Ghost Back Rampage in One Piece

His setting is quite handsome and strong, but his character is very unattractive, scornful, inhuman and perverted. If the author decides on his own protagonist's character, which is easy to write and not OOC, plug in the blood of Vanma, plus the talent of ghost back, use the ghost back to drive domineering and fight Garp, and compete with Kaido for the strongest creature on the earth. After defeating Kaido, he told Kaido that everything except domineering is impure. This makes it look good to write! ! ! ! !

Anyway, I think that if Yujiro from Sabaya becomes a pirate, he will be able to fight fishermen like Arlong, and his strength will be at the level of an ordinary HQ lieutenant general at most.

It doesn't feel right. First of all, the first sentence is that the purity is too low. There is something wrong with it. The purity in the blade refers to the thought in the mind when seeing a strong person: "This person is so strong, I want to find an excuse to fight with him." Therefore, the sentence "purity is too low" should be used to modify the swordsman, and Non-Spring Boxer Secondly, although the description of eating is the norm in semicircle comics, it is not so abstract. It is a failure to inexplicably create deep-sea meat. It must use things that the audience knows to reflect its exaggeration to be more convincing.

This is my first time 😌

Isn't your setting simply causing war?

If the author sets it as Bai Piyong, then his combat power is too strong; if it is Black Piyong, his character is too wild.

I didn't see any main plot, so I just kept playing, which was very boring.

It looks a bit too messy, and the author has changed the last double quotation marks of each dialogue into front double quotation marks.