Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei in Hui Li Yi

I want to see Jiangnan and Herzog kissing each other

Terrible guy, you are really terrible. One update a day is enough for anyone to read. Hurry up and put ten updates a day on the shelves.

This is my first time writing a book. I won't tell you if I can't write well, so please bear with me. I just need to practice more. If you can give me more suggestions, I will include them in the article if they are suitable. There is an outline. I have also thought of a more suitable relationship between the Black King, Lu Mingfei, and Lu Mingze. The detailed outline will probably end at the end of Dawn of Fire, and then re-read Dragon II.

Bro's writing is very good. I will sort out my own opinions on the emotional lines of the Dragon Clan as a reference for the author First of all, Caesar and Nono I think Caesar cannot tie Nono. The relationship between the two people has never been equal. For Nono, Caesar is just in love. They did the right thing at the right time, so they got together in a daze. Nono's feelings need to be divided into two motives, one is the need to rely on, the other is the need to be relied on, so in Long Si Long Wu Jiangnan, a lot of psychological activities about Nono's feelings for the figure under the Three Gorges were paved. Lu Mingfei and Caesar respectively satisfied Nono's two needs for love in the first three films, so Nono has actually been wandering between the two. This aspect is also the reason why Nono is not accepted by netizens now. Dragon Four mentioned that Nono took the initiative to break off contact with Lu Mingfei because Lu Mingfei's growth gradually satisfied her two needs for love at the same time. Therefore, it was difficult for her to face Lu Mingfei calmly when she was already engaged to Caesar. The words "It turns out to be you" are actually a sign, which means that Nono has actually completely fallen in love with Lu Mingfei. Let's talk about Caesar. For Caesar, Nono is a book that he can never finish. This actually shows the asymmetry of the feelings between the two parties. For Nono, Caesar is very easy to understand. This is also an important reason why I think Caesar cannot tie Nono. As a reference, I think that no matter how the relationship between the two is arranged in the future, the relationship between the two needs to be resolved as I mentioned above. These contradictions The following are Su Qian, Xia Mi, and Chu Zihang Su Qian must like Chu Zihang, Xia Mi must also like Chu Zihang, Chu Zihang must also like Xia Mi, but Chu Zihang's feelings for Su Xi are actually very subtle. In my words, Chu Zihang is in love with Xia Mi while living with Su Xi. In the original work, from all aspects, the tsundere and the tough-talking king actually started to pay attention to Chu Zihang very early. Their bond is far more than what is shown on the surface in Long Erzhong. Therefore, I have always thought that bringing Lu Mingfei and Xia Mi together in fan fiction is nonsense, especially if the timeline has already progressed to the point when Lu Mingfei is about to go to college. The conflict between Chu Zihang and Xia Mi actually focuses on the position of the human and the dragon. Therefore, if you want to solve the problem of this pair, you must first solve the problem of the coexistence of the human and the dragon. This is very important and will even affect the main plot of the entire book. Regarding Su Qian and Chu Zihang, the two are each other's sword and scabbard. Su Qian's relationship in the original work In fact, there are not many scenes, at least not as the main character, so in fact, Su Qian's character portrayal has a lot of room for manipulation among the fans Then there are Lu Mingfei, Eli Yi, and Ling Cong Long Wu's performance, Ling did not hesitate to conflict with Lu Mingze for Lu Mingfei, which shows that Ling likes Lu Mingfei's and Zero's scenes are mainly concentrated in Dragon Four and Dragon Five, but because they appear much more often than Susie and the character is relatively stable, there is not a lot of room for manipulation. When handling the plot of this character, one should pay attention to the relationship between Lu Mingze and Lu Mingfei. I personally support the trinity hypothesis. Of course, if Of course it's good for bro to have other ideas, but if it's not the Trinity hypothesis, then only the "Supreme" split can explain Zero's attitude towards Lu Mingfei. Therefore, this emotional line also directly affects the main line. The author must carefully handle the relationship between Lu Mingfei and Zero. As for Lu Mingfei's attitude towards Zero, that is It depends on how the author writes it. Lu Mingfei is a child who lacks love. Whoever gives him one love will give ten in return; the following is Lu Mingfei and Eli Yi. Whether Lu Mingfei likes Eli Yi or not is hard to say, but the figure of Nono is still too heavy in his heart. This is the true essence of the tragedy that happened to Long San on Eli Yi. For qualitative reasons, Jiangnan set up the character of Eri Yi as a consumable. He wanted to use Eri Yi's death to promote Lu Mingfei's growth in Long Si. Old Tang in Long One and Xia Mi in Long Two were both dragon kings. Cassel taught that they were born to be opposed to humans, so even if Lu Mingfei killed them, It's painful, and the effect it can have on promoting growth is also very limited, but Eriki is different. She completely trusts Sakura. It can be said that except for those things on the Σ layer, Lu Mingfei is the world for Eriki, but because it is a consumable, Jiangnan's portrayal of Eriki is actually a bit flat. If you want to It is a very important step to promote the process of Aloe Vera and make Eri Yi's image three-dimensional. Considering the completeness of the White King storyline, Eri Yi's advancement of the subsequent main plot must focus on her resemblance to Chen Motong. Otherwise, it will basically become a circle in the follow-up. The gang does not want Eri Yi to die. I hope that I will not be involved in the follow-up main line at all in the future. The above is the emotional line of the protagonist series. Next, I will talk about other characters Schneider, Finn Dog and EVA The three underlying instructions of EVA about Lu Mingfei are huge foreshadowings and must be dealt with. , Regarding other questions about these three people, these three people are the only three and a half people left after the Ice Sea Incident. Schneider is almost a gloomy version of Angers, Finn Dog is a decadent version of Caesar or Chu Tianjiao, EVA has become a cyber soul, not to mention, but the layout of the three people involved in the "Prince" and the "Dark Side Monarch" must be included by the author. Write this aspect, otherwise it will be difficult for this dragon fandom to be complete Ange and Flamel Flamel is an old bastard. No matter what scenes are added to him later or what other characters are given to him, this old pervert and old drunkard must be involved in more so-called "dark side monarch" incidents, because he He is the greatest alchemist master of mankind. This can represent many things and must not be forgotten. As for Ange, I believe he has compassion for Lu Mingfei. The charm of this old man as a revengeful male god is that he not only wants to slay dragons, but also kill anyone who wants to become a new dragon. One person has suppressed all mixed races for more than a hundred years. At the same time, he is also an old man who has lived on hatred for more than 130 years, so you can think that he has a label similar to the White Devil, but it is more than that. It seems that Cassel is being tricked by the school board, the dark side monarch, and the Holy Palace Medical Association. But the old man Angers definitely has some other information. Cassell is even in Long Yi. Even the Dragon Kings don't know that they are twins, but he must have planned it for Old Tang's death, which involves his deal with Lu Mingze, which is back to the main line, so the character arc of Angers, the old vengeful god, must also be treated with caution Old Tang/Norton, Constantine, Fenrir, Xia Mi/Jörmungandr Purely a child, I tend to think that Old Tang is Norton, and Norton is Old Tang. In the Three Gorges, Norton was released into the sea before being killed by Lu Mingfei. Xia Mi also said that dragons are just like human beings, but they are just newborn children, so the author must grasp the issue of the position of humans and dragons. This is closely related to the main plot, and although the stories of these four dragons are complete There is no foreshadowing, but the understanding of the history of the Dragon Clan and the alchemy of the Fire King brothers will be very important resources I won't talk about the rest of Pompeii and his ilk. To a large extent, Jiangnan's identity on the surface is brought over in a very labeled way The above is purely my humble opinion, I hope it can be a reference for the author.

I updated it by chance, and I was sent to Fujian. This time I was exiled to Lingnan. I might not update it for several days, or I might update a few chapters a day, and that's it. I am still not suitable for writing novels. It's also possible that I won't write it. If I don't write it, I'll lose the outline.

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Each paragraph is so long! And there are some words that shouldn't be on it. I guess some AI was used because there are a lot of words that don't match.

It can be regarded as my own fantasy. I can let the fifth generation appear and fight the Wolf King and Macallan together in the end. As for the fifth generation, Lu Mingfei can also be regarded as a knight. If he is a knight, it will be the world of knights. Brother Xiao Ming can go, or the Black God has exerted his strength🤔🤔🤔

I returned to the company after my business trip, took two days off, and then went to another place. It is said that it is relatively quiet there, and updates will probably be resumed on the 18th.

The 100,000-word contract review has not passed, but the writing is still not good