Become a Koi in the World of Immortality

I saw that the Qidian Orphanage Complex appeared again, which is similar to what some people complained about before, including annihilating the family and worshiping the sect incognito. Of course, the author said that not all people died and what kind of foreshadowing was there, but seeing this, it really makes people lose interest. In fact, although there are many loopholes in the article, and the heroine is not very smart, the article is still readable. Shuhuang is already a good article, and it is quite palatable in all aspects. In the end, the entire clan was almost killed, and the heroine escaped. . . . It feels a little uncomfortable

The setting of the heroine's soul travel, except for finding a few spiritual grasses at the beginning, has nothing to do with the plot of the story. It is better to just set it as a local cultivation of immortality. In addition, the heroine and Xiao Ya'er kept talking "yeah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah,"" but they looked like children. I saw that the fourth sister was pregnant and met the heroine in the upper world with Xu Weizhou, so I gave up. How to say it? The fourth sister's image was completely ruined. It was hard to understand that such a powerful swordsman who was cold on the outside and hot on the inside turned into a gentle and expectant mother when they saw each other after being separated for a long time. In my opinion, a strong woman is a strong woman, and she is still a strong woman even when she is pregnant. She can have a Taoist partner, love her Taoist partner, and love her own children, but this is what makes her strong, rather than becoming a gentle and lovely little wife once she becomes a Taoist partner. Besides, Xu Weizhou's father revealed the Gu family's address to Chu Xingyun for Xu Weizhou's sake, which indirectly led to the deaths of several Gu family members. Although this matter has nothing to do with Xu Weizhou, I still feel uncomfortable if it is placed on me. I can forgive it and ignore it, but I will not accept it.

It's very beautiful. I'm looking forward to the next one. Come on!

I like this setting, but it feels a bit inconsistent...

I haven't commented for a long time. I was banned for a while 😭. I thought that foreign ID cards were not acceptable. Finally I asked and they said it was OK and I could only speak today. To be honest, I want to tell you very bluntly that your second work was not the type I liked, so I didn't continue it. . . But I'm still paying attention. This book is very good, keep going💪

I quite like it after watching it so far. Although there may be more loopholes or something. But the storyline is quite interesting and the characters are well drawn. Hope it can be maintained.

The writing is good and very attractive.

It is unreasonable for you to set the heroine to be so afraid of snakes in the apocalypse. It would be better to change it.

It's not enough. I managed to save more than a dozen chapters, but they were gone all of a sudden.

In the chapters around Chapter 11 and Chapter 12, the dialogue between the heroine and the maid cannot be said to be exactly the same. It can only be said that there is no difference. It is plagiarism! There is also the second grandfather who guards the school, brings the Qi into the body and gets a storage bag, and does not need to go to the school after practicing Qi for the fifth level or reaching the age of fifteen, etc. All the settings are plagiarized from "Mortal Girl Fairy Gourd". Really speechless.

Very nice. Update soon!!!

It's a good novel so far. I hope the author will work harder and write a good work.

Very nice, waiting for updates

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I hope you don't give up. Please update it soon. Is it a story without a male protagonist?

After reading it, I still want to ask, is Ninth Sister dead? Don't

When can I see my beautiful Ninth Sister?

My beautiful Ninth Sister was sold into the Hehuan Sect. She couldn't be a furnace cauldron. No! Probably not! ! !