
Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Picked up a Fulilian
龙族:路明非捡到一只芙莉莲
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- Completed
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- 2.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Chapter 697 I'm not sure, come on I like to watch it
This Lu Mingfei is fundamentally different from the original Lu Mingfei, which means that his personality is not as bad as before, which is good.
It is different from other Lu Mingfei who returned from xx. Some of the plots have been changed. At present, it seems that the look and feel is okay, but the unique detail changes give a different feeling.
A little suggestion
1. The integration of the dragon world and other worlds is already a very common theme among dragon fans, but in this book, characters from other worlds travel to the dragon world, so there must be a need to balance combat power. In this fanfic, Fulian's combat power is weakened due to the scarcity of magic in the dragon world. However, the foundation of the magical Lao Den still lies in her erudition. If Lao Den's erudition is not brought to the fore, readers will be disappointed and the reading experience will be poor. 2. A large number of readers have read the anime Frilian and the original comic Frilian. As long as you read the original work carefully, you will understand that when the gap between the two sides is not particularly large, the battles in the world of Frilian are more focused on ability restraint and analysis of the opponent's ability to find the opponent's weaknesses and kill the opponent. Then I suggest that the author be more detailed when describing the battle scenes. The author of the original comic book by Fulian was not good at drawing battle scenes, so he focused more on the expression of psychological activities and battle details. 3. Lu Mingfei is a weak child, and readers hope to see Lu Mingfei's growth. Because of his extreme low self-esteem, he likes to use bad words to cover up his cowardice and incompetence. Now that Lao Deng Fulilian has joined, can you describe some of Fulilian's teachings and help to Lu Mingfei in daily life?
Florian
Fufu X3
Time Zero is a bit strong, and Xiao Luzi is probably the third person with this word spirit now. Angers, of the Gattuso family, himself.
つ♡⊂Lu Mingfei has added another member to the universe, come on
It's okay. Lu Mingfei has changed. He's not as aggrieved as before.
It's so beautifully written, I love reading it. I hope to write 1 million words. 😌
The writing style is so smooth, I hope everyone has a happy ending
Please keep writing it down.
Come and taste it
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Dear author, dear book friends, is there any emotional line in this book?
The author does not necessarily have to be a dragon. If he writes his own book in the future and wants to take the work to a higher level, it is best not to let readers see through a character. He must leave part of the suspense on the character. When writing a protagonist, he must leave enough contradictions. Of course, you don't have to think so much when writing a pure and refreshing novel. But now, if you want to stand out in the Internet literary circle, you have to be unconventional. It is difficult for a pure and refreshing novel to break through. The more problems a novel has, the fewer problems it has! Creating more conflict points or appropriate bloody scenes can add more vitality to the work!
Ndy! ! Author! Updated out~!