Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's New Life

What can I say, the progress is too slow, and there is basically no content in the plot before it is released, but the writing is quite good, huh. . . Anyway, support it

I like every female character mentioned in the introduction very much. Nono is the existence of Bai Yueguang, Su Xiaoqiang is the ideal girlfriend in real life, Eri is the gentle girl next door who deserves a lot of love, Rei is the arrogant cat who will always be by your side, and Mai Shutoku is a particularly reliable big sister. Lu Mingfei and them prefer pure and sincere emotions rather than disgusting lust.

Seeing that you said this is your first time writing a book, how many Jiangnan do you eat in one meal? Stop reading the comment sections and people in this chapter who say things that put you down. Because I am a fan of the original work, and among the Dragon Clan fans I have read, your writing is the best, and the rest that has the best reputation is your words and that Nian Nian. You are worse than them. Because it is difficult to agree with others, so don't be influenced, just write according to your own ideas and outline. For the two books written by Dragons that are good, people don't read the opinions in the comment section at all. New writers like you love to read other people's opinions. In fact, your writing is very good, and the original plot is actually very good. If you don't believe me, check out other popular Dragons fans. I feel very anxious after reading your review. It is true that it is difficult for dragon fan fiction to become popular, except for the book about not having enough money to go to college, so you have to be prepared that this book will not be particularly popular. But if you can keep writing, although it is difficult to be particularly popular, it should be more popular than the book about words. Be sure not to be disturbed by the chapters and comments in this chapter. That's because they haven't read other Dragon Clan fanfics. I love reading Dragon Clan fanfics and have read several. Yours really stands out from the crowd. And it's really hard to agree on. For example, I like the writing style in Long Er. In fact, Long Er is a romance novel with not many fighting scenes, so I think your emotional plot for Lu Mingfei in the early stage is quite good. I don't like some people turning Lu Mingfei's story of bitterness and hatred into a cold-blooded killing machine. Back then Long Er was second on the romance list. Long Er has a bunch of poisonous spots, that Chen Wenwen, that Nuonuo, Lu Mingfei, they are disgusting to death, but he is fire, so don't care about their accusations. Because they haven't seen other Dragon Clan fans. I'm afraid you have some self-perception problems You simply can't satisfy everyone's needs. The original novelists are different from those who simply like the dragon worldview and power system. I read fanfics to make up for regrets, and some people regard fanfics as fantasy novels. I like the more daily ones, but some people in the comment section prefer the more fighting and fast-paced ones. I don't like Nono and Shutoku Mai, but if you write about Nono and Shutoku Mai, won't I still read it? There is also someone who wants Su Xi and Chu Zihang to be together, but I think Chu Xia is the official match. There is another person in the comment section who hates harems, but I like harems. You really can't satisfy everyone's needs, and I can't satisfy the part of me that likes you. But I think your writing is very good. Some minor issues are actually acceptable to readers. Dragon Clan has so many poisonous points, but it's still popular, so just follow your own outline. It's a bit messy, but it probably means that if you are more confident, your writing style is the best among Dragon Clan fans. Don't listen to their nonsense. Just read it in the comments section and this chapter. You can modify the details, but write according to your own ideas. Old writers don't care about readers' opinions at all. It's difficult to reconcile the opinions of everyone. You can't satisfy everyone's opinions. Come on author. I love your book the most. I had nothing to do in the past two days and read it in one sitting. I will definitely support you.

If you just think of writing books as entertainment, you can write whatever you want. If you want to make money by writing books, you will only die if you make the branch line so long.

My lovely little goddess!

The main female characters have been accepted. No need for Xia Ya. You are really

Although I have only read the first few chapters, the writing style and the characters are exactly the same as the original work. Especially Lu Mingfei, he is the closest among the Dragon Clan fics I have seen so far. In most fics, Lu Mingfei only retains the bitchiness and cowardice. The character, moreover, is written without regard to Jackie Chan Aotian. The Lu Mingfei in this book is the first time I read about Lu Mingfei who is full of loneliness but still has his own persistence. If this feeling can be maintained in the future, then I would like to call this book the number one fan, Amen!

It looks like eating potato chips!

Originally I was planning to finish reading it, but it turned out to be so long that I decided to forget it.

From the previous reading, the emotional scenes are too awkward. The author is probably young and has not been in love much, and the psychological description and other literary parts are too lengthy. If he is trying to attract more readers. This is a big poisonous point. After reading one or two sentences, most readers find that the subsequent chapters are repetitive and have no patience to read. The reason why many people are following Slow Heat is because every sentence he says closely follows the main rhythm. In short, it's all useful. If you're enjoying yourself, there's no problem. Being verbose does not mean being slow. Many parts like the previous ones are unnecessary nonsense and can be optimized. If you start slowly, you can keep up with the rhythm of the Lord of Mysteries. If you want more text, you can check out the Monogatari series, both of which do a good job in this regard.

I have my favorite Luno, but it's a pity that I don't have Lumi, who I love even more. I've finished reading the latest one, but it's a pity that I don't have Lumi. I'm a little hesitant to follow it.

sakura is the best

I just read this book and read in the comments section that the author said that there were too many love lines in the end but not all of them? The author had better think about it. If the female character does not accept the love line, it is best not to describe too much about the relationship with the protagonist, otherwise she will 100% get scolded. This is very discouraging.

1: Oh my God, this writing is so awesome. Not like a new author at all. For other novels, I read the first few chapters and decide whether to continue reading based on the plot. I just finished reading the first few pages of this novel and I was sure that I would continue to read it. I was completely attracted by the hard power 2: This novel allocates part of the space to other supporting characters or highlights them, such as the background stories of some NPCs (this is indeed too long), and the cooperation with other characters when slaying dragons. This results in the plot sometimes taking away from the protagonist. 3: In the dialogue at the beginning of the novel, the author slightly revealed his "original" world view, but I didn't feel much about it at the time. But in the latest plot, two important characters have an interaction that I didn't expect at all, and it will undoubtedly have a profound impact on the future. After seeing this, I intuitively felt that the author would definitely make drastic changes to the plot development of the original work. This kind of Dragon Clan fanfic that focuses on original plots is very rare (not having money to go to college is one, and the plot I just mentioned really gave me a sense of déjà vu of going to college). 4: Personal opinion: There are few but fine characters who hope to have a double-arrow male-female love relationship with the male protagonist. Rather than "accept one → hide → move on to the next plot → accept the second one", I prefer emotional dramas that can keep shining. 5: The author has strong ability to expand and write. There is a small copy in the original work that has been transformed so that his father can't even recognize it 6: The biggest shortcoming is that there are too few clearly written out and not enough.

After reading the chapter, I am very curious as to why the author thinks that having sex and kissing will ruin the image of some heroines? Is it too enthusiastic? I have read a lot of Qidian Dragon fandoms, both good and bad in writing, and there are also plots involving kissing and sex. I never felt it was out of the ordinary. Instead, I felt that it was a natural emotional sublimation, and another concept of the growth of a boy into a man. So is it convenient for the author to share your opinion?😊

I continued reading after seeing the author's reply that there were only two chapters for my uncle and aunt. The author is very good at writing about emotions and his writing style is also good. Please continue writing.

It should be considered summer vacation now🤭😏

When are you going to rewrite it? Waiting for you author.

I have collected it a long time ago. I didn't watch it until Xiami wasn't the heroine. I picked it up today and watched it for a while. It's really good. So is there a heroine behind Xiami?

It's a pity that it ended so soon. It's better than the newly opened one.

I can't stand it anymore, why can't I play in the game?

A different style from the old thief, the writing is very good, but I am very dissatisfied with the handling of my uncle's family, very, very dissatisfied. Are you still so cowardly after being reborn? Do you have the courage to stand up to Zhao but not the courage to fuck your aunt? Don't you find this family disgusting? I'm spending your money and scolding you, but after you move out, why don't you give your money back? Harry lives in the attic, but his family is harassed by wizards every day, and his parents don't send money to the family.

Is there any Lu Chu or CP 🤭

I suggest you continue writing. The writing style and some designs are good, but the structure is suggested to be more compact. Set up a framework of how many chapters to finish and which part of the story to avoid being lengthy.

Brother, please pick up your keyboard ⌨️, don't worry too much, continue writing for me according to the original outline, and take time to write something every day. You haven't written for a long time, and the production team is not that slow. If you don't take action, you will forget your original intention. Remember, you are here to fill the regrets and complete the character and story. If you don't update, I will send you a razor blade 🙂

This is the shortest novel I have ever read (I usually read over 1 million words)