decrease with the level. The bonus is 60% at the third ring and still 60% at the ninth ring. It's so ridiculous. Energy conservation no longer exists😰

The writing of the battle is very average, the skills are all Supreme Wave Ken, and the names are also very low. Such an awesome trinity plug-in is paired with pure power skills. They are all numerical values ​​and have no mechanism. The battle does not make use of one's own time and space attributes, predict the future to fight, observe and anchor the results of the battle, etc. Could it be that the trinity plug-in can only be used for training and cannot delve into its combat functions?

Don't force a plot conflict. Why does Tang Hao want to kill the protagonist because of the God of Creation? It's too rough for you to set up a villain so casually. Damn it, this kind of villain has no IQ at all. Do you feel a sense of accomplishment when the protagonist defeats this kind of villain? ? ?

What to say. . The pace of this book is very problematic. It was quite interesting in the early stages, but it became more and more boring as it went on. The settings were added and added more and more.

Trivial knowledge, the world of Douluo has been in comprehensive degradation. Dou Yi can still withstand the divine battle, but during the Dou San period, the divine battle will tear Douluo apart (Figure 1 Douluo Chapter 1525)

Are you a new author? I don't know that there are basically no good results in novels about clones and time travel. They can easily be written as poisonous.

At present, the author mainly focuses on Dou Yi and Dou San. Dou Er basically has no sense of existence, but I seem to remember the author himself saying that Dou Er is the main world of the novel.

Tang San Roasted Rabbit tie

I just read a Douluo fanfic, and I saw a reader comment: Ning Tian is so cute, and then I replied: But when she took it out later, it was bigger than you, and then the reader chased me and scolded me, do you have any clues? 🙂🙂🙂

It's so boring. Such a good subject is not interesting at all.

More than 600 pictures. If you want this, you can refine it from more than 600 pictures to more than 300 pictures. The plot will not be intermittent and boring. It feels like there are some details that you think are necessary to talk about. It doesn't matter what you say. In fact, as long as you have gone through the front once, there is no need to go through it again. Since more than 200 chapters, I have been looking forward to Dou Yi's plot, but I found that not much has been said yet. I just mentioned the section between Tang San, his father and his aunt, that's it. I know it may be necessary to foreshadow or do something, but it's too slow. Some dialogues can really be summarized and summarized. Three of them can be combined into one. Information, maintain the beginning, uh, Doukai, Dousan, Dousan. Dousan's information is to improve qualification resources, and then Doukai and then Dou Er is forging, which is training, training, training, dialogue, dialogue, oh, it's so boring.

It was okay in the early stage, but it became more and more boring later on. I kept adding a bunch of settings and the plot was all watery settings.

Let's recruit characters. Soul masters, martial souls, soul powers, and soul skills will be used directly when needed.

It's quite fun, and the imagination is okay. It's much better than those Douluo fans who have no brains to abuse the third person, abuse the master, and collect "beautiful" illustrations. The shortcomings are also quite obvious. There are too few plots. It is impossible to write three consecutive novels with such a small number of words (although Douluo itself is also very good, they are all about the academy and the competition). As a result, there are too few plots for Abuse III and Abuse Master, which are not enough to read.

You should finish this book first and then double-open it.

This book is written by a Douluo fan, but some of the writing methods in it are very original. If you can prepare a relatively complete outline in advance, you can try to create an original book~ (although many authors with good fan data have died because of originality 😏)

Also, I can see that you have already started to write 11 paragraphs, 21 paragraphs and 31 paragraphs in 123. There are too many connections between the three of them. When I started to read the free chapters, I thought about using the three chapters of 123 to absorb more information, and then more than 200 other pictures. I actually feel that the amount of information I have now is enough, I have done what I need to do, and it is almost time to advance the plot of the original text. However, the author has to hold back and start talking, start talking, start talking, start talking, uh, one paragraph, two paragraphs, three paragraphs, just go slowly paragraph by paragraph, what are you doing? You can't say that one is bigger than the other, and the plot is longer, and then there is a longer plot. It feels like it was before it was released. It is obvious that I can look through the table of contents from the beginning of more than 200 chapters. I didn't look at the table of contents for the free chapters. I read them chapter by chapter, but I am reading them chapter by chapter. After the article was put on the shelf, I needed to look through the catalog, but I started to look at Zhang Jieming and I knew what this one was for. It was that the author's protagonist did something, and then the character reacted. This is just this one, this one passed by, nothing helpful, any new information, pure dialogue

There used to be two chapters a day, but now it's one chapter a day. Author, are you paddling? ! ! ! 😡😡😡Do you still think about it? ! 😡😡😡

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The author has watched Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races, and feels like the Three Body Method 🙂