JOJO: Asian? It's the Black Shadow Corps!

The creativity is very good, but it seems that the strength of the stand-in is too low at present, and it does not mean that it is directly invincible. It is mainly due to the lack of expression and description, and is it really necessary to write the battle in such a jojo-like manner?

Not bad. The ghost army simulated by the protagonist using a double is not a real ghost army, so there is a slight difference in capabilities, which is barely acceptable. But I have already come to see your ghost army. Why don't you quickly find some villains to increase the number? I came to see you fight with your own body. I came to watch you play Legion Crush. There were already dozens of cards, and only three people could be separated.

Kira Yoshikage is not the same person, how could he think the protagonist's hands are beautiful?

It's pretty good to watch, and the protagonist's IQ is good, and it feels like a battle of wits. The only drawback is that the protagonist's combat power is really low. He wakes up at the beginning with a shadow-eating avatar. When this avatar bites a shadow, ordinary people will still feel pain. The protagonist doesn't grow up by attacking innocent people. As a result, he has bitten a policeman and Granny Enya so far, and only took a few bites. None of them died. He has become stronger and can be split into two.

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What's going on in Chapter 4? How could the protagonist think of using verbal threats and smelling sweet things to convince the bribed police officers to listen to him?

To be honest, it's too weak. 1. It can only take small bites. 2. It can't get into other people's shadows. 3. If there is no shadow, it will be ineffective.

It's a bit confusing that the protagonist doesn't go to the gangsters to devour them to increase the ability and number of his stand-ins even though he knows there are enemies. But this can actually be avoided. As long as the author adds a sentence when describing the substitute's ability: Only by devouring the enemy's flesh and blood in a positive (that is, both parties in the battle know each other) and recognized (both sides fight equally, not based on strength and weakness), can one's own substitute ability and number of people be increased. This problem can be solved. If you change the previous text according to this method, the overall reading experience will be much better.

Overall it's okay, but why doesn't the protagonist look for drug dealers to strengthen himself? There are about five Shadow Eaters, and basically the protagonist is invincible in a single fight.

Overall, it was okay, but I felt that the main character wasn't ruthless enough. Currently, the protagonist's Stand can be strengthened by devouring the shadows of others. Everyone is abroad, and it's a different world. Go find gangs, jails, drug dealers. Human traffickers and the like, these people are all scum. Using them to upgrade can be considered a contribution to world peace. Moreover, the protagonist has died twice, so he must have a longer memory and strengthen his strength.

Why not kill the policeman who saw him come back to life?

After Kai Ying appeared on the scene, he became pure water character. Find teammates and follow the plot. Having a few extra teammates is the same as not having any. It's very martial ethics. During the whole fight, the ninja team didn't even take out their knives, they always used baseball bats. Every time, I hit the opponent with a stick, ran away, and the plot started, and the protagonist won the MVP.

No man, I really plan to write a long article about JOJO. The original JOJO is all short stories with a tight plot, which is a bit watered down.

The first dozen or so chapters are awkwardly written, but the rest are okay.

I read about a dozen chapters after it was released. To be honest, it's quite toxic. I feel that the author's protagonist relies on cheats to wander around many times, and in a battle of wits theme, the protagonist doesn't feel that he has any intelligence at all. It doesn't feel like Jojo is just an urban superpower, or the author is not smart enough.

This book is very good, but the combat plot really needs to be polished. This book has three flaws, but so far they can all be resolved. First, there is little correlation between the title of the book and the actual content. The additional problem is that it cannot attract real readers. People who are attracted by the title may be disappointed because of the low connection with demi-humans. Second, the setting is changeable. Granny Enya was bitten on the head, but she survived. The policeman who was bitten on the leg at the beginning was also described as being bitten-like. These two places can be called mainly mental damage, with a small amount of physical damage. But just after being bitten by the shadow in this chapter, the legs can disappear alone. Previously, the whole person would disappear after being completely bitten to death, and the process would only cause certain damage. The settings should be as unified as possible. The third and most serious. Serious laxity of common sense. The protagonist was born when his mother and father were 60 and 63?!?! The charcoal was short-circuited and the flashlight used dry batteries. Lit??? Carbon is very difficult to light bro. I would rather write here and see something like a lighter on the desktop. This common sense question is too vicious. It will seriously damage the look and feel of the book. The setting of this book is very interesting. Come on!

The protagonist seems to have the Shadow Eater ability at the beginning, but I don't see the protagonist developing this ability. Does he have to wait until he is in danger to develop it in battle?

The effect is changed to make people weak until they become comatose or even die, and the shadow will gradually fade, which is more reasonable

It looks good, but I can't figure out why a domestic cat that has been raised for more than 10 years can be so wild and ferocious. After awakening the avatar, he immediately prepares to kill the new pet. The previous foreshadowing is that he is highly intelligent, sensible, and well-behaved, but I can't see it now. And it's a cat, a self-created avatar. It's written so mysteriously, and it's been foreshadowed for so long. It's weird.

Brother, why are your grades so miserable? I obviously look very good. It is necessary to fight wisely and have a system to fight wisely, and it is necessary to be convenient and convenient! There is nothing wrong with the logic, and it doesn't look like some hydrology that can make the world shine!

When the armored shadow came out, it became a mess. The essence was to describe this stand as too strong and too brainless. The only way to continue writing is through intelligence reduction, otherwise the protagonist would have to speed pass.

This book is in the new issue. If you don't read it, it may have to be sent. Readers, please do some reading and collection...

This is simply not enough to watch. I'll add more. It's so good and I love watching it. More and more.

When I met Dio, I felt that the plot was a bit crazy 🙂. I felt that the protagonist was too invincible. In the last chapter, I was still afraid that Dio would be able to overpower him in the next chapter. There are also generals and subordinates of the Black Shadow Corps in the back, who seem to be having fun.