
Naruto: Becoming Stronger by Healing Uchiha Mikoto
火影:从医治宇智波美琴开始变强
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- Completed
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- 684k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3mo ago
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- Qidian
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If you are strong in medical ninjutsu, your chakra control ability will naturally be strong. Chakra control ability is the foundation. If you have a solid foundation, how can you not learn ninjutsu?
If you meet so many rebellious jounin, are you just a cabbage? Under normal circumstances, jounin are the absolute top leaders in the five great ninja villages. Even one of the five great ninja villages only has a few dozen people at most. Unless they are desperate, who will rebel against the village? You can meet three of them when you go out on a C-level mission.
Can you easily learn medical ninjutsu, but cannot learn other ninjutsu?
The original book clearly states that learning medical ninjutsu is much more difficult than other ordinary ninjutsu. Are you telling me that I can easily learn medical ninjutsu, but not other ninjutsu? ? ? Isn't it as nonsense as saying that you can easily learn calculus but cannot learn addition, subtraction, multiplication and division in elementary school?
I lost interest when I saw that the protagonist wanted to learn Eight Gates Dunjia, so I started training from scratch. He is a medical ninja who uses chakra control ability, and he also has the ninjutsu given by Golden Finger. I don't understand why he wants to learn Eight Gates Dunjia. They are two completely opposite systems.
Every time a paragraph is passed, I will write a large piece of science popularization. Can I also write a novel by copying Baidu?
He has top-notch talent in medical ninjutsu, but he can only be used as cannon fodder on the battlefield... Doesn't the author really find this setting contradictory?
It's all gone through the system. It's written that the protagonist has obtained highly difficult ninjutsu and the blood-successor samsara eye, but at the same time it's written that the protagonist doesn't have the Burning Release, so he can't use the copied Burning Release Ninjutsu. Isn't it funny? In the past, the protagonist had no other chakra attributes and could be used by the system. Now it is just a mere Burning Escape. You have lost a protagonist who has not awakened... Speechless! Doesn't the protagonist have all seven attributes now? Hello? What I wrote before seems to be okay, but suddenly something big comes up? The system has already been streamed, but we still need to talk about basic ninja logic?
This is a very simple Naruto story. The author's writing skills are average. The story is a bit back to the time when fan fiction was just starting out more than 10 years ago. The book can be used as a supplementary reading.
So slow to follow new ones
As the title states, the author is handicapped🤓
The reward is too simple! You can definitely add rewards - physical fitness, sealing speed, bloodline, battle experience, etc. Light ninjutsu and chakra are ninjutsu that you can't use openly, so there is a trick! Besides, no matter how many ninjutsu you have, it won't work if you don't have enough chakra. Naruto still rubs his balls until the finale! You have enough chakra, but you have no fighting experience at all, and you are useless. You have to improve your golden finger in all aspects! ! Especially in the later stage, the Kage level is not as good as a dog, and the Jonin is completely cannon fodder! At least you can get in with super shadowing!
This time travel through white time
It's another (indigenous) ninja book that doesn't advance the plot at all, but in the finale, it's still a ninja.
The timeline is messed up and the combat power is broken. The Rinnegan first and then the Sharingan is also the first one among so many Naruto fanfics that I have seen.
After seeing the Chunin Exam, I have some suggestions.
There's nothing wrong with the writing, at least it's above average among Naruto fandoms, but it seems a little lackluster, and I feel like the protagonist doesn't have a strong purpose in doing things, or the plot doesn't have enough positive feedback (only the part I've seen so far). Take the Chunin Exam I just saw as an example. The protagonist accepts the arrangement to take the chuunin exam, and then slaps various supporting actors in the face while frying fish. Each single scene seems to be in line with the writing routine of pretending to slap in the face and providing pros and cons, but in fact, there is no feeling when reading. On the one hand, there is no foreshadowing and no emotional resonance. No matter how clown the supporting actor is, he will not slap them in the face. What will it feel like? This is a misalignment of expectations and expressions. If it is Rasa Danzo who slaps Danzo in the face, then the emotions are in place. Rasa is because there is a foreshadowing in the front and is not a minor role. Danzo feels happy no matter when he is slapped in the face. Secondly, the protagonist takes part in this Chunin exam, and the only thing he can gain is the title of Chunin. , The protagonist itself has no purpose, no comparison with classmates, and no goal to achieve in the exam, it is very bland. In fact, Kumogakure wants to kidnap Kushina during the exam, which is a highlight, so the biggest expectation this plot can give readers is that the protagonist saves Kushina and gains favorability, and the protagonist shows strength during this period. Bang was surprised, which was the icing on the cake, So from this point of view, the focus of this plot should be to foreshadow Kumogakure's conspiracy, and then quickly advance to the kidnapping plot, and then the protagonist saves the beauty, instead of wasting time and ink on the irrelevant exam itself. Slapping the sidekicks in the face will not provide positive feedback, but will kill the original expectations. I haven't read the follow-up yet, but I looked through the catalog and it seems to be pretty good. Recently, there are too few Naruto fanfics that suit my taste. I also hope that the author can write this book well, so I couldn't help but write some immature suggestions. I will go back and continue reading.
Isn't Kushina still a Jinchuuriki at 18 years old? Shin 6
Extremely poisonous!
Look no further! Very disgusting! Using the Samsara Eye and S-level ninjutsu, he defeated a passerby! The other chuunin had failed, but he walked away in front of the protagonist's eyes. The protagonist was useless! A passerby died after being saved!
Poison!
I have never seen such a useless author, and I have never seen such a useless protagonist! The Rinnegan combined with S-level ninjutsu only killed one chuunin passerby! Holy shit! The most poisonous article from Qidian! Not one of them!
Can you TJ🤓
So is there anything about Kato Dan in this book, or is it just deleted?
Ask Shen Nong if there will be a blood stain limit in the future.
The introduction is not very attractive, so forget it if the protagonist is a real civilian ninja.