Lu Mingfei's Infinity

Lu Mingfei had better take it easy on his emotional lines, especially Eriyi, he really doesn't like her.

To be honest, the Creator of the Lord God Space made it very clear. It's obviously just a copy, so Lu Mingfei can't tell the difference clearly. What you wrote seems to really treat him as a real person.

I think creating a human is a poisonous point, because it is just a copy substitute. What Zheng Zha created is the white moonlight in the heart. Isn't it clear that this is not clear? Or does it mean that Fei just wants a white moonlight in the heart, unless the soul is later retrieved and fused to create a human 😰

[Hey, isn't this Brother Xibai? In Warhammer Returns next door, Lu Mingfei went crazy to clean up his aunt's family. After taking out the original text, he pretended to be dead.

An Alien dungeon is less than ten chapters long, with not much plot. The description of the fighting scene takes up most of the words. At the end of the dungeon, there is no impression of any plot, except that Lu Mingfei was fighting madly there. It gives people the impression that the transitional plot that can be written in two or three chapters has been managed by the author with various descriptions to reach about ten chapters. Try to use as few long sentences with advanced sentence patterns as possible, and don't keep stacking adjectives there. You need to distinguish the priorities. In normal times, try to tell the story in a simple and concise way to advance the plot, and during the climax, describe it vigorously to arouse emotions.

I feel like the writing is pretty good. Why are grains above the average not popular?

Some paragraphs are too long and I feel a little tired from reading them.

The author's description of the system of the Supreme Being is simply difficult to describe in words. In the half-step exterior scene of the original work, the non-location creatures were just looking at each other to make them fall to the ground. Here, you can play house with a few mortals in the exterior scene. If you like fisting to the flesh, I suggest you change the system. Starting from the exterior scene, the upper position and the lower position are to let the whole world crush the opponent. Before the legend, it seemed that the whole sky and the earth fell, unable to move. At the beginning of the legend, the countless galaxies in the entire starry sky gathered together and pressed down. Only in battles of the same level can some fists be punched to the flesh, and this requires special skills. However, some of the descriptions are really cool. I hope the author can add more outdoor scenes to bully the younger ones, otherwise the practice will be in vain. Don't roll over against a few weaklings. You're not writing about dark souls. A single look can make the lower-ranking creatures within a thousand meters kneel down.

Alas, it's the Dragon Clan again, and it's Lu Ming again. There are too many, just like the Xia Ke Xing. Can you hold them down?

Infinite? Which worlds are you planning to focus on now?

There are only battle descriptions and inter-act enhancements. There is too little plot description and the character growth is not deep. It's like the content other than battles is just dumped out of the outline.

OK, different Mingfei.

I haven't watched it yet, but I hope the heroine is or at least has zero

He couldn't stand it when he saw the creation of human beings. With Lu Mingfei's character, he would definitely create Nuonuo, and he would never create Hui Liyi.