I, the Taoist Master of Wanfa, Started as an Apprentice in the Alchemy Room

A loser pig's trotters must have a fat best friend, routine writing.

The writing is good, but there are always some idiomatic, fastidious and so on that make people tired of reading it.

The book is very interesting, at least I think so, but I still want to give some suggestions and opinions The protagonist is a bit slow to advance now, but there is still a very easy feeling. The details of the protagonist's training are not written. This aspect is quite lacking and makes people feel unreliable, because the realm is a bit low, why To say, it is just inexplicable. Every time I am about to be in danger, I practice hard, and then I am lucky enough to advance. It gives people a feeling of being attacked on the battlefield, and it is not practical. The advantage is that the description of human nature is very good. If the world of immortality really exists, it will only be more cruel, more sinister, and more hypocritical than the real society. At present, it seems The description is quite good There is also this plug-in, the existence of cheats. In fact, I don't like reading system articles very much, but this plug-in is not so abnormal in the early stage, but in the later stage, it is like a bug, and it is almost difficult to have an opponent. I feel that this book can only develop into a pure cool article in the end, this gold finger. It is extremely easy for fingers to cause this book to go high and low The psychological description of the protagonist is very rich, but the emotions and psychology change quickly. When you read it on behalf of yourself, you will feel light and unstable. I hope the author can help the protagonist grow up quickly

The writing is sophisticated, the plot is old-fashioned but innovative, emphasizing emotion rather than logic, a bit empty and unreliable.

He is absolutely reincarnated, and he most likely wrote suspense and horror genres in the past.

The writing is sophisticated, but the trumpet is small, wait and see

There are so many hangups, the level rises so slowly The pressure is so high, the level is so low, there is no way to get rid of the pressure My heart feels cold every day, and I feel that I lack some excitement. I keep suppressing and giving talents, but the result is that I still feel cold at every turn.

So well written! Come on, author, keep up the standards. I've ordered them all!

Replacing the drawing talisman with something like skin training and bone training won't make any difference at all.