Reborn as a Gentle White Moonlight, Yet Determined to Become an Emperor Through Ruthless Means

Looking forward and backward, hesitating, and all kinds of passivity, it is more female than female. I don't say how this kind of writing is and the character is, but in male channels, it is just disgusting. Transformation writing is not female style writing, and it should not always be about men's clothing. The true style of male style is not about emphasizing gender, whether the behavior is hard or soft, that's just the appearance. A fierce look but a vicious look, it all depends on whether the method is crisp and clean.

Chapter 6 I can't stand it. Apart from anything else, the plot in which the protagonist is attacked by a sneak attack is purely written in a female channel, so let's just forget about being wronged The master is the leader of the sect, and she is also a saint. However, she was unjustly accused and was attacked without saying a word? Not even asking for compensation? It feels like the elder Jindan was wronged by a Qi practitioner disciple in a female video Pure trash

The protagonist's sect and master are different. This saint's position is by the wayside. It's strange that the data is good

I don't understand. I clicked on the single heroine search. Can the tag of single heroine be used in this way? I looked over and over in the introduction but couldn't find any words that looked like they should be found in a male video. I felt like opening them would pollute my eyes

As the author, I can only say that the style of the female channel you wrote is indecisive and engages in female competition. However, the title of your book indicates that it is a Yakuza. What does the Yakuza style mean in a male channel? It's about adding physical strength, it's about big muscles, it's about the excitement of fighting, it's about killing decisively, it's about killing your whole family and it's a bloody battle. You have to be strong and domineering enough in writing. What kind of extreme is it if you're not strong enough? People and things that don't go your way are all killed with one punch. Master manipulates me to kill them. Junior sister's green tea is an eyesore to me and I'll kill them. , How dare you humiliate me like this, I will kill him within three chapters. The process is to upgrade and add points to kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill and kill.

If written as Lily, more people would read it.

Children of Destiny can be found everywhere. When you encounter them, you must backstab them before you react. You cannot kill decisively, eradicate the roots, or absorb talents because of the loss of lifespan. You don't know how to get it for nothing if you don't invest before investing. It's like the author doesn't write down the enemy of the protagonist and starts to improve the word count before it is published. It is tantamount to daydreaming.

I'm just curious about how the author thinks, why can the protagonist's decisions be deliberately made to maximize losses? It's really just a scumbag who can show Hong Wen to others. At the beginning of the duel with Bai Qingqing, each opponent's swordsmanship was stronger than the previous one, and the power of the ninth move was maximized. A normal person's idea is to stop her combo as early as possible, but the protagonist's idea is: I can't fight head-on with fists and swords, so I have to dodge first and look for opportunities. As a result, I had to wait until the eighth move to interrupt. I didn't even say it, but I was beaten hard. I could only force the ninth move, which was the strongest. Fortunately, the final value was enough to win. The Son of Destiny at the back, who possesses all-knowing powers, would have been fine if he absorbed his talent and activated the magic weapon for protection. However, he refused to use it because he had to worry about his lifespan. As a result, he was almost beaten to death by the enemy with the magic weapon, and he was saved by the author's cheating. In the end, I still sucked up the talent. The difference from doing it at the beginning is that I can be beaten to coma one more time...

After reading it, I summarized it. The subject matter is very good, but the plot and writing style need to be improved. I feel that some kind of divine body, some holy body, some divine destiny, and destiny have appeared in this world. It is like a street vendor, and I can see through others at any stage of Qi training and foundation building. Physique, other people's destiny, and cultivation level are also rising rapidly. There is no detailed description. Physical constitution, divine destiny and other things are also taken away casually. For example, Bai Qingqing's jade bracelet seems to be able to take away other people's talents after wearing it without any side effects, which is a bit unreasonable. At first, I thought that the heroine should take the route of continuous self-improvement, relying on the function of the Holy Body to continuously deduce the skills she has learned and strengthen her combat power, instead of relying on grabbing more of this and that. It is too confusing. At present, there seems to be nothing outstanding about the heroine. That is, the author has not focused on developing a certain talent in the heroine and made it her trump card. Instead, she has been involved in everything, giving people a very powerful but mixed feeling without being refreshing. My personal suggestion is that the author improves the quality of the previous content first, and then consider other things.

The revised Chapter 6 is not very good either. Ninety percent of the top sect members no longer side with the sect master. How can this be called "burying one's head in doing things for the sect"? If you really do it seriously enough, at least there will be people who will support you based on the benefits you bring to them, right? If it doesn't bring benefits to the sect, then you say you did something wrong? (Ps: In short, this sect leader is pure trash.) In the end, he turned around and said, "The sect will not treat you badly." Do you believe this? What guarantee do you have?