Douluo: All Phenomena Are Borrowed from the Law, and the Talismans Reach the Sky.

Imprisoning a child can figure it out.

If the author wants the protagonist to stand up for ordinary people in this world like Gao Haoguang, then it is best for the protagonist to see it like Gao Haoguang, and only after experiencing it will he have the idea of ​​standing up for ordinary people, so that it is not out of the ordinary.

Author: You don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, do you?

But in Sun and Moon Tongcuo, the most lethal ones are usually magic weapons and dharma bodies. If they hadn't been developed, their combat effectiveness would be at least 80% less than that of Sun and Moon.

If the main plot is just about Tangshan, it would be too simple and no different from other fan stories. When I watch Sun and Moon, I like Xiao Gao not mainly because of his strength, but mainly because of his charisma, kindness but not brainlessness, advocating science, and caring for ordinary people. The protagonist has to change something when he comes to this shit-like world that is forgotten. The feudal rule of the Douluo Three Kingdoms, the eternal lineage of the nobles (not an exaggerated description in reality, but a sad reality), the exploitation and oppression of the feudal dynasty, and the evil soul master slaughtering the city to refine the soul. , The Tang Sect that was later resurrected by Shrek was a disgusting arms dealer. The glory of scientific and technological civilization in the sun and moon would only shine on the "noble soul masters". The big bang evil soul master created by Huo Yuhao could not eat it and walked away (I said Packing), detonating conflicts among the four kingdoms. Orange, this heaven-defying little fairy, was also a crazy person who came to power to inherit Xu Tianran's legacy, and then detonated conflicts between humans and beasts. The Beast God Emperor Tian launched a beast tide. These dead people are ordinary people. The powerful soul master: I'm going to fight the Beast God? Stop making trouble, the suffering people, let the beasts vent for a while before we come out, it will not make us more indispensable. In summary, the most desperate era for ordinary people in Douluo 3 is still the era of Douluo 2. The protagonist who has gone through compulsory education cannot bully the weak, enrich his own pockets, or become a god to fool all living beings and herd lambs, right?

The protagonist should be able to awaken another life. After all, pre-acquisition is a system reward. Since it is cheating, it is better to make it bigger.

The writing is okay, and there are no big problems with the logic. Although there are some minor flaws, the plot is a bit bland. After all, the protagonist's strength is too high for a freshman.

Regarding the setting of Sun and Moon's natal magical powers, in addition to their talent, they also need to plant the seeds of their natal magical powers in childhood. As the village chief goes through life, he will move towards this goal and water it so that the magical powers can grow. Datou planted the seeds of his destiny in his father's explanation of the past story of the Penglai leader. Dashen, on the other hand, planted the seeds of the 1-inch family when he returned to the broken house where he played with the street beggars and couldn't see their people. Haoguang only planted the desire to predict the future because of Bai Xiaoxiao's death, which was watered and perfected with unwillingness and anger along with the experiences in the story. The seeds of supernatural power will grow into something different if they are watered differently than when they are comprehended.

By the way, when will I be able to practice the great magical powers and talismans in the original work of Sun and Moon Tongcuo? Especially the high-light-consuming White Moonlight-Sanwang Sword formation talisman. It is really cool. It can fight, defend, and carry people. It can explode alone and attack in groups. It is really too comprehensive 😁

There may be some flaws in the book at the beginning, but they will be gradually improved in the future. There are also some things that have been changed about the protagonist forgetting his roots. The protagonist currently only enjoys the separate dormitory and inner courtyard food in Shrek Academy, and the gold soul coins are cancelled, otherwise it will really feel like a supercilious wolf. The author is already trying his best to improve it. If you are not satisfied with anything, you can mention it and the author will try to make changes without affecting the main line. Finally, as to why Wang Dong is hostile to the protagonist, in fact, it was because of jealousy at the beginning, then he became tough-talking, and then he became really hostile after being beaten up. One more point, why couldn't Munn kill the protagonist in advance? Anyone who has watched Sun and Moon Make the Same Fault knows that the birth of the Dharma Seeker is doomed to the arrival of the Wanye Corpse Immortal. There will be some minor changes in this work. The coming of all karma will bring about the law of cause and effect. Munn is already level 99, so he can vaguely sense an invisible warning, which will be discussed later.

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I suggest the author take a look. Another one. A novel about the Three True Methods of Douluo. That one is a little better than yours, you can read it. Learn to learn.