Warhammer: The Emperor's Dragon-Doting Daughter

Some things were scrawled and taken for granted. Come on, this is gold🚽Sit down and do it for 13 days before you write it, give it a try first.

The introduction was confusing at first glance, and I saw him as War Commander Ran Dan. I thought the protagonist was adopted by Ran Dan and grew up to be Ran Dan's War Commander <(_ _)>

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This heroine theme is a test of writing skills. In addition, this IP has been used for decades, and it is really just for love.

If any human civilization is in line with the emperor's wishes, it is the witch civilization, which will forcibly transform you into a witch. Your original race has just become a characteristic, and your consciousness and soul will be transformed into a witch (extreme witch racism, other races can only eat or convert into witches or use them as materials). Active in foreign wars (forbidden troops per capita)

I don't know why, but the more I read, the more strange it is, and I can't explain it. Is there a sense of separation between the front and the back? Who is the definition of protagonist?

After reading a few chapters, the writing is poor, and the mother-daughter communication process does not reflect the warm and growing feeling. It feels strange to read.

Why was it necessary to write the Second Primarch as a female? Will it have any impact on the subsequent plot?

Huangpizi

Dear author, can I ask Shan Baiyuan?