A Harmless Soul Devourer

The setting is novel, but the overall writing style is hard to swallow.

I roughly summed up the reasons why I couldn't understand the first copy 1. The world view is so powerful. I thought that as long as the setting was interesting, I could just write it, but actually it didn't work. It still had to be plotted, and it couldn't bring out too much. 2. I didn't write down some settings clearly. I don't seem to understand the underlying logical setting of the medulla. Some people understand it and some don't. I haven't explained the setting of cognitive rationalization as the name implies at all, thinking that readers can understand it as the name implies. 3. Name problem. The body belongs to Yang Mo, and the spirit belongs to Chen Xuan. Later, Yang Mo's consciousness also came out, which was a bit confusing. This problem is easy to correct. You can correct it if you pay attention when writing. 4: The protagonist's purpose. The protagonist doesn't move forward to do anything... Although the protagonist is a Buddhist, whatever he does depends on his mood, but it doesn't look good if he doesn't move forward. 5: There are a lot of omitted things. Some people say that as long as I catch a setting and write the content carefully, it will be brilliant, but I ignore it all. I have watched too many movies and like to leave blank spaces when writing. In the next copy, I will try to write something in more detail to lower the reading threshold. Omniscient World I arranged for two medulla to fight back and forth. Originally, I wanted to explain the concept of medulla in units of volumes, but in the end, it explained loneliness. The next dungeon is a world in a painting. The level of Marrow Killing is low, there are no similar characters, and the main plot will not be so out of the ordinary. I have made fancy things in the world of paintings. If readers can understand them, it is a victory. I wish I could write a book worthy of the setting.

There is a feeling that looks good and looks bad at the same time

Have you ever been a Soul Eater? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Just barely look good. All I can say is that it was fine at the beginning. The further back I look, the harder I can stand it.

I think it's okay, it's quite enjoyable to watch, and sometimes it's quite interesting to find out later that this is the case 🙂

Protagonist: There is a difference in information from me every day, right? Now there is a certain information gap between you and me, why don't you explode?

On the first day after posting, it would be reviewed and a few hundred words would be deleted. The plot of the world in the painting can be understood even without reading the first volume. By the way, give me a follow-up reading.

Interesting but dull and weird

No, dude, why is it that the writing and plot are good, but it's a bit boring to watch?