Starting Unlimited Evolution from Grinding

The protagonist should be a lone wolf to kill monsters. He should bring those women to slow down the pace, and also get a fellow practitioner's skills to lead the female supporting role. Why don't you just get an initiation and directly give the protagonist's attributes to the wolf girl. What's the use of that wolf girl? The protagonist and a level 2 warrior can't even defeat an elite goblin. There is also the cat girl who thinks that the saleswoman has no fighting ability, and then in order to take her with her, she starts to get her side jobs of planting and sewing. She has just started learning, when will she be able to help? The planting cycle is so long and the yield is still low. When will it be useful? Sewing requires even more experience. Moreover, these feel useless to the protagonist and of no great use. They can be purchased directly without any necessity. The priest feels the same way, it is useless, especially after the protagonist learns the healing skills, the more valuable thing is that the family is better, and the maid he brings is more useful. The most important thing is that the protagonist's upgrade is too slow. Shouldn't this kind of failure be used to quickly spawn monsters and upgrade? It's almost 200 chapters, and I'm still in the novice zone. I'm only at level 5 or 6 now. Moreover, the protagonist's skill should have a focus, and focus on developing one profession in the early stage. Otherwise, a bunch of level 56 professions like this will not be as strong as a level 10 profession. Even though he knew there would be goblins attacking the city, he didn't level up. He often had sex with the wolf girl, got up at noon, and then went to train with the maid. How many goblins can you kill in one day of training? Is it just a waste of time? With your level and attributes, you should be fine in the wild for a few days, right? The author's writing is too protracted and watery, with a lot of data and little plot advancement. The female supporting characters are not very impressive either. I don't feel like I have a detailed outline, I just have a general direction, and then I write based on my feeling. There are still many details that are not handled well. The most classic one is the currency system, but this is really difficult to handle. Many authors have problems, so I won't go into details. I hope the author will update more and speed up the process.

The author's writing style is pretty good, and there are no big problems with logic. This is the plot. I only reached a level at chapter 50. It's almost chapter 80 and I'm still wandering around the novice area of ​​the novice village. It can be said that I stayed in the kindergarten and refused to leave. I personally think that the novel must be story-oriented, and other conditions are acceptable as long as they are not too bad. But there is no story, everything else is just carved out of shit.

It is considered a slightly outstanding category among original novels There are many female protagonists, the protagonist is not Yang Wei, and there is no peeing throughout the whole process. The rhythm in the early and middle stages is smooth and very enjoyable. Disadvantages: The main plot is unclear, the rhythm in the later stage is chaotic, and it does not have the thrill of showing off in the early and middle stages. It can be seen that there is no outline and the ideas are messy. However, there have been some adjustments later, so I can't make a final decision yet, but I can look forward to it Also: The author is a virgin at first glance, and the emotional scenes he wrote are very embarrassing. I didn't dare to read the chapter where he confessed to Feini.

It's not a big problem, but I always feel like it's a waste of time. It's obviously a proficiency level article, but I feel like I've only finished it after a long time. There's very little sense of improvement. I don't have a career until about 50 chapters.

It's extremely poisonous, run quickly 1. Although the male protagonist is not a stomach-nourishing man, he is written like an innocent boy, and he is only a spoiler. The purpose of making the male protagonist is to slow down his development, and there are more than one or two. The main key roles are all women The harem also has 369 levels. A genius opened a harem, but the results are all spoilers from some small rural places 2. It is too watery after it is released. Let me describe the plot to everyone Get skills Yes, kill goblins, kill monsters, upgrade skills, improve attributes, improve return to town, fuck oil bottles, continue to kill goblins for hundreds of thousands of words 3, the data related to numbers is too collapsed A simple summary, the setting is that normal adult men can kill goblins casually, with more than 100 chapters, an ordinary goblin can be killed dozens of times, a girl in Chapter 1, an ordinary sword can be killed thousands of times, and more powerful monsters can be killed tens of thousands of times. 4. The plot is too procrastinating and suppresses combat effectiveness The euphemistically called balanced development slows down the speed of professions at several levels, resulting in you not even having the courage to fight monsters of several levels higher After hundreds of thousands of words, it is still a novice village, and a bunch of novice villages have been opened to drag out harems. How do you do it in the later stage?

According to the author's description, I used AI to create a picture of the female mage. It took a long time to finally come up with a decent one. It should be Flora from the character list. (PS: I wasn't even asked to draw stockings, but sometimes they would always draw white stockings or black stockings for me)

The book is a good book, but the setting of the goblin I killed is too outrageous. I can't stand it when I see such disgusting things. Why are most of them now with this kind of retarded setting? The goblin I killed is protected by gods. Are the goblins here also protected by gods?

Mushroom Soup Brother Killer: The events are complete and the plot is smooth. Although there are problems with deus ex machina and artificial writing, in general, the author knows what readers want to see and what he is writing, and he is trying his best to make what he writes become what everyone wants to read. Illustrated Brother Killer: The details are exquisite and the plot is reasonable, but it lacks features or settings that can attract readers. There is no expectation or surprise between the laying out and recycling of foreshadowing. As a result, the structure is loose and there is no desire to follow the reading. Unless you are a professional lover of the subject, it is difficult to arouse interest in the reading process. Proficiency Brother Kill: There is an obvious problem of redundant settings. The character's attributes and skills are updated in each chapter, but there is almost no connection with the storyline. There is almost no difference between the protagonist's behavior pattern at the beginning and the behavior pattern after the attributes have doubled. Unless the author uses some plot to simplify and integrate the previous complicated skills and improve the system, the more he writes, the more he can control it.

The biggest bug in this book is probably the scroll. It is not fantasy at all. It is just like the martial arts secrets in third-rate fantasy. Ordinary people who can read can become skills wholesalers.

This book was published before 2010, but now it has not kept up with the times. Readers have tasted better and more seasoned books. This book is too plain and has too many bugs. The data growth of pig's trotters is too nonsense, it's a pretty awesome plug-in, and the numerical value is suppressed too much. The humanities aspect is also very nonsense. They are all stiff NPCs and look like online games.