Doomsday: I Build a Moving Castle

With such an awesome engine, if you just build a car, there will be speed bumps everywhere in the end. Do you understand the value of an engine that can carry a building everywhere?

The harem is a bit big 😥 There are only 4 people in the Moving Castle now 3 women 😒 There could have been one more man But he was killed by the plot 🤔 (still a superpower)

There is another question The supporting characters are suspected of having no brains🙂 Were there only three people who survived the armed train at the beginning (two were from the harem and one was a man who was killed by the plot🥵) (referring to those who joined the Moving Castle) Just a few people who dare to rob a moving castle are not superpowers And the protagonist Isn't it set that everything within one kilometer of the castle can be regarded as materials Why not take away the valuable things on the armed train? All you need is a diesel and two harems? ! ?

What are you doing as an editor? Why are the survivors all women? Nowadays, apocalyptic articles are all about women, which can be regarded as a poisonous point, and it also gave my brother a plot that made him speechless =_=

It's a pity that the author has his own unique ideas. Not to mention what use 3,000 horsepower is for this building, the 50-meter material collection range is not used. Running from the gray city to that sister's place is useless to collect some materials for backup. The fifteen rooms on the third floor in the middle are empty. Why don't you use some to reinforce the wall outside the building? Forcibly writing a male supporting character to death in order to open a harem is not to exclude the harem. You write to death a character with powerful powers. At least you have a sufficient motive, right? You can't die just because you want to open a harem. The gas station has to give the supporting characters intelligence. Three people dare to rob a mobile five-story building. Wu Song doesn't have the guts. Diesel can be ignited by bullets, and why are you so obsessed with chainsaws? Four times the strength of a normal person is no more powerful than a chainsaw. You have to be careful when cutting a tree with a chain saw. At best, you are just a building that can travel ten kilometers per hour without any means of protection or attack. For those of you who have just seen the giant whale monster, do you think you are invincible if you have free time to play with speakers and cartoon wallpapers?

Even AI cannot write an article with such a lack of knowledge and logic.

How can I put it this way? I felt awkward reading this book. I was dumbfounded by the fact that you can drive away from a building by installing a diesel engine. If you want to say that your power can make the house float, I won't say anything. But since you need to install an engine to move it, can you think about physics? Let me not talk about how much horsepower you need to drive a house. Can you consider the bearing capacity of the road surface? According to what you wrote, the standard road surface of the highway can bear the weight of a house, right?

I don't collect the metal from the cars along the way. I waste my time collecting it when I need it.

It feels a bit childish, which is stupid, and it is better than playing music in the apocalypse. The author is a bit arrogant. He writes whatever comes to mind without thinking about whether the symbol is illogical. He just wrote it casually like whether a 3000 engine can drive a hotel. If you have no brain, you can take a look.

Shennong: This book has a sense of self-silliness. The level of knowledge accumulation is not enough. It seems simple and naive. From time to time, I will mention the interesting points and abrupt remarks that I think are funny. I will read it in the next book.

This book will not do well, you will know it when you see the harem

Isn't the protagonist able to directly dismantle vehicles and the like within a certain range of the building? Then he can disassemble them while driving and store them, so as not to have to look for them when he needs to carry out modifications and upgrades. Those vehicles on the roadside are all resources. If they are not collected, they will be wasted.

It is recommended that the author check more information when writing. It does not require you to be very professional, but you still need to know the technology of some daily necessities. The protagonist needs a generator, which is not available in the car. And a 3,000-horsepower engine is obviously not enough to drive a building. 300,000 Is about the same.

Author, have you ever built a moving castle? It's so taken for granted!

I have to say that the author is good at screening readers. The readers who can stay after reading the forced plot killing in the first three chapters are the readers who can eat it.

The writing is actually okay, but the author's development of superpowers and the arming of the castle are not very good. It's like a science fiction work in 2025, but it looks like it was in the 1980s.

It's such a pity, such a good idea

The protagonist often forgets about his superpower. Anyone within 3 kilometers can absorb materials. Iron from the car and plastic from the fuel pipe will all work. Why not oil?

Such a good subject matter made me look forward to it, but when I clicked on it I found that Lao Ba was digging out a cesspool. I quietly backed out, hearing that Lao Ba was almost vomiting from his stomach.

When I saw Chapter 200, I recommended one to return to the harem, and then the protagonist was a bit of a virgin. . .

As I read it till now, I feel that the author is a person with his own ideas, and it is not a work written by AI. But the problem is that the title, concept and subsequent content are too different. Most readers are attracted by the Moving Castle, but in fact after Beijing, the main plot and the castle have nothing to do with it, and it has become a traditional doomsday novel. At the same time, the protagonist has been toyed with, and every villain will not be killed cleanly by the protagonist. Path dependence has been formed. If the author still wants to continue writing this book, he may consider returning to the main theme of the moving castle instead of constantly taking risks. The villain should not be permanently unbeatable, as this will only make it more unpleasant for the reader.

After reading Chapter 125, only Han Qinglu ate it, and there were no other supporting female characters. Didn't the author say that he wanted to write about a harem? If you don't eat with the protagonist, can you call it a harem? And the other women have no emotional lines or protagonists at all. The other women can only be called supporting female characters.

The author is so good, Brother Wen's plot is killing me

The creativity is great, but it's a pity that the writing logic is so poor.

I really don't think it's possible to walk upstairs on the street.

So far, there are no poisonous spots, so it's pretty good.

I saw Chapter 18, it's okay, come on

The fuel tank of a whole train car is filled with 900 liters of diesel... The fuel tank of an ordinary SUV is about 55 liters, which means that this whole train is filled with enough oil for 17 SUVs... Pfft~ I'm sorry, I usually don't laugh! By the way, and also, can't the male protagonist copy other people's abilities in his own "territory"? Why couldn't the "Tree Demon"'s superpower be copied? Even when we wanted to attack him the day before, it wasn't mentioned during the discussion? !

To be honest, you might as well let the system give you an anti-gravity system, even if it is only half a meter above the ground. I think it is more reasonable than using a 3,000-horsepower engine to run five stories high! ! ! 🙂