A Mo Dao Crushed the Tang Dynasty

A piece of advice for those who want to hear cool stories. It's quite fun to write a book about killing people. Forget it if you write a book about fighting for hegemony. As long as the protagonists are basically pawns, it's not a big deal if you have to kill your own soldiers in order to win over the enemy's subordinates.

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For a chapter game, you can arrange the identity and background of the time-traveling protagonist, but it won't work after sixteen years, or you can write down what improvements the protagonist has done over the years and ultimately failed. Is it not against peace to live submissively for more than ten years and then dare to enlist in the army and fight for one's life?

People from the north don't dream about elephants, and people from the south don't dream about camels. Those born in Liangzhou are called Chaosheng. It's so strange.

After reading Chapter 30, I felt a little bit unable to stand it, mainly because I couldn't convince myself logically. You are a cavalryman. He is not an infantryman who can become a cavalryman by just riding a horse, especially if he has to attack the enemy's rear. You, a group of infantrymen in a big fighting army, do not train and then directly ride on horses and become cavalrymen. It was difficult to keep up with the enemy on horseback for a long time, let alone fight against the enemy on horseback and hit the rear. The soldiers could not leave the reins with both hands, let alone hold weapons. Although you have 500 cavalry assigned to you by Huangfu, you have divided your forces in the back and relied on the infantry from the previous battle army. You lead a group of mounted infantry to attack the rear. I really can't accept this.

When I read Chapter 7, I felt that a lot of it was too nonsense. I understand that you want to write about the background of the common people in the prosperous Tang Dynasty, but this is not the case in many cases. For example, a team is working frantically on the first echelon of soldiers to attack a city. It is not necessary at all. The main reason is that these are disposable tools. You can just arrest people after they are dead. There is no need to bother with these. If you have practiced hard, how can these tools work in wartime?

I don't understand why many authors insist on writing plots that make readers uncomfortable. I stopped reading it after Chen Da died. I bought a post specifically to set the fan value in my speech.

The rebellion is inexplicable. It's only because the rebellion hasn't been put down at this point in time that there's something wrong with it. How about some brains?

Is this enough to overwhelm Datang? I thought it was the courage of an overlord, but this is the result?

The title of the book is Mo Dao, and I started playing with artillery in the early stage! I can't stand it anymore

1. There is no golden finger to bring food, but subordinates with unlimited loyalty are good seeds. Why can you not eat human flesh and increase taxes? 2. Without background and family background, who is willing to help you? Who do you rely on for so much territory? Cultivate yourself and don't dream about it, okay? 3. Doctrine in mouth, business in heart. Shrimp head

I was attracted by the writing at the beginning. The overall structure of the novel is complete. It has all the necessary things such as golden fingers, conflicts, main lines, and character descriptions. The more I read, the more strange it becomes. The rhythm of the novel is not well controlled. The first six or seven chapters are all low-paced, and the protagonist becomes more and more miserable and aggrieved. Therefore, the first impression given by the protagonist is that of a loser. First impressions are important, and so are the protagonists. The issue of satisfaction is that when the protagonist is facing difficulties, he will show his golden finger and solve the difficulty or even make a comeback. This is the time when the golden finger appears and the feeling of satisfaction will be there. Captain Chen either writes poorly and is replaced or overthrown by the protagonist, or he writes well and helps the protagonist quickly gain experience or upgrade. The writing is neither good nor bad, and he has written so much space that the protagonist's rhythm is very slow. If I hadn't known the author as a novice, I would have thought that he was deliberately slowing down the pace. There is also a small loophole. The protagonist has traveled more than ten years and is about to join the army. He only has a few hundred coins to give to the recruiter. Why did he go there so early? The main character is stupid. The soldier recruiter didn't want these few hundred coins. He felt that this was unreasonable. He would have secretly collected it and then dismissed the protagonist casually. Although he is angry and does not believe that the protagonist can read and ride a horse, he may let the protagonist try it first. The author insists on arranging the protagonist to join the big battle army, which is a bit far-fetched and deliberate. There are other places. The work still needs to be researched and polished more, so that there are fewer inferior quality issues.

All of a sudden, it was a mess. . I guess I'm about to finally run away.

It looks really depressing, and it feels very refreshing but also quite frustrating. The writing is quite good. I can't describe it well. It just makes me uncomfortable to watch. The more I read, the less I want to read it.

Huangchao's gold content has been rising

It was okay before it was put on the shelves, but after it was put on the shelves, I felt that the writing was a bit confusing and there was no connection at all. Is this the opposite?

To be honest, the character of the protagonist is not established at all. The trivial details are written in a grinding manner. How dare you call Dong's subordinates dirty when you kill them? This description of Ning's behavior is really nauseating. Li also wrote it so brainlessly that Wang didn't explain it? And then he was smashed to death, so cool

Nengba, a mountain of corpses and a sea of ​​blood, a young boy becomes famous, and he is a time traveler. What kind of plot is dealt with? Nangba, one general achieves everything, and all the bones are withered. The author has too little life experience. No wonder I am completely blind to the recent plot when I look at Nangba. When I said before, I ransacked my house, and if I wiped out my clan, I wiped out my clan. Now... Bye.

1 In the Tang Dynasty, there is only a description of the Mo Dao similar to that of a horse-cutting sword. So far, no finished murals have been passed down. The Mo Dao in all movies and TV shows is the most obscene nowadays 2 The Mo Dao is high in cost. In ancient times, there were many iron impurities. Its lethality is not as good as that of a spear. Stabbing takes less effort than chopping, and puncture wounds More deadly, and human bones are very hard 3. Restraining cavalry is even more impossible. The strongest thing about cavalry is their mobility. They can fight if they want, harass when they want, and attack your logistics. Mo Dao has no possibility of defeating cavalry, and its practicality is too low. He can only wait for cavalry to come, let alone restrain cavalry

The most problematic part of this book is that the protagonist did nothing for more than ten years before time travel, and then was forced to join the army before revealing all kinds of knowledge about his past life No matter how much money he spent in the first ten years, he should have recorded some things or established some relationships to ensure a stable life in the future Or just write and just go through it.

More refinement! ! More refinement! !

The monthly ticket is given, the book has been paid attention to, and I forgot to restore it as soon as possible.

Hello author, after reading what you wrote, all I can say is, come on brother, what won't overwhelm you is ultimately your motivation for success. You don't have much money, and I personally want to reward you a little. I hope you remember this. Your father brought you into this world. He has many problems, but I can tell from the words that you still love him. He doesn't want to drag you down, which means that he also loves you in his heart. You also said that his gambling was rigged. I hope you will take more care of me in the days to come. The greatest pain in life is to wait until you are capable but find that the people and things you care about are no longer there.

Everyone has their own sufferings. Others don't understand or empathize. When I was a child, my family environment was similar to yours. My mother left when I was fourteen. I started working early for 15 years. Now I am 28 years old. I am still looking for a job. I have started a business before, but it failed. The only thing I have never put down in my life is reading novels. If you don't have more, you can take the monthly pass. If you have more, you will lose it.

Come on, author! I'll write after the housework is settled and I feel better. I'll wait for you!

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?