I Disguised Myself as a White Dragon and Was Supported by the Country

Boring book, boring protagonist

After hundreds of years of cultivation, you still can't control your emotions. What did you cultivate? 🙂

A dragon that is more than 10 meters tall would be acceptable if it were a Western dragon. After all, an Eastern dragon is fat. . . . It's too small. It's the same size as a python. What kind of garbage dragon is it?

There is a reason why it is not popular. It is still a standard hanging silk cover, with a background of a wizard who lives to cultivate immortality for a hundred years, but he talks and acts like a college student who has not entered society, and the sense of separation is too strong.

Have you ever been a dragon? Just write randomly and take it for granted

There is still a fairy spirit in the first few dozen chapters, but the messy things about cultivating immortals in the back are confusing. The whole plot is unbearable. It is obviously a very novel theme and has the potential of fairy grass, but it collapses too quickly. Wouldn't it be good to write about daily pretense?

The previous article gives people the feeling that the protagonist is really the only dragon, and it is interesting to help the country he is in become stronger. But suddenly, dragons are everywhere, but the country just doesn't know about it and has never studied it. In all these years of building bridges and building mountains, there has never been anything like a corpse? Let's see if the author comes back.

The subject matter is good, but the writing and plot are too poor. It neither shows the mentality of coming from the world of immortality after a hundred years of life and death, nor does it show the power of a modern country. It is also a different world and a modern country. I suggest the author read books written by novice fishermen, which are only part of the country's power.

I read it well at first, but from now on I can't read a single word. Then let me make another speech with 100 fan value 😒 The old disgusting man's three-piece suit belongs to

Have you ever been a white dragon? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Has being a saint in public now turned into a game of digging up secrets from the past? The back is nothing to watch, brother, the front and back are too separated. . I just wanted to see how to show off my holiness and step on the face of the enemy country later, okay, let's start the treasure hunt journey later, you. .

No. . . What are you writing about recently? . . What's the point of not being unique? Wouldn't that just turn into a traditional fairy tale? The more I wrote, the less interesting it became, so I abandoned it.

Brother, this subject is not suitable for emotional scenes in the early stage. I am digressing.

Open high and go low, it becomes a completely different book after it is put on the shelf

The writing is okay, but in your writing, China's intelligence system has been penetrated into a sieve. There are many people in Yatoushan. The enemy will know immediately. Agents who have been lurking for many years will be exposed as soon as they are exposed.

A dragon that is more than ten meters long, hahahahahahaha, I would rate it not as good as the anaconda

Regarding the annihilation of the aircraft carrier formation, Da Meili's reaction was as bland as choking on breakfast. She had no understanding of the significance of a fully equipped aircraft carrier formation to a country. The U. S. Government had long stated that the United States would retaliate with a nuclear attack against an aircraft carrier attack. Moreover, the entire aviation formation was annihilated. The country did not even have first-level combat readiness and emergency status. This shows that the author's understanding and sensitivity of geopolitics and global military is relatively shallow. Of course, this is also a refreshing point, but the author needs to think more about how to express the subsequent content. To give an inappropriate example, if China's Fujian ship and the entire related fleet were completely annihilated near the coast of the United States, how would the Chinese government and people react? Just like my previous posts, in addition to describing the appearance of saints in front of people, chickens and dogs ascending to heaven and showing off their faces, in addition to these exciting points, more attractive points need to be added. It is recommended to enhance the strength of the country, as in other novels that are very popular now, in terms of technology, excavation of ruins, saving disasters, and alleviating difficulties and equality. Make more efforts In addition, I personally think there are several poisonous points that need to be avoided. The entire style is transformed into cultivating immortals, leaving the world, and officialdom. This is not to say that these are not good, but that the readers attracted by the previous content may not be adaptable to these things. For specific content, the author can refer to the serious replies from editors and readers.

It feels like the author writes that people and dragons are at odds with each other? A lot of information shows that people were fighting dragons in ancient times?

If the protagonist is no longer the only one, it would be boring!

What is the correct plan for officials to deal with Shenlong? First, make an assessment: the first is the position, the second is the impact, and then the solution. Let's talk about the position first, and evaluate each item in sequence: Is Shenlong an intelligent creature? Is it possible to communicate? What is your attitude towards humans? What is your attitude towards the Chinese people? What does it look like to the existing government? Let's talk about impact. If nothing else, we must first assess whether it is harmful to the people and whether it is harmful to the existing regime? This is the first foundation. Then the solution plan must ensure these points: reasonable, beneficial and proactive and controllable. Reasonable refers to finding the basic strategic basis for getting along with God through evaluation; beneficial, I won't go into details here for now; active and controllable, with the initiative that can be grasped, I believe this is what the official must ensure. Here comes the problem. Judging from the development of the article, the initiative and controllability of the officials in taking countermeasures in the early stage are being lost. The assistants only sided with Shenlong. After all, the influence of the assistants and the resources they control are very limited. Later, when the supervisory guard leader completely directed Shenlong, the officials did not react at all. Instead, they had an attitude of acquiescence and support. This is unreasonable. Then, those who engage in scientific research and theory also turn to Shenlong. This is not unreasonable, but an extremely dangerous behavior - this is a small interest group surrounding Shenlong, a small interest group with force, resources, brains, technology, automatic diffusion function, and high loyalty, which will automatically pursue additional interests that Shenlong does not need. This small group also has uncanny means and the background support of Shenlong as its backer. This not only represents the loss of official initiative and controllability, but also represents the possibility that continued development will have an impact or even subvert the regime. This is absolutely intolerable to the official. A wise dragon, I believe the above aspects will be taken into consideration in the later development of the article.

I just finished reading the latest chapter. I have read many similar works by various authors, both big and small. To be honest, this book is interesting. The subject matter is very good and the early stage is smooth. However, I saw a few suggestions made today. The first one is the update issue. The default limit for guaranteed updates is 6000. Words, secondly, the plot advancement and overall smoothness, I can't say whether it's reasonable or not. It's all amazing. It seems that the plot has been advancing, but there is not much substantive progress. It is really difficult to write about domestic plots in the modern world. We know this, so the author still needs to sort out the outline. It is not easy to write a good subject. If you can't write it yourself, those old guys will use it to pay tribute and then people will become popular 🙂

It is a common problem in this type of novels that is the best work that shows a saint before others. Invincibility leads to shortness and weakness in the middle and later stages. This depends on the author's ability, which is the criterion for judging whether he is a great god.

I started reading it in August, and now there are more than 20 chapters, but I have no desire to read it anymore. Will he die if he keeps it any longer? Maybe

Just like the previous one, this book was quite interesting before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, it looked like a subway man.

After reading the comments, I knew there was a reason why I couldn't stand it.

Keep up the good work, the writing is obviously pretty good, and automatic subscription support has been turned on.

This is a bit more refined, but not too much.