I'm Not Crazy

In the weird genre, my favorite book is My Weird Life. Actually, there are a lot of weird books, and I've read half of them and stopped reading them. The Weird Immortal was also very late and I didn't watch it again. I don't really like to read troubling articles. From my personal point of view and preference The story of the novel is the carrier, and the central idea of ​​the character is the core of the novel. What kind of person is the protagonist Shui, and what kind of choices will he make in different environments. This is the core of the development of the novel's story. There are many well-written weird novels. But I prefer that there is a hot fire burning in the hopeless darkness. Bright and warm. This kind of feeling and contrast is my favorite weird novel. I wonder if the author can see my book review. I think if the novel direction in the future can be referred to the book My Weird Life. Well, that's my personal preference haha.

Oops, Junior Wa has invaded the novel world.

Give me props when you find your mother? I'm so good at this!

All aspects are good, but you are writing a web article. There are almost 20 pages in the first copy and there is not much written in it. The amount of information is too little to retain readers. The story is the most important thing. Other things can be spread out and written slowly.

Later, Chen Wang got tired, and Chen Wang no longer wanted to find his mother Chen Wang went to the United States, hoping that he would find the heaven in his heart...

This book is a very typical negative teaching material But it also has a very good warning effect This book is like a friend who is quite interesting when you first meet, but you soon find that this person likes to talk about things and deviate from the main line. If you reason with him, you can say that I know everything but you don't understand my difficulties If you feel bored, think about it, and occasionally there are some bright spots, but in the end you are still disappointed. I feel that this person has some knowledge and feelings, but cannot express himself well.

This is baffling. You are not engaged in literary creation, and you do not have the ability to engage in literary creation. What you write is a popular novel. What have you written in the last few chapters?

There are too many divergent thoughts, so much that they squeeze the normal story space. Moreover, most of the divergent thoughts are essentially old-fashioned and repetitive content, which neither contributes to the structure of the story nor produces any literary effect. On the contrary, it affects reading. It is really useless. Reducing your ten sentences of thinking divergence into half a sentence will not affect the structure of the story, and you will know that this is completely superfluous. Proper detailing is a basic requirement. If the divergence of thinking is of extremely high quality, it is acceptable, but unfortunately, very few in Qidian can achieve this in the article. To put it bluntly, you are writing online articles. You are not a traditional literary writer, and you don't have the writing skills. You still deliberately pursue these things. It is really putting the cart before the horse.

It's too early to say that after the golden three chapters, there are all kinds of literary problems. I really had to wait and see the 28th chapter.

I really want to describe some details written by DS.

There are too many irrelevant descriptions, and more than half of the text about the outcome of the battle has nothing to do with the battle. In addition, the writing style is also very uncomfortable to read. Who likes to read a few words per line?

It's full of despair, and it's hard to judge its shortcomings. The full sense of despair makes people want to read on. Krakow's similar writing techniques can only find the glimmer of hope in the endless despair, not to defeat but to live.

Chapter 917 is a dungeon and it's not finished yet. I don't even want to read it. Twenty or thirty chapters in a dungeon is enough.

I went there and it was really good. I have read many apocalyptic novels, but the sense of oppression is not as strong as this one. Some authors just talk about how many people died and how urgent the situation is, but the details and dialogue between the characters are so relaxed. It feels like the characters in the apocalyptic drama, but this one is really different. Both the characters and the details are very desperate. Many places have written about the dilemma of the country in the apocalypse in different ways. It is so oppressive.

I feel that the author's creativity is good, but I always feel that the writing style is not up to par 😥

I don't understand. The content of your book has been written in the introduction. Do readers still need to click in? No room for imagination at all

Your title and introduction are quite interesting, let me know if they are poisonous.

It can be seen that the author writes books as a hobby and has no intention of making money. So do whatever you want👍👍👍

It is a very soulful book. Although it is rough, the techniques are not good, and the rhythm is bad, the core is very powerful. Don't give up writing online. You just need to figure out the rhythm and techniques. With the level of your article, you will definitely be able to do it. Don't be discouraged. After finishing this book, try to open a new book with good rhythm and other aspects. It will be absolutely no problem.

The copy should end immediately. Another novel I read before had 700 chapters in one copy, and it is almost over 800 chapters now. Don't break the record. 😎

Is it completely over?😭

It's so long-winded, it's a bit pointless.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Was this written under the influence of drugs?

Can't you learn?

I read a few chapters carefully, but I feel uncomfortable and not having fun. How can this take off?

When will your copy end? A copy is so long to write.