Dragon Clan: I, Intelligence Lu Mingfei, Concept God!

What should Susie do? I didn't accept her

So far, the writing is quite good, the rhythm is okay, and it is considered a very good lz fan on this site Looking forward to the author's follow-up

I seem to have read this fanfic before. It started with Su, and there were domestic mixed-race forces, and there was also a Lord Wa. The Lord Wa was also given to Lu Mingfei. Was that written by you?

Have you ever been a mixed race? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

As the title states, the blame for this type of problem can generally be thrown to Jiangnan. Jiangnan has several versions of this forced book. The Dragon Clan alone has an online serialized version, a periodical serialized version, a bound version, a refined version, and revised versions over the years. The basic settings of online serialized editions, periodical serialized editions, and bound editions are different, while the detailed descriptions of bound editions, refined editions, and revised editions over the years have also been modified. Just like Kazama Ruri's voice spirits are different, one version is Dream Tapir, and the other version seems to be Baqi Just like Lu Mingfei played StarCraft in the first version, but now it has become King or Alliance, I haven't watched it Just like Nono, some people think it is good Girl, but the version I read was a guy who knew what others were going to do and encouraged Lu Mingfei to catch up and confess that he was a good PUA Lu Mingfei as a clown In terms of revising the text to disgust readers, I feel that Jiangnan can be ranked second, and the first is Xiao Ding who wrote about Zhu Xian. NND Xiaobai did so much in the beginning and then it was fine that there was no connection. The second part is even more of a continuation, with the character structure in it completely ruined and many flesh-and-blood supporting characters eliminated. In the end, I simply stopped playing the protagonist and ended up rewriting the first part of the story to beat the other CP gang members to death.

To be honest, I would rather see Lu Mingfei slaughter Cassel

Don't underestimate my intelligence network You clicked into the comment area before you even read the book, right?

I don't know when Su Xiaoqiang started to be the heroine in more and more fan fiction. Even if she is not the heroine, she has a long plot. She is only a supporting character in the original work, and most of the fans just brought her to Kassel Academy. She is just an ordinary person and can't help much.

Lu Mingfei: The upper limit of favorability is 10. At the beginning, Su Xiaoqiang's favorability is 5, and Chu Zihang's favorability is 6. He hugs me from left to right, monogamous, and I have the advantage.

This novel was ruined by the harem. It was originally very well written, and it was really comfortable to watch. Then you started to talk about the heroine. You know that this girl loves you so much and thinks about you so much, and then you still open a harem and say that you are all my wings. It's outrageous.

In the early stage, Lu Mingfei was still like Lu Mingfei, talking nonsense and making no sense. To be honest, in my opinion, Lu Mingfei, portrayed by the green-faced beast, is just that interesting and can be called a "character charm". In today's online writing environment, a large number of people will like it. If he and Xia Mi, the female version of Lu Mingfei, are brought together and talk nonsense to each other, there will definitely be a wonderful chemical reaction, which is interesting just thinking about it. But as the author writes later, Lu Mingfei feels like a different person, becoming more and more like the protagonist of the previous book. It feels like a leader, a big brother taking the lead, but because of this, it lacks charm and is not that interesting. It's really a pity in this regard.

Although it is very immersive to read from Lu Mingfei's perspective, it also has great restrictions. For example, you cannot open a harem randomly, but there are so many good girls in Lu Mingfei's life. If you don't accept them, you will be scolded, and you will be scolded if you accept them. If you don't accept any of them, you will be scolded by all readers. This is the dead end of the original work.

Su's initial favorable impression of Lu Mingfei is at most 2. It can't be that high. If you say that Su's favorable impression of Lu Mingfei is 4 in the fourth part, I would agree with it. Although the guy in the original book seems to have a good relationship with Lu, he has never really done anything for Lu or helped Lu in any way. She basically just watched with cold eyes. This guy doesn't look down on Lu at all.

Back then, I couldn't hold on to my identity. I was a child who had been abandoned and neglected for more than ten years. The people closest to him were also extremely mean to him. Suddenly one day a group of people told you that you are the savior. Brave young man, go and save the world! It's really disgusting and makes people want to rebel! Of course I know that his special characteristics have led to his situation, but it is an indisputable fact that no one has cared about him, no one has taught him, no resources, and he has been bullied for more than ten years! You can't wait until he saves the world before you remember that he is the savior! This is so disgusting! Now I finally understand why Lu Mingfei's fans give me a very uncomfortable feeling, because that child didn't get even an apology.

Let Lu Mingfei open a harem. I don't know why this is so popular. How can a weak kid start a harem after being frightened? He can accept it, and there are more and more cases like this. The second heroine's relationship is inexplicable. I know she was set up by someone, and the emotional experience she had is also inexplicable. I just downloaded a small dungeon together. . . . .

This emotional drama is really embarrassing, especially the one about Lord Wa

In the story of Su and Zhao, it is useless to cover other people's mouths, because apart from swearing, there is no reason to refute. They pursue male idols and engage in female competition, and then they fail to pursue and become clowns together with Lu. I always feel that cheating on girls who are rejected is quite cheap, so I don't like them.

You're really good at it. You just don't push the main plot, right? You start writing character side stories to make up chapters, right?

Do you want to accept it or not? If you don't accept it, Kainuo can elope as soon as possible. The original work has clearly identified these two, but why is it hanging on the edge of Japan to be refrigerated? Jörmungandr, I thought, I just used Chu Zihang as a trap to do the whole job for Odin. Are you playing some kind of hellish joke by putting these two together?

I thought that the Dragon Clan is the Dragon Clan, and Lu Mingfei's harem is the norm for many fans, so why is he wearing the skin of the Dragon Clan? Until I saw it a little bit after it was put on the shelves, indeed, this is a harem novel in the skin of a dragon. I don't have any controversy about Lu Mingfei's OOC opening a harem like other readers. I don't care, and I don't care if there are too many harems. What I want to say is that this book does not have the story line of Dragon One, Dragon Two, and Dragon Three at all. Not to mention Norton did not fight, it seems that Teacher Daye went to Eri without even having it, and there are no various original plots in the middle. They are all original plots. . . . Guess why I read fanfics. As a result, I felt like I was reading another novel, especially when I went to fight at Chen's house. I wondered if I was reading a Dragon Clan fan. Isn't this really another novel?🙂🙂🙂

Lu Mingfei is not the one who can have a harem... If you insist on writing it like this, you might as well change the protagonist from the beginning and say that someone from the earth has passed through Lu Mingfei. And the harem is very stereotyped and boring. Multiplayer dramas are just one person speaking, and there is no change in attitude. If there is one more, we are all willing to do it... What the heck?

There is a bad point in the male channel called wing knotting, but now I want to collect them all, but I feel like I can't do it if I don't write it this way. What did the author write next?

Most readers who read Dragon Clan fan fiction want to make up for their regrets, and this regret reparation is based on Dragon Clan's writing style. The basic setting of this book is not rigorous, and it can even be said that there have been many changes. For example, Ming Fei and Lu Mingze do not live in the same room, and Old Tang in the original book has never encountered dragons, including hybrids, until his personality disappears. However, the author writes that Old Tang has encountered them many times and is already a professional hunter. The writing style of this book is a good example of dragon literature, only the emotional drama resembles urban literature. The author has posted voting statistics and the final result is that the harem wins, which is no problem, but the emotional writing is like a Chinese comic-adapted novel, which deviates from the original style of the novel. The author said that this book is mainly about Ming Fei's career. I read a third of the chapters and the following chapters and found that it is actually a career line mixed in the harem novel, and it seriously deviates from the plot line of most fan fiction (I did not enter Kassel Academy) There are many original characters, and the most important one is the Dragon King. The setting is just like the villains in fantasy novels more than ten years ago (such as Jie Jie Jie). To sum up, I personally think that the author started with a semi-liberal writing method based on generating electricity for love. After writing dozens of chapters, he completely let himself go (to make money commercially). The so-called career is to fight monsters and upgrade. The later stage should be basically an original plot (deviating from the original story line of one, two and three). For me personally, this book is a poisonous weed of dragon fan fiction 🙏

Oh my god, I just discovered so many female protagonists😦

You wrote a novel for me. What is it like to be a eunuch?

What's going on? I haven't updated it in two days. I don't know how to cut it. 😥 I have saved the last ten chapters for a while and haven't read them yet.

Polite self-recommendation, a fan of the Dragon Clan, "Starting from being the richest man in the Dragon Clan and building a mall of all realms", which will soon be renamed "Dragon Clan, Starting from Giving Way to Mingfei to Play E-Sports". If you are interested, please read it and leave a critical review 🙏🙏🙏. The editor said that my writing style was too biased and asked me to send it directly to see the data. The new author felt that no one would read it without signing in, so he made this decision. Friends who like Dragon Clan can come here to criticize and give advice, and communicate more.

Polite self-recommendation, Dragon Clan fan "Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei's Restarting Life". If you are interested in reading it, welcome critical comments🙏🙏🙏 Friends who like Dragon Clan can come to criticize and give advice, and communicate more

When I saw Lu Mingfei taking the initiative to expose himself, I really couldn't figure it out. Wouldn't his opponent use Su Xiaoqiang as a hindrance? If Su can be used to threaten Lu, a person who can rival the Dragon King, can the dark side of the world not do it? Even if you fail for the first time, even if you calculate mentally or not, if you can defend yourself for a while, can you still defend yourself for the rest of your life? Not to mention, with Su's character, would he be willing to be protected continuously? Even if there is bloodline improvement or other means later, pig's feet cannot predict the future... (Even if Su is not moved, it is not difficult to just throw uncles, aunts, classmates and people familiar with Lu Mingfei into one pot, at least it can have an impact on Lu) Secondly, it is not that it cannot be exposed, but that exposure must have the value of exposure, and at least one Dragon King must be killed, right? I like this book very much, but the behavior of going to the banquet of the head of the Chen family, the head of an aristocratic family, almost single-handedly, and breaking into the other party's layout still makes people's blood pressure rise. In short, it is to make more plans and take the initiative to break the situation, instead of always relying on coincidence/luck/seeing tricks.