Extradimensional Cage

As the title says, there are more than 140 days left for the college entrance examination, and the Internet is disconnected. Otherwise, I won't even be able to get 211. This is my last inventory before the college entrance examination. Please protect me from all book friends 🙏🙏🙏

It is a very interesting book, with a dungeon and a main line. The protagonist enters the extraordinary game due to a terminal illness. The first dungeon is a pirate-type dungeon. The dungeon is revealed from beginning to end and is relatively complete. The protagonist's character is still quite interesting, with a bit of dry humor. The author's writing is very aesthetically pleasing, and the writing looks very comfortable and tasteful.

After reading two volumes, I would like to give you a very subjective feedback on my reading experience. The beginning of the first volume is very attractive to me. When I read the first copy, I was a little surprised. I felt that the writing was very good. The images, character movements, camera language, etc. In the author's writing were very good. When reading, it felt like watching a movie. In short, it was easy to immerse myself in it, and the atmosphere and sense of immersion were full. In the first copy, the system has a strong sense of presence, the protagonist has gained a lot, and the data values ​​are also written in a comprehensive manner, which is very interesting and refreshing. My goldfish brain doesn't remember it very well. Anyway, in the first volume, I felt that some of the item annotations were very interesting. - After the first dungeon ended, it took more than ten chapters before the first dungeon was downloaded. The author introduces some things in reality and reveals part of the reality. What kind of reality involves the game. But as a reader, I personally feel that there is no need to reveal this part so early. Only when readers are very attached to the copy and the protagonist will they become strongly curious about the reality of the protagonist, and will they want to know the reason for all this? Having just finished reading the first copy, I personally want to see the next copy sooner. I want to know what the style of the next copy is? What worldview? Will it be more interesting than the first copy? As a result, the transition chapter is very long, and a new copy has not been released for a long time. At that time, I hadn't even tied it yet, so I watched it in one go, and I already felt that the transition chapter was too long_(:з∠)_... I can transition and take a break, but I hope it won't take too long. - Then we arrived at the second copy. The advantage is that the setting of the second copy is not too bad and has new ideas. But I don't know why, but the sense of immersion in the second copy was much worse. In the early stage, I was very curious about its world view, but as I watched it, it gradually started to feel boring. And I don't know if it's because I tied the game and I wasn't too invested in watching the updates every day, so I didn't have much memory for the plot. And this dungeon seems to have a much weaker sense of system presence, with not many interesting settings and text explanations like Volume 1. Or maybe I'm out of touch with the novelty? ? It should be noted that this does not mean that I want to read a large volume full of system explanations. It is just that when I was in Volume 1, I was really attracted to the system and found many of the explanations very interesting. In short, I finished the second volume in a daze, leaving nothing in my mind after reading it. So much so that in the second volume, I couldn't appreciate the author's writing and picture QAQ as carefully as I did in the first volume... By the end of the period, my mentality had changed - I should end this copy as soon as possible, I want to read the next copy. I hope the next copy will be more interesting. The expectations for this article are still very high! - Finally, I would like to take the liberty of commenting on the author himself. The author's advantages: good attitude. Author's shortcomings: Very good attitude. Looking through the comments, the author often replies to comments with a very good attitude. He posts the QAQ expression every day to be cute. But the author often admits that there are problems with his writing when responding to comments. I personally don't like this very much. It's good for the author to be modest, but don't say there are problems with what you wrote in the comment area. You must know that most readers are the silent majority. They may not originally think there is a problem with what you wrote, but you yourself jumped out and said that there was a problem with what you wrote. When readers look at it, they will think, ah! It is indeed poorly written and immature. If you feel there is a problem with your writing, then revise it and try to improve it later, instead of replying to the reader in the comment area and saying, "Yes, you are right, QAQ does have this problem." If you do this too many times, it will inevitably make the reader feel that the money they spent is not worth it. For example, in places outside the country, some authors will classify the works in their columns. Sometimes, after reading an article, the article may be flawed, but readers like it very much and are willing to tolerate it. As a result, the author turned around and put the article into the category of "black history" and regarded his work as "black history". Then wouldn't the readers who spent money to follow it seriously become clowns? ? Why should readers pay for a dark history that the author himself despises? After so much verbosity, I just hope that the author will be more confident, work hard to improve if there are problems, strive for better, and don't overly acknowledge his own shortcomings in the comments. Even if the reader is right, you just need to understand. And there is definitely a difference between following a serial and reading it in one go. Maybe readers who come later won't think there's anything wrong with you if they read it all in one go. - - The above, I hope the author will continue to work hard and get better and better~! Looking forward to the next copy!

I added it to my bookshelf a while ago and haven't read it yet. I started reading it yesterday and stayed up all night to finish it now. Overall, I give Liancao+. The author's level is quite good, especially for readers who like the fighting style of "Starting from the Bird" and the sense of suspense and reversal of "I'm a Superpower Anyway". According to my personal reading experience, the core plot of this book should be that the protagonist Suo San kills various mysterious monsters, so the suspense in the book is more of a sense of suspense, and the part of solving the mystery mainly relies on violence. But at the end of each volume, the author will give a review and point out the normal clearance process. I have to say that this design is very good. There is a battle of wits part in this book, but after looking at the two scripts, the battle of wits mainly focuses on the struggle between people. This kind of battle of wits contains fewer breakdowns and is more of a confrontation of social experience. I personally feel that it is relatively realistic. For example, in the first script, the game between the protagonist and the monster was reversed three times, which can be said to be quite exciting. Finally, I would like to sharply comment on the author's own shortcomings. The author likes to apologize too much. I am really worried that the author will bias the outrageous comments. After all, there are not many readers who cause the book to collapse due to blind instructions. I hope the author will pay more attention and stick to his own ideas. Overall Review: Liangcao+ August 20, 2025

As for the little script about the liar, I started to wonder what the author wanted to do with Bai Xian. At first, he seemed to be a very smart and capable person, but then in the few chapters about the liar, he suddenly turned into a careless and brainless person. Especially her attitude towards the Prophet Club. She was very cautious in the beginning. She was setting up a government agency, and she was dragging pig feet into the department to help out. However, it was solved after a few chapters. Do you have any doubts about being able to do it so easily? I just can't stand it anymore. There may be foreshadowing or supplements later, but for me personally, I have no patience. The front of the book is really beautiful, and the writing and settings are pretty good. That's why I don't want to complain. Personally, that's it for my personal opinion.

I read the author's last book, The Blue Scepter, a while ago, and I felt it was a pity. The writing and plot were still very good, but the protagonist group experienced a few major events before it ended hastily (I haven't seen the big game version updates that the author drew at the beginning). Zhanlan's three heroines all have distinctive personalities, a yandere M-type spirit-binding nun, a soft-spoken and soft-hearted charming elf ranger, and a righteous and resourceful eldest princess () are all very good. What I felt was a pity in the previous book was that the main character's panel data was written very sparsely, and after the subsequent upgrade, I felt that the combat power increase curve collapsed immediately after the upgrade. I hope the author can provide a complete panel data after a major upgrade. Another pity is that the previous book still felt that there were too few daily scenes, and the plot was still too tight. It might be more pleasant to add some daily scenes of the male and female protagonists between scenes.

To be honest, the book is a good book and basically meets my reading standards. The main question now is whether the author is a trumpet. It looks like a trumpet, but the book review is overly active and it seems like a new author. Except for "Gou Becomes a Talent in the World of the First Saint", I have not read the whole book for a long time. If the author hopes that more authors will read it later, I now have seven monthly tickets. I hope the author will answer whether he is a trumpet or whether he will return to the pigeon. If he is a pigeon, he will state it in advance, otherwise the information will be easily leaked 🙂

Let me talk about the conclusion first. The level of the second copy of Qiqiu City is still quite good, especially the friendly characters are designed very well. I personally feel that it is an improvement compared to the sea battle royale volume. In addition, the combat in the entire dungeon is really cool to write, especially the fire protection and explosions. It has a very, very special sense of coolness, a kind of lawless fun. Finally, the twist at the end of this dungeon is still wonderful, especially the explanation of the subsequent fate of several characters has an epic feel. The last time I had this feeling was while watching The Amber Sword. So I think Qiqiu City is not so much an investigation adventure, but more like an Amber style combat experience. But the final twist gave the story a bit of a tea-leaf "Demon Conquering Expert" flavor, which is pretty good. I really like the second dungeon. I think it's even better than the first one. The spirit of burning everything down is really special. I not only remembered the sentence in the introduction of Gu Huoniao, "The body is like a feather, the life is like a weed." It's such a strong feeling. I'm not very good at speaking, but it's just fun to watch anyway.

The writing is good, but can the content be streamlined? The latest chapters have a little less information 🙂

I have read books for so many years, and I still have to sigh after seeing this one. It is the first time I have seen the author commenting and adding settings all the time.

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As the title says, based on everyone's voting results, here are the relevant references 😭😭 I am citing it second-hand, and the first-hand information is the Momo HEMA series of up "Japan Jie Luo Ming" on the b station, and the translation of "The art of longsword combat". About Ting Jin: The general idea of ​​this passage is that when the two sides exchange swords, it is extremely important to sense the changes in the strength of the sword blade. Both parties can use the sword as an intermediary to sense each other and judge their strength. Technically speaking: Technically speaking, a weak person can judge the opponent's sword path after hearing the strength, so as to adopt the correct strategy and win. This involves the sword-wrapping technique: Through sword-wrapping, you can gain a relatively advantageous tactical position, gain the initiative, and launch an effective attack. To sum up, it can be concluded that Tingjin is an important part of Meyer's swordsmanship system. To a certain extent, this proves that all kinds of practical martial arts are common and reflects a sense of convergent evolution. 🙂🙂🙂

Let's talk about the conclusion first: This book is a kind of infinite flow, and it is similar to Thriller Paradise, and the beginning is also similar. The protagonist goes to the game world that looks real through the game warehouse to complete the dungeon. However, the game mode is not the system-added point type, but the running group type. In my personal opinion, it is good-looking. If you are not sure whether you want to read it, I recommend reading the first copy before talking about it Then I will talk about my feelings in detail. It is really cool. It reminds me of the days when I chased Thriller Park. The protagonist of this book is funny or not, and the author makes the story very ghostly through various descriptions. Mo, the reversal and emotional value at the end of the first copy are very sufficient, and the foreshadowing at the end is also exciting. The writing is excellent, and the author will often answer questions and solve doubts about this chapter in the comment area, which is very interactive Okay, now that I have finished talking about the good aspects, I will talk about the bad ones There are two questions ① Playing jokes The author used a lot of jokes during the creative process, and these jokes are very picky for readers... Well, let me tell you straight, these memes are a bit niche. For example: "A person goes crazy and suddenly gets better later." This is "temporary madness" in the team-running game, but people who don't understand have no idea why this character goes crazy and gets better again For example: the last big plot, if I hadn't read the explanation in this chapter, I would have no idea what the name means, how creepy it is (I won't describe it in detail here to avoid spoilers ) For example:... In the face of readers who have raised these questions, the author is very considerate in explaining them in this chapter, but there is one thing to say, some readers really don't like this ②Take the lead in spoilers I said above that the author will thoughtfully explain to readers some places that readers do not understand, but this creates a problem Some readers who like this book will imitate the author's behavior and "answer questions" for book friends who can't understand It is said to be answering questions, but in the end, it is a spoiler I saw a reader writing down his guess and reasoning about the plot in the middle of the copy, and then a reader who had watched the subsequent plot jumped out and replied directly to " You're wrong, what is this, what is here, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is this, what is foreshadowing."

Will there be a female protagonist? To be honest, I still quite like the yandere female priest from the previous book. After all, being an undead knight is indeed a bit embarrassing 😰

This book is a rare masterpiece of unlimited flow in recent years. After reading the first chapter, the author's creativity and writing style are remarkable, but don't pay too much attention to the readers' opinions, stick to your own outline, and at most modify some inappropriate details.

What kind of crap book actually starts charging after it is put on the shelf? It's okay not to read the book written by an author with academic misconduct like you, just throw it out of the bookshelf and never see it again!

After reading about the desert copy settlement, according to my personal experience, this book is about 4000-7000 orders from the main site, depending on the author's update volume. 4000 Per day means 4000 order levels, and 8000+ per day means 7000 order levels. If you want to reach 10,000 orders, based on the current level, you need 15000 per day and smooth communication with the editor to have a chance. The advantage is that the logic of the story is not broken, and there are occasional highlights. The writing style, visual sense, and language readability are good. Speaking in human terms means that the basic skills of story writing are good. And the subject matter is not super cold channel, the quality is well deserved. The shortcomings are that the story structure and narrative ability are insufficient, the character creation is not interesting, and the writing ideas are very limited. Without a breakthrough, it would be difficult to reach 10,000 bookings, or to have a huge increase after changing themes/updates (these are also breakthroughs). By the way, let's talk about some specific improvement methods. Because everyone's writing style is different, I will talk about some general ones. First, next, we should refer less to Gu Huo Bird and Decadent Dragon, and Carvin can read more about Thriller Paradise, the three evolutions of Fierce Players and Sweeping Fire. After reading it, I feel that I am over-referring to Gu Huoniao. Gu Huoniao is very well written but the structure in Infinite Stream is considered poor. The inability to write is also due to the overall structure. Infinite Stream, which can be written smoothly and comfortably, is closer to the player's ferocious and overwhelming structure. In Thriller Paradise, don't look at the overall structure, but focus on how the narrative/story unit is handled. Once you understand it thoroughly, you can write short and medium stories. The current structure of this book is a short novel, followed by a bit of reality, followed by a medium novel, followed by reality, and then a large novel. The reader feels very suffocated. A very important aspect of Infinite Streaming is to grasp the rhythm and allow readers to change their minds and rest. Many short and medium stories do not serve to reveal the world view or upgrade the protagonist. They mainly focus on writing a clever story to allow readers to take a break from the struggle of the fate line and show off their skills/practice. After changing the brain, it will be more enjoyable and more layered to read the protagonist's upgrade/advancement story reveal. The current realistic plots do not have such an effect. Instead of big upgrades in the script and small upgrades in reality, it is easy to get tired of the upgrade drive driven by pure income and revealing the world view. So you can consider writing a short script about the secrets of peers, or a small script related to White Line Renee, and consider using clues/secrets/production props/non-intuitive combat power superposition as rewards. Another serious problem in the second third is the derailment of the system. In the early stage, it was a battle of specialization and props. After that, knowledge became a battle of information warfare and resources. Whether it was lifespan, knowledge or secret techniques, the focus of the version was on operation and sequential moves. The protagonist's card was not suitable for the version. The system collapsed because the protagonist's kicking style in the early and mid-term was completely incompatible with the secret art knowledge system. There were not many operational methods, and at the same time, there was no reasonable and legal way to take advantage of kicking. Most of the advantages were immediately lost. It's just that the master swordsmanship and the inability to lose san appear very primitive in the knowledge version, just like other occult scholars who have revolutionized their playing styles and the protagonist has not caught up with the version. If you put the protagonist into a competitive version that is not naturally suitable for you and want to continue to maintain his performance and the previous style of the entire book, it will definitely collapse. If you handle it well, it will be a small collapse. This needs to be dealt with earlier. Of course, I feel that this problem should be fixed recently. After adding negation, the protagonist can finally keep up with the arcane play style. Otherwise, it will be like the back of Desert, where the protagonist is lagging behind in play style but the numerical mechanism can penetrate everything, which will be extra tiring to read. But the current repairs can only make up for it, and negation can only prevent being locked, and swordsmanship and dodge can solve the problem of being attacked, but the fundamental problem is that the protagonist's intelligence battle has not been added too much. It is easy to find other people's bodies or be consumed by remote attacks. Even if the protagonist's sword life usage rate is high, this kind of scene is always passive, so the plot must be arranged like a desert to allow the protagonist to locate the body. This unnaturalness is not good. Even if the plot is handled naturally, why bother to think about it every time? In addition, the protagonist's movement ability and various numerical/skill performance are somewhat limited or have to be limited by the plot. This also harms the stability of the system and does not have a clear anchor. For example, at the beginning of the desert, you have to temporarily avoid the red snake because of the sandstorm. There is instability in the ability and value of the black flame wave. Fire control and black fire cannot expect it to be particularly powerful when it is particularly strong. If you need to enter the ruins, you must temporarily avoid the edge of the sandstorm. The same goes for the abilities of flesh and blood regeneration. , When I read it, did I feel that the sandstorm was so super model? A slightly better way of writing it is to directly add negative effects to the information panel to let the protagonist know that it is a sandstorm (the heart of the Zodiac) that is more mysterious than himself - affecting regeneration and various abilities, naturally leading to the inability to fight against the home red snake and running away. Other dungeons have similar situations to some extent. For example, it appears many times that we need vehicles, and companions may need it. But in terms of actual values ​​and performance, the protagonist should be able to carry Lu Bu except being unable to fly. In other words, this book still maintains that the physical fitness of the investigators as mentioned above is still within the range of ordinary people. That is not right. After all, the combat performance is too exaggerated... In short, it should not be difficult to clarify these. (Just rank the knowledge/mystery levels.) In principle, these anchoring issues should be avoided as much as possible.

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The new video of Ender Dahei is really well done, and I feel like it can attract a lot of readers.

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After reading the chapters before they were released, they are generally good. The slight flaw is that the male protagonists in both copies are angry that unfamiliar people are hurt, and they are not necessarily good people.

No, I've ordered them all. If you give me the key, I'll give you a box 🙂

My personal score is 80-85. It is a masterpiece that I accidentally found in the book shortage. I have read about 70 chapters in one go. The battles are exciting and the rhythm is reasonable. I like this kind of protagonist who is both crazy and calm, and has some principles. The fighting style is gun + sword + various subtitles. Time + Constant Virtue, mixed with the taste of Yharnan Outlander and the Second Master of Dark Dungeon, as long as I am not crazy, others will be crazy, kill, kill, kill, flesh and blood will rise again 😆 Hurry up and update, I am optimistic about you 😃

The level is very high, and it is a genre that suits my taste. It is very similar to the Forbidden Nightmare book from years ago. It has a future world, unlimited game flow, dual lines of reality and dungeons, "skills" obtained by killing enemies, exchange for dungeon items, etc. It's a pity that this book is too eunuch🙄. Because the two books are so similar, I can only express my feelings. In terms of perception, the character portrayal in this book is much better, especially the supporting characters. But the combat description is not good enough, and some of the "talking" plots are not excellent. Maybe some people like this. In terms of character upgrading, it is more complicated than Forbidden Nightmare, and the upgrading experience is not as satisfying. Finally, there is the story level of the dungeon. The map of the dungeon of Forbidden Nightmare is larger and not detailed enough, while this book currently only has one dungeon, with a small map and more detailed character stories. The biggest hope is not to have eunuchs, everything else is easy to say

The previous copies were well written, but the copy of the ID card was almost finished.

The desert dungeon really stinks. To be honest, it was quite interesting before the decisive battle. The decisive battle simply turned into a battle of lifespans. Gao Dimension couldn't write it, so it was forgiven. The subsequent twist of "Tiantian A Blood" is because I haven't seen the novel ten years ago and it is intended to be a classic remake. There is also the inexplicable old priest. There is no background to pave the way, and there is no motive to pave the way. He inexplicably seizes the fruits of victory. The later supplements are also said to be covered in the future (unfortunately) It's just to make up for it, the only comment is "I hate apologizing afterward"), maybe your correction is reasonable, but the perception is really bad, and Bai Xian is killed inexplicably, and there is not much foreshadowing. Everything is inexplicable. The protagonist's extraordinary intelligence feels like it has been eaten. Compared with Bai Xian, it is simply not stupid. To be honest, I can't write about intelligence without writing (including where the manpower gathered during the economic crisis in the Golden City was also pointed out by book friends as inappropriate). Going back to the title, if you already know that the writing is terrible, there is no need to present the larger ones at the end in detail. If you don't want to modify the detailed outline, then you can just change the detailed outline and put the current summary in miniature and skip the big ones instead of forcibly presenting it to others. After all, it is for the readers. Finally, I hope the author will think twice. It's good to try writing methods, but you can try it in the early climax and interlude of the dungeon. It would be terrible to try too many at once and fail. If you fail everything you try, I hope the author will continue to make progress in the structure arrangement.

With this amount of updates, everyone knows 100% that it is purely hand-rubbed.