Tumu Xianzun

Tumu Lao's hallucination of dying after being fired without compensation 🤭

Alas, it's just a fantasy before the sudden death of a civil servant

Does this golden finger have anything to do with the identity and profile of the protagonist?

A plot that is pretentious and slaps you in the face keeps dragging on. If you don't know how to write, then don't write this kind of plot that suppresses the protagonist and creates a disgusting character and then slaps the face. You not only disgust the protagonist, but also disgust the readers.

Are these chapters of the latest grab-and-go spectacle reasonable? 😅 Although the disgusting woman portrayed earlier is aggrieved for carrying personal goods, she is still barely acceptable. After all, it is considered a character creation. But is the author of these latest chapters high-spirited?

It's true that anyone can put their feet on the ground 😭😭😭😭😭. The brothers have just been laid off and can only walk with buckets.

The civil servant was owed wages but had no choice but to make a good meal, only to find out that it was just a fantasy after he passed out in anger. Generally speaking, the writing was okay.

Are you going to write about the disgusting Chen Minglan until next year? Isn't this just disgusting readers?

The author's writing seems to be very good in all aspects. I gave it a recommendation vote. However, the scene between Yunshan and the young man from the Chen family is not very good. Now I feel that it is more taboo to show kindness, especially Yunshan. His status is all given by the protagonist, and he also tells the protagonist's private affairs to outsiders. No matter how you read this part, I feel awkward.

According to the author's setting, there are only 47 people at the general level. Even if they are not as good as our country's academicians, they are still comparable to the professor level. As a result, the protagonist does everything by himself, and some dangerous activities on the front line are also done by the protagonist himself. This is obviously not worthy of the status.

The idea is good, but the author's writing seems to be unable to catch up, and the conflicts created to advance the plot are too blunt. The first is to buy things in the Wanbao Tower. The apprentice does not bring any magic weapons, nor does he use disposable talismans. You can use one to kill monsters in the front, and now it is all up to the protagonist to become a saint. The second is to invite the Chen family to invite a statue of a god. The author always says that others think that the protagonist is going to die and are not afraid of offending him, but he is about to die and you still make him unhappy. He directly refuses to let you build it. How can you go down to find him?

It's better to write this kind of pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot faster, or give it more words, so that it can be completed in one go. If you keep doing this intermittently, no one will read it...

The plot is really too witty, could you please think more about it before writing it... The inconsistencies, forced wit, and pretentiousness are really unbearable to watch. You can just work on the project with peace of mind and don't make any mistakes. It will be a hundred times better than now, okay?

Earth Wood Immortal Lord? I think it's called the Living Corpse Immortal, and it was all lifted up by the living corpse brothers.

There are fewer 4 on the shelves. Are you embarrassed if you don't update 7 or 8?

What everyone may be arguing about is the characterization of Yunshan, but I think this kind of characterization is a normal person. You may think, oh, how can he help outsiders, but this is in line with human nature. People will die because of loyalty, but before they die, they also want their wives and children to live better, instead of simply dying for the lord and risking everything.

Which civil engineering tycoon tried to change careers🙂

The writing is above average, but unfortunately the plot has a lot of bad points, all of which were written ten years ago, or are based on applied templates.

A eunuch? I didn't dare to enter after seeing no updates for a day.

It won't be updated anymore. Can you give me a message from the author?

I've read Chapter 55. The more I read, the more confused I am and I don't understand. I hope someone can clarify five points: 1. What are the professional systems and what levels are there? Now the ninth-level madness is blaming the protagonist in the face. The protagonist has no cultivation at the beginning and the professional level is a general? 2. What is the level of generals in the protagonist industry? I just feel that this level of job preparation and background is also a small group in this industry. There are only ten generals in total. The most they can go up to is two to three levels like a craftsman, right? 3. The protagonist earns tens of thousands at every turn, and his annual income can easily reach tens of thousands. The treasures bid at a trade fair are only a few hundred taels. How can a few dozen taels survive for countless people? An extraordinary building only costs tens of thousands. 4. The protagonist is a general with a lot of money. There are no hidden bodyguards seen or hinted at so far. Only a few disciples are in the mortal realm, not even ninth grade? 5. When the realm is low, it is okay to use another equally great future to set off the awesomeness of the protagonist's profession, but building a so-called cross-sea bridge will cause the danger of killing the second and first grade like a dog? I know you want to make the protagonist extraordinary, but this kind of foil is very fragmented after reading more than fifty chapters without clarifying the level. 6. The protagonist is the top in one industry and the eighth-grade science and technology used in two industries is so good. Just make the building you are planning to build extraordinary. By the way, the building you are planning to build is not extraordinary, or does the protagonist not have other science and technology or higher? What is the level of a general? 7. I didn't participate in the whole process of helping others build a dock. I just focused on practicing martial arts. I went on an adventure as a sick man. You gave a drawing of an extraordinary building to a mud-legged guy who didn't understand anything. After it was built, it was done as a ritual and that was it? Just two newly obtained eighth-level instruments? 8. A cross-sea extraordinary bridge that slaughters first- and second-grade dogs like dogs is used to set off a wave of extraordinary buildings. The levels of extraordinary buildings are not clearly stated. 9. There is no need to participate in the entire early stage of building an extraordinary building, and it can be done with some engineering teams. Then I can understand that they are all ordinary buildings, and only the two eighth-grade scientific instruments behind you are extraordinary? After all, it is also a base of exquisite ordinary planning. From time to time, you can use ninth-grade and eighth-grade scientific instruments to combine it with your special methods or designs, seventh-grade core, and even sixth-grade and fifth-grade eyes, right? Otherwise, this would be extraordinary? Is it so awesome to be extraordinary? Anyway, I read more than fifty chapters and didn't understand it. The summary is that the protagonist is awesome, but I don't understand where the awesomeness is? I don't know what there is in this world. In fact, I really want this island-level world view, but I suggest that the low-level things be explained clearly first, and the high-level things can be clicked on first, or expanded bit by bit later. It reminds me of the King of Fairy City that I liked very much back then!

The logic of this book is not quite right. The protagonist of this book is just a dead thing in other books.

Setting the worldview is a bit interesting, but the writing style is a bit old-fashioned

It's a pity. I think the setting and writing are quite good. The author must first grasp the rhythm of the plot and avoid making people bored. Twenty can express attitudes, but don't write about sensitive issues so directly and bluntly. If you can't grasp it, the feedback will not be good.