Western Fantasy: the Auxiliary Road to Grow from Scratch

Coming from the tomatoes, good luck to the author, it's a very good book

A very nice book, highly recommended to everyone

The point of view is quite clear, that is the protagonist. But the problem is that it is too monotonous. Instead of using multiple perspectives, it has to build suspense. It is written like a background introduction and is relatively bland. The young man is going to take an adventure.

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Key events and stories about the protagonist's emotional state of mind can be written in detail. Don't waste words on overly simple events. It is unnecessary and will reduce the sense of reading. The events and characters related to the protagonist's growth, and the protagonist's participation in major events in the mainland are rewritten, like Lola. Although the protagonist is a part of a big event, the protagonist participated and affected the protagonist's mentality and journey. You can write more, but the simple and small things in the early journey of the New World did not have much impact on the protagonist. It can be passed in a few chapters. The number of words in more than 20 chapters is enough, but the reading feeling is not slow.

This book is really good.

Writing a book is not easy, so stay with me!

This book is a narrative and expository text, but it is not a novel.

It feels quite strange that detection is not important here. You can say that the map detection talent is terrible and low-level. Some people can achieve the same effect without relying on this talent. But I find it unbelievable that a team that doesn't even have anyone for investigation still despises this talent.

Is this a cut book? 😰