Dancer Era

I came across this book by chance today, on the latest update. It was quite a fate. When I saw such a book with an ancient flavor and incomplete second dimension, I clicked in and read some. To be honest, it can be seen that the author is very attentive and even very passionate. After all, it lasted four months and more than 700,000 words. But, passion cannot be eaten as food. First is the name. "Era of the Dancer", it's not that it was bad in the past, it's just that a little Karami like you can't afford such a name. The key to today's novels is to attract others to read the work's title. For example, "Being a Talent in the Demon Sect" and "Heir to the Kingdom of 1.4 Billion People" are different from you in terms of names. They not only explain the background and style of the work, but also use common words and replace one or two words to arouse the curiosity of others and attract new readers. But your name... The second is your golden three chapters. It is too bad and has too many problems. You spend a whole chapter at the beginning to talk about the background, and then immediately jump to assisting these little ancestors to help them make their debut? What about conflict? What about drama? What are the characteristics, cuteness, and flaws of these characters? We readers don't know anything. We just feel that the protagonist is like a fool who goes out of his way to help a bunch of strangers who have nothing to do with them, or a stranger who gives up on himself. How should I put it? It's not like living a life, but like opening a game called (Beautiful Girl Idol Producer), which is doomed from the beginning. Although the novel is said to be made up, the most taboo thing is the sense of fabrication. Then comes the main text. It's too bad. I won't say anything because it's too old. But I hope you, the author, will understand that the two-dimensional text is not about fighting, but about romance and making jokes. You are constantly fighting with other teams, and you can predict the result before starting. Does it make sense? You are already a dancer, you are mainly a girl, and you can still fight with joy, which I didn't expect 😅. Originally, the title of the book excludes those who don't like the second dimension, but your content has taken away the cute people in the second dimension, which is a disservice to both ends. Summary, author, you work very hard and are great. Those who strive and persevere are the best. I say all this because I really hope it can help you, the author, and I am not trying to persuade you to give up. Come on, 500 chapters and 1 million words are just around the corner. Your next book will definitely be better. In addition, if you have anything you want to ask, you can ask me. Although I am just talking on paper, I have extensive experience, so I think I can still help you.

It's too cliche and nothing new. After all, why do authors like this always write about the rise of Class F? The person who can become Class F has a big problem. If the male protagonist doesn't fail, he can't rise at all, right? For those who have made it to Class A and Class B through their own efforts, the male protagonist does not help those who are willing to work hard but runs to help those who have given up on themselves. The setting is very problematic.