Lord Dusk

Well, generally speaking, I look at the title of the book first, then the introduction, and then the chapter names. . . I'll start reading later. Unless I'm poisoned to death💀, I won't leave easily.

The traditional writing method is very suitable for writing DND themes. It's like a veteran cadre of a certain writers' association trying out online literature. Spell slots are changed to magic power, which is more convenient for story description, but it is a shock to the natural DND enthusiast group. It may be better to provide more foreshadowing. The protagonist is obsessed with legal justice, which is classic but also very unpleasant. This kind of plot conflict has realistic depth, but it has been abused in the development of online literature in the past 20 years, and the plot direction is difficult to arouse reading interest. Perhaps ten years from now, it will be a good story for readers who have divorced themselves from the early reading experience of online articles, but it is not a good online article suitable for today.

Such a simple fighting description, it's better to play a turn-based game and it's more intuitive.

The chapter title is quite important, otherwise many people's first reaction would be that they don't want to read it.