All Heavens: Start by Locking up Mu Nianci

The protagonist is very human

The writing is average and relatively innovative, the protagonist is quite unlikable, the thoughts are confusing and abrupt, and it's abstract enough but to the point of being disgusting. I can't say it's not well written. After all, the protagonist is this character. At the same time, the number of gold finger points is not clear. It can be seen that the author is a novice. This is a hands-on work.

Why is the author silent for me? To popularize the science, the author can analyze the following questions: 1. You are on a male channel 2. Readers need a sense of substitution. Who do you want the male readers to bring in? Do you let them act like a spoiled child? 3. Men rarely have the kind of love for no reason and emotions for no reason. Even if the novel is mindless and cool, the author will arrange a cheat instead of letting the protagonist soar out of thin air. Why? Because of logic, there is cause and effect, and only in this way can there be certainty, so the "cause" foreshadowing must be reasonable and "normal". If you want male readers to be brought into "acting like a baby", then you have to foreshadow why "acting like a baby" happens. "Being coquettish", the reason must be reasonable and legitimate. Just "taking it for granted" will not be recognized by others. In my opinion, acting like a baby is the most outrageous situation. Men are basically not allowed to act like a baby in front of anyone, even in front of their parents. After the age of 18, you are not allowed to act coquettishly. You think that men can "act like a spoiled child". It may come from the Internet, idol dramas, short videos, etc. They are all designed to be filmed for girls. You have been misled.

This protagonist is really unlikable 😅

I rarely complain about the protagonist's name, but I am willing to make an exception for you😒

I was still a little interested at first, but when I saw the introduction that you were in contact with that so-called eldest princess, I was really speechless. So many people like a broken shoe? I really can't understand

What a disgusting pig's feet, what a madman

Martial arts written in a brainless system is also funny

It is rare for the protagonist to be directly renamed Xiao Chu.

Jiuyin and Jiuyang are also awesome when they send Hong Qigong and Guo Jing

Just by looking at the name of the protagonist, you can guess that the author is a novice.

With your character card, I always feel that Mu Nianci will jump out and say, "Do you want to speculate on CP with me?"

The writing is average and I can read it, but the plot in the introduction is a bit hard to explain in one sentence.

​ Can the author write about "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" and "Jiang Ye", especially "The Fighting Swordsman in the Snow" killing Xu Fengnian's whole family is the best. This book is really disgusting. The world is full of dead people just for the sake of a mentally ill Xu Fengnian.

The original plot of Fengyun 3 is actually in the men's room of Ma Xin, so it has been difficult to give birth recently.

From the profile, she looks like a woman. Is she going to be like this in my life? If it is an upgrade stream, you will have to stay in a low-level martial arts world for at least a few decades and then deal with the protagonist and the like for the rest of your life. It will not be the same generation.

What is Kougua? If you look at the title, you won't be interested in reading.

Why did the author post this?

What does it mean that there is no order all day long? Don't send it out until it's repaired. Are you trying to make money by sending it out like this?