Naruto: Kidnapping Uzumaki Naruto at the Beginning
火影：开局绑架漩涡鸣人
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 140k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5Fans
66Chapters
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The introduction smells like a female channel, but I don't see where the passion is.
Overall, it looked okay, but the plot transitions felt a bit fragmented. One second, it was in one scene, and the next second, it jumped to another scene.
It's a mess, the plot is too fragmented, it's all pieced together.
Once you find Naruko, the mission will be completed.
Thank you all, some chapters have been optimized
The author has reedited some chapters that felt unusually fragmented. (If there are still great ones, please post them to this post and the author will modify them one by one) This situation is mainly caused by the difference between the picture in the author's mind and that of the readers. Thank you again for your comments. This work cannot be successful without your help. What other suggestions can you send here?