Doomsday Train: Start with Daily Intelligence

If it were written by someone, it would be studio fast food. You will be given what you want. In less than ten chapters, two women were given away. The protagonist was instantly invincible. He single-handedly killed more than a dozen mutants without even breaking a sweat. I suggest you not waste your money.

You really can't get along with the locomotive, right? The first one is specially made for rich people, and the second one is a fortress. Do you know what a fortress is? In the end, it's still a locomotive. The third one is a sea fortress, and you have another locomotive...

I won't talk about other things, but my brother was having a good time running for his life. Look at the part where you wrote about classmates, you were still smiling! I almost thought it was a vacation.

Breaking the zero reply, I still like the introduction. I will save it first.

Although I was scolded miserably by everyone, I did learn a lot, and I feel very grateful in my heart. I would like to share my insights here. 1. Before publishing the book, I only thought about signing the contract, thinking that all I needed to do was sign the contract, but in the end I didn't do a good job of setting up the world view and settings. As a result, the things written do not have the flavor of apocalypse, like the hydrology of a studio. In fact, I should write more plots to describe the taste of doomsday, and then set up a clearer upgrade system. 2. The character setting is not done well, so I want to quickly add the heroine to interact with and extend the plot. As a result, the overall rhythm seemed very rushed. I finally understand why the masters always like to assign a younger brother, sister or aunt to the protagonist from the beginning... 3. The heroine has almost no emotional line, and there is no logic in emotional advancement. Only then did I realize that I actually can't write emotions. 4. I found that readers of Qidian actually prefer the feeling of being narrated and experiencing the feeling of being immersed in the atmosphere and getting stronger. What I wrote did not have that sense of atmosphere, and the description of getting stronger was not good enough, which caused readers to constantly be distracted and unable to immerse themselves in it. In short, I have learned a lot. Some of these questions have answers, and some have not yet, but I will find a way to solve them no matter what. I really didn't know about these issues before. I had been thinking about how to sign a contract. But it's okay, without everyone's feedback, I would never know what the problems are. Now I know these problems.