Lingcong: I Come from Jiuchuan

I stayed up late last night and finished reading the latest chapter. After a brief evaluation, the conclusion is the title. First of all, the author has a thorough understanding of the Ling Cong worldview. At least he has watched all the TV series and Yuekui Zhuan. At the same time, he respects the original worldview very much and does not introduce any messy settings. Even if there is something that he wants to express himself, it cannot conflict with the original settings. I think this is one of the basic requirements of a good fan. , The author is currently the only one among all Qidian Lingcong fans who has achieved this (searching for Lingcong will bring up a bunch of messy articles, and you can tell by the title that it is a bad article, so you don't want to click on it to read). In addition, the author's book title is very good, and the reading comprehension is not done. It stands out when compared with other book titles. At least I will choose to click on this one. Secondly, the characterization is very careful, especially the language description, which is very comfortable to read and does not sound dramatic. It gives people the feeling that "the words are spoken by this character". This is the second basic requirement. The characters must conform to the original work. The author has done a very good job. The most important thing is that the plot is to my liking. I read the fanfic just to make up for the regrets of the original work. The original work is so bad, can't the fanfic be sweeter?) From the first chapter, I have been looking forward to the reunion of Boss Bai's father and daughter and the reunion of brother and sister. I have already met Ash in the new chapter, and I am excited. The two worlds collide, and the plot is indispensable with explosive points. The readers feel comfortable watching it. The plot rhythm is also very good so far. However, the world view of the spirit cage has not been fully revealed yet, so the author can be more stable in recommending the plot. Finally, please update, please update three times, four times and five times 😆

I originally wanted to ask the male protagonist why he is not a time traveler and doesn't know the plot, but suddenly I realized that the anime is still being serialized, and the author doesn't even know the plot, let alone the male protagonist.

The writing is really good. Even if you haven't read the original work, you can basically follow the plot and understand the world (like me who have watched one or two episodes). It's really good food. It's a bit like a group drama, the protagonists are the male protagonist and his two children. At present, it looks a bit similar to the invincible flow Nagada. If you like it, you can really get started! ! ! Also, when reading a book, you have to follow it, otherwise you won't feel that way. It's just right now.

Although there are some flaws, it is considered one of the few books I have read, gkdgkd

In the latest episode, many people said that 4068 people are good and they never forget their friends when they become rich. But what I want to say is that he got all this by stepping on Mark and Ran Bing. Mark and Ran Bing didn't feel sorry for him, right? Some people say that he was also forced to do nothing, and it was all Charles' fault. Yes, I never deny that Charles was wrong, but this does not mean that 4068 is right. No matter what happens, if it infringes on the legitimate rights and interests of others, no matter what the excuse is, it is wrong. Right and wrong cannot be confused [angry]

Ends at 12:18 noon on 6.27. 1. Adjusted Bai Yuekui's name for Mana Giant in the whole book, changing it from Mana Giant to Mana Prime. 2. Adjusted the living status of Bai Yuetian in the wasteland world of the book, changing it from death to keeping a brain and living in a jar. Focus on adjusting the relevant descriptions and character psychology of Chapter 29, Chapter 62, Chapter 63, and Chapter 64. 3. The introduction of new branch content. In Chapter 64, a new branch line of Bai Yuetian's prosthetic transformation in the wasteland was added. 4. Fine-tuned the character dialogue in Chapters 48 and 58, added the identity setting of Morgan as Gray's son-in-law, and added the name of Gray's daughter, Mei Wei. (Added at 13:02 noon on 6.27) 5. Adjusted the dialogue in Chapter 97. Now Broken Star goes to the ecological base to take Kolova with him, and Po Kong follows Kolova to the ecological base (Added at 11:47 noon on 7.11). 6. Adjust the inner monologue at the end of Chapter 36. Now the village has Angel Potion, but there is no Miracle K. The patch is online. You can long press the corresponding chapter name in the chapter directory to clear the cache to view the post-patch content. It is still undergoing fine-tuning. If there are any drastic changes in the future, it will be updated in the chapter comments and this post.

The plot of the anime is broken and not as good as the plot of your novel.

Living in Bengbu, I feel that the spiritual cage is rotten. The subsequent plot is too guessing, but I prefer to forget about guessing and have to make people sick in the details. I can understand the follow-up, but he has to make atonement like Marco, but Marco just let it go with one sentence, without even apologizing. It is reasonable but really uncomfortable to watch. Charles and Morgan didn't even bother to say it. After working on it for a long time, you didn't follow the three rules yourself? Is that stupid, stupid and bad? What are some people saying? Charles has finally regained his emotions, and the Three Laws are finally being abolished. Oh, it's been a long time since you, the city lord, and your family were powerful before the Three Laws and ate meat every day. After the Three Laws, you are still powerful. You drink and eat meat, and your family can still be together every day. That is pure suffering. The people below are suffering, let us shout a slogan from above to eliminate dissidents and consolidate our rule. Life will continue as usual and become more comfortable. Now that we can no longer hide it, we have no choice but to go with the flow and abolish the three laws. You can also win a good reputation. You will get both fame and fortune. Win twice. There is also the story about Charles's mermaid who has to make sacrifices before she can get anything. I wonder if Charles's journey through the abyss was not of his own free will? That was because Senger pointed a gun at his head before he went in. Wasn't it just because he was forced to do so? What does enlightenment and sacrifice have to do with it? In the end, he didn't die and was given the title of savior. Okay, you win. All the good things have gone to your city lord and his family. The people below are soda ash. If they didn't reincarnate into your city lord's family, they deserve to be treated like monkeys by you.

The author is a very lonely person. If there is no comment after updating, the author will be autistic that day😭😭😭

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"Consider the overall situation" Refers to the commander Mark who framed the external exploration team in the doomsday survival crisis in order to seize power "Dare to sacrifice" Only the leader of the Light and Shadow Society has been a master since he was a child. Crunchy biscuits, he eats Western-style steak and red wine, and always sits and sends others to die. Except for the Mark riot that he created (if this can be considered a frontline), he has never been on the frontline for a day. Those who finally stepped into the abyss were forced to go in How could he have the brains to say such a thing? How dare he apply these two words to Charles? Oh my god (╯°□°)╯ ┻━┻

Someone copied Tomato, please copy it. Everyone, please report

The biggest problem in the second season is that I feel that Charles, a man with no talent, morals and incompetence, is praised too highly. This freshman is not worthy of it.

I feel like the three laws are bullshit. Can they make people have no emotions? Emotions are not just family affection, love, and friendship. The spirit cage seems to specifically refer to these three. Chenxi Hall is also shit. They directly use artificial embryos, and they can also select sperm and eggs. The genes are not better, but the speed is faster.

In fact, as long as you write fast enough, abundantly and excitingly, you will be the orthodox Ling Cage writer, and the one at Station B will be the fanfic.

Prison Dream, have you watched the latest episode of Spirit Cage Season 2, Episode 8? Let's increase the firepower of the old world. The automatic defense cannons found in Dragon Bone Village, which are similar to those on warships, can produce regiment-level firepower, as well as electromagnetic bombs. The forces on the ground are more powerful than the lighthouse imagined. Otherwise, humans on the ground have already established contact and cooperation. Alliance, Lighthouse is currently a bandit, thinking that I am the best in the world, and I can rob whoever I want. I don't want to negotiate with humans on the ground at all, and I have no concept of working together in times of crisis. If Lighthouse keeps such information occlusion and self-brainwashing, it deserves to fall underground😎😎😎

Really buddy, compared to you, the books at the top of the list are all 💩, better than 💩. I don't understand why the same book 💩 can be ranked so high. Why is it ranked low if it is so well written?

I don't know if it's an issue with the anime serialization, but this is one of those rare fanfics that I find unpleasant to read. The core of fan fiction is to create a second or even third time based on the background of others, so as to achieve the goal of enjoyment. Whether this pleasure comes from the foil of the protagonist of the original work, or it is a unique feature of the original work that is particularly consistent with the original work but other readers have not discovered it. But in the final analysis, it still has to be fun. I emphasize again that fun does not mean Long Aotian or brainlessness. It is a feeling that makes readers unable to stop. But this book is weird and perfectly staggers all the cool points. The first is the three-line narrative, Boss Bai, The Lighthouse, and Before the Doomsday. For the sake of multi-line narrative, the previous line was obviously going to be exciting, but suddenly the line was cut off. I don't know who handed it in, and I was speechless. Secondly, they rashly increase the difficulty of the original work, thus creating difficulties for the protagonist group that do not exist before. Although the reasons given in the book are very good, this kind of behavior is extremely inappropriate for the early stage of the novel, because the best way for the early stage of the fan fiction is the original difficulty (easy difficulty for the fan protagonist), and in the later stage, when there is nothing to write, the difficulty begins. When you go up the difficulty level from the beginning, it gives people a very disgusting feeling of abuse of the master. The fanfic is written as a fantasy novel (relying on pressure to advance the plot). Finally, this is what I personally don't like very much, because when I opened this book at first glance, my inner thought was to rely on the peaceful world to feed the apocalyptic world, and then open up the world to save the apocalypse. As a result, you caused the doomsday protagonist group to run away together before the doomsday! What I want to see is that the pre-apocalypse will be used as logistics to counterattack the apocalyptic world. It would be better for you to use the post-apocalypse as an intelligence point, and then ensure that we get through the apocalypse before the apocalypse. It is completely reversed from what I want to see. It is the same as the disgusting writing method in the other world genre, which has a portal to travel back and forth to another world reality. You don't want to rely on real-life logistics to write more about the development of the other world, but you want to stay in a remote place in the other world and write the reality. It makes people extremely speechless. In short, this is my impression after reading it so far. I hope it can be improved in the future. After all, this book is really good among fan fiction.

It's acceptable to lose your appetite a few times, but it's boring if you keep losing it. It keeps suddenly switching to other threads, and you have to wait two or three days to switch back. Moreover, the other threads keep losing your appetite, which makes you crazy. Reading is still tiring, and sometimes you just want to give up. After all, there are several other well-written fanfics!

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It's very well written, and the characters stand up so far. The animation is still too immature in character creation, but there are still some problems that I don't know how the author will deal with later. With the current situation of the second season of Spirit Cage, the animation may collapse. The PV plot is a little inconsistent with the content of the first and second seasons. I don't know how to round out the animation. If I update more than 100 chapters, the plot may collapse. I hope the author will release the follow-up immediately and slap me in the face. I will update 100 chapters tomorrow 😢

Let me predict the contents of the following four episodes: On the ground, Muzoma appears in every episode, and the fighting between the two sides continues. 4068 And Bai Yuequimak met in the last episode and were about to communicate. At this time, the Devouring Beast launched a massive attack. The two sides shook hands and made peace, temporarily agreeing to the outside world. On the lighthouse, the Abyssal One experimented until the last episode, but they still couldn't figure it out. At this time, the Devouring Beast had rushed to the lighthouse and was in danger. Charles said that I would come in person and the whole situation was over. Summary: Bai Yuekui is not dead, Mark is not awakened, Ran Bing is not resurrected, the people in the abyss are not understood, the function of the eye tumor is unclear, and Master Lai does not show his face, so please tune in to the next season. Waiting for a slap in the face

The illustrations of Yue Kui Zhuan perfectly fit the book😍

Damn it! Is the explosive update actually a chapter?

Dear author, I have looked at all kinds of websites, paid or free, and the ones you write are the most consistent with the world view. I will give you two monthly passes to cheer you up.

No matter what the situation is, it's best to check information, take notes, listen to opinions, organize ideas, save manuscripts, and update again after such a long time! Don't stop willfully, come at will.

Laughter analysis: author of five episodes, quality assurance

Why not update it? Such a beautiful, interesting, creatively written science fiction

You. . . Forget it, the updates are pretty good, more would be better.