Lu Mingfei: Okay, I Will Be the Savior

It's not tight, I should have looked carefully to find out. The performance is routine and slow-moving. I'm just like, why is it that after more than 100 chapters, it's still useless and indecisive?

Xia Mi, Su Xiaoqiang, Hui Liyi, Nuonuo, Ling, Liu Miaomiao. (This is a female character from another world line. The poisonous points in the original work will be corrected as much as possible, so there is no need to worry about character creation.)

When I was with Lu Mingfei, what would happen if I suddenly found out that Lu Mingfei had awakened😋

Lu Xia is the true god, the only one who supports the dismantling of CP. In the original novel, Chu Xia is a pure tragedy.

Emm... This copy of Liu Miaomiao feels so uncomfortable. The way you write it makes me think that Liu Miaomiao will become a loser in unrequited love in the future. If you don't accept the heroine, don't write it so ambiguously.

Why are the heroines so tsundere-y? Xia Mi's character is nothing like the original one. She clearly has a carefree personality.

Have you ever been a Dragon King? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

The plot seems too slow 😆 I wrote so many chapters on a small matter of fighting. More importantly, I think the author wrote that the plot should be solved by Su Xiaoqiang's father next, but what I personally want to see more is Lu Mingfei's transformation. Although it is there now, it feels like it is not enough. I hope Lu Mingfei can rely on himself. I hope to see obvious growth in the following plot 🙏🙏🙏 The emotional line written by the author is very interesting, and I hope that I can show my sage in front of people who will see Lu Mingfei next (after all, in addition to making up for regrets when watching Dragon Clan fandom, I want to see Lu Mingfei become a true king from a young boy)

The writing of Xia Mi is beautiful😭

At present, it is not as attractive as the first one, so keep going

Lu Mingfei takes off again, a winner in life

Isn't there a heroine named Shui Duoduo? Sister Shui Duoduo has so many scenes😭😭😭

If you can't write, don't write 😅

Even if 94% can fail in investment, it is absolutely impossible.

Come on, big brother who writes light novels.

Some book friends said that he kept his promise, but now?

Will the heroine have Mai?🙂

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ! Absenteeism? ? ?

It's good to read. It's very comfortable to read as a romance novel. The writing style is very comfortable. I don't know how the fight scenes will be in the future. I'm looking forward to it.

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I actually spent so many chapters writing something else. It's tiring just to look at it. I think it's even more tiring to write it.

The biggest problem is that the characters are occ at the beginning. How can I understand this?

As a love story... It's okay. The dialogue replaces the plot. The dialogue is a bit childish and the language is frivolous. As a fan of the Dragon Clan, I am unqualified and have never had that taste from the beginning.