Douluo: Start by Obtaining the Warhammer Gene Seed!

I can't stand it anyway. After all, although most of the people who come to see Douluo fandom come to see Tang San, at least don't make Tang San so stupid and illogical.

The plot is chaotic

In the first chapter, I reminded the author to add punctuation marks, and the author also added them later. I started to read it again, but when I saw the plot of the second chapter, it was difficult to hold back... First of all, there is no way that there is a Wuhun Hall in the Holy Soul Village. I remember that in the original book, there are all Wuhun branch halls. In towns, such as the branch temple in Notting City, Su Yuntao only came to awaken martial spirits for children in remote areas, and also tried to recruit outstanding awakeners. If the Holy Soul Village dared to have a permanent martial arts temple, wouldn't it be a favor to Tang Hao? Then there is the problem of Tang Hao and Tang San's characters. It is too explosive. Tang Hao is not an extreme murderer. He wants to kill the children who want to join the Spirit Hall. He is not so cheap. Title Douluo does not even bother to take action against the juniors. The only objects of his hatred are the Pope Hall and the high-end combat power enshrined. He will not take action at all against such innocent people who have not participated in the siege and are completely unaware~_~. Also, facing the serious Wuhun Palace soul master Su Yuntao, he would not have any murderous intentions. He was just a grassroots person doing purely charity work. Besides, he was still a decadent man who got drunk all day long at this time. Big brother, the opportunity to revive was when he saw Tang San's dual martial souls after awakening, and asked Xiao San to protect the grass with a hammer. Finally, there is Tang San, who has lived in two lives. How could he have the jealousy, hatred and disgust towards other people with innate soul power to "take death" in this period? If he had this kind of character, wouldn't he also want to kill anyone who was more talented and better than him? Tang San is ruthless towards clear enemies. As long as the opponent is not the kind of person who clearly shows murderous intent towards him or wants to hurt the person he cares about, he will not have any conflict with the opponent. Well, making friends is his character~_~ Although I like anti-Tang Sanwen very much, it is not the kind of thing that first destroys Tang San and his son, and then turns against him, brother.

The subject matter is very good, but the author remembers to revise the use of punctuation marks and paragraphing as soon as possible. It affects reading too much and is very discouraging. I will add it to the bookshelf first and come back to it in two days. If it is still like this, it will not be possible to read normally 😥 By then, it will be gone