The Goddess's Treasure: the Relic of the Void

Determined not to cut the book and write 1 million words

It feels like every paragraph is like a new book. It's so disconnected. The author has no desire to read on. Why don't you try to write slowly and don't rush to cram so many things into it. After reading a few hundred words in the first chapter, I have no desire to read on.

I don't know why I actually have the feeling that people in this country don't like me Is it an illusion?

You won't sign a contract with me, right? I'll just write until you feel sorry for me.

Who can tell me whether I should continue writing this book? I am very confused.

Since I had the chance to read this book, I gave it a brief taste and there are a few things I would like to say. First of all, let's talk about the basics of writing. There are some problems in the use of punctuation marks and basic writing skills. Although this aspect is not too serious in online articles, you still need to pay attention to it. In addition, try to use the ~ symbol as little as possible. I know that using this symbol will give e-generation authors a sense of satisfaction in enhancing the context, but in fact, I want to use this symbol to cover up the problem of difficulty in using words to express emotions. It needs to be changed. The second is the adaptation of the theme. It can be seen that it borrows some Japanese RPG theme elements, and the writing style still uses the Chinese humanistic environment in order to be grounded. Although I have only read three chapters, I roughly estimate that I want to write a Chinese-Japanese-Western fantasy feeling. Just this word can probably understand my shortcomings: your theme is a translation, and it is prone to serious failures. Finally, here are some suggestions for writing: try to write about the most basic and common themes first, even if it is just a fanfic. Although it is very clever to graft themes, this kind of clever method for mature writers with good basic skills is no longer effective. It's something for people who are interested but still want to make money by writing. If an author does this when he first starts writing, I can only say that this person has nothing to express and is just writing for the sake of writing. Then I can only suggest that he stop writing as soon as possible and stop harming others and himself.

In fact, I don't want to reason with others But what I say is reasonable in the eyes of others Everyone just think that I am a chatterbox I have no place to talk I can only talk here at the starting point I will try my best to post it in book circles as little as possible in the future I will just post it here.

Try to write as much as possible in this book. If the data is too bad, forget it.

The performance of this book was so bad that I was so angry that I vomited blood.

Let me emphasize, I don't like Japan, I like Germany. I just think some things are very good and can be used. Why can't Japan's good things be used and turned into ours? We must compete with each other, saying that we also have something, why should we do better than this? If you do well, people will naturally like it There is no need to exclude anyone because of this This is not unpatriotic. Good things should be used

People above please be more open-minded and don't be so narrow-minded Please be open-minded.

If your grades are too bad, it's really hard to persevere 😭

This book has currently written 140,000 words, and I will try to write it to 200,000 words. If the collection is still so bad by then, then there will be no way to continue, the results are too poor Not many people like this genre My writing style is not popular By then only It can be cut Killed by reality Sorry for the small number of readers I'm sorry for you I really can't stand the current systems and special functions, they are so fake, they look like the Chosen One But how can there be such a good thing in reality?

Respecting traditional and excellent culture does not mean attaching importance to history, attaching importance to immortals and heroes The key is to look at the attitudes and practices of the people around you I can't stand the ideas of many young people I don't want to scold them Because it makes no sense A chicken talks like a duck, playing the harp to a cow It makes no sense What's even more frightening is that the big guys at the starting point actually support their views I vomited too You are also corrupted

It's so strange Why do people and readers nowadays like to read that kind of writing? There are also articles that look tired There are many articles that are very rigorous, but I get a headache after reading them for a while I don't quite understand the situation I don't know what people nowadays like.

I don't understand why I'm so unpopular Is it because I write rubbish? Is my writing really rubbish?

This book has received extremely poor results. Alas, this is fate It's not popular.

The data in this book is too poor, so it needs to be cut into 100,000 words.

Although the results of this book are very poor, I will still write more. I don't plan to cut it easily this time. No one can tell me to cut it. I will write it to one million words Oh, it's so difficult It's really difficult to sign a contract.

Sorry, I will be very tired when writing 2000 words It will be much easier if I break it into two 1000 words.