
Douluo Dalu: I Can Raise Soul Beasts and Help Them Evolve Beyond Their Limits
斗罗:我能培育魂兽,还能超进化
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Have you ever been a soul master? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.
The writing is good, but Huo Yuhao's handling is too rough. To be honest, after the collapse of Tang San's popularity, Huo Yuhao and Lan Xuanyu equally divided the Douluo series favors. In addition to Huo Yuhao's tragic life, most people have a favorable impression of Huo Yuhao. Now Huo Yuhao has a tendency to develop in the direction of a clown. There is no good in this. First of all, the best written Peerless Tang in the market Huo Yuhao has a positive image, and it is difficult to change the public's opinion. Secondly, Huo Yuhao is not strong enough as an anti-card. He spent the first half of his life relying on resources to force him out. Electrolux has already been obtained, Ice Emperor, and Snow Emperor are not ready to give up. Huo Yuhao still takes the Shrek route. It is difficult for readers to think that he is oppressive. No matter how many harsh words he uses, he will still have a clown feel. It would be better to focus on a tragic evil character, follow the route of the Holy Spirit Cult, have a perseverant evil soul master (such as the Super Douluo evil soul master who absorbs the blood of soul beasts), and then go to Mingde Hall as an exchange student, gathering the strengths of the evil soul master and soul master, and the protagonist cannot compete with each other, so that the protagonist's rescue will be meaningful. The ultimate body of the evil sect Huo Yuhao can also serve as the representative of Douluo Star to judge parasites (human beings)
The author's economic level is too poor. I suggest you go back and revise the article. It's too outrageous. Three soul beasts can easily eat millions of gold soul coins in a year. A few more ten thousand year soul bones are worth less than one top soul beast every year. Moreover, a milk tea shop can earn tens of thousands of gold soul coins a day. Are you serious? Even if my hand is broken, I can't hold so many cups.
Hostess choice
Dou Er Peerless Tang Sect: T0. Gu Yuena (no need to say more) 1. Meng Hongchen (Miss Meng) 2. Auspicious beast (loves to eat brains) 3. Snow Emperor (Ice Sky and Snow Girl) 4. Zhang Lexuan (Elder Sister) 5. Orange (Empress and God of War) 6. Wei Na (Princess Tianhun) 7. Ma Xiaotao (Phoenix Saint) 8. Ling Luochen (Ice Law) 9. Ye Guyi (Angel) 10. Ice Emperor (Ice Scorpion Lolita) 1 1. Xu Jiujiu (Imperial Princess) 12. Ning Tian (Nine Treasures Rich Woman) 13. Han Ruoruo (Intellectual Big Sister) 14. Wu Ming (Irritable Royal Sister) ps: Choose a few from them! ! !
The combat power of the soul beast is too overwhelming. The Millennium Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear has the combat power of the soul king?
The author's writing is quite good, but the author did not estimate the value of the gold soul coins well. The three thousand-year soul beasts of the protagonist will consume tens of millions of gold soul coins a year. This is too exaggerated. The flesh and blood of the soul beasts is not that valuable, even if it is eaten with the flesh and blood of the ten thousand-year soul beasts. You must know that in the original work, Wang Dong's ten-thousand-year-old golden earth dragon ten-thousand-soul bone "Golden Light" is worth 9.5 Million gold soul coins, and the Snow Emperor's embryo is only 150 million. According to the current way the protagonist eats the three thousand-year-old pets, the value of one hundred-thousand-year-old embryo can be eaten in three to five years, not to mention that when the protagonist levels up in the future, he will have more pet soul beasts. Even if Shrek City is sold, it won't be enough to eat. Shrek City's annual tax revenue is only a few hundred million gold soul coins. It is unreasonable to have to spend one-tenth of the resources to support three thousand-year soul beasts every year.
Gao Kaiping walks
The settings in the early stage are very detailed, and various soul beasts have roles. The skills, values, attributes, and evolutionary forms are all written in detail. In the later stage, the soul beasts are collected purely for the purpose of collecting the soul beasts. The fighting scenes are all based on the reader's imagination. There is no description of the fighting process. It is like opening the Crimson King. The soul beasts collected in the later stage are basically the same after catching the Poke Ball. They don't go into battle or write very little, and there isn't much interaction with Pokémon in the early stage. Even the skills are rarely used. The protagonist relies entirely on the skills of Behemoth monsters to crush and kill them in seconds. The emotional scenes in the early stage are written very carefully, and in the later stage, the succubi are all relied on to directly take over the harem. Moreover, the platform review is very strict, and the process is not less deletion and rectification.
Dou Er was engaged in the blacksmithing department, and he had a direct idea of the Resurrection Forging, Fusion Forging, and Heavenly Forging. He randomly recruited 3 people from the outer courtyard, and the youngest one was 13 years old and did Turing Forging. He was really awesome, even more awesome than the divine craftsman Zhenhua Ten Thousand Years Later. With such a forging already developed, there is no need to wait for you to study it. The height of Dou Yi's master craftsman's building is at most the height of the spiritual forging.
Level 98 Xuanzi is equivalent to a 600,000-year-old soul beast? Does Xuanzi know that he is so awesome?
The plot is unreasonable
At the beginning, Mr. Xuan left a fan and left with peace of mind. This shows that this fan can protect against 100,000-year-old soul beasts, because the protagonist group is not afraid of soul beasts less than 100,000 years old. Not to mention that they can completely resist them, at least they should be able to delay Mr.