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When I saw the title Childhood Sweethearts, I knew the general plot of this book.
Football is at the top, 1 on 11
I'm afraid that the description of the fight between adopted sons and biological sons for family property is too disgusting. Are there many examples in real society? 🥵
Why write about childhood sweethearts? It's so big abroad🐏🐴
Haha be the first to speak, speed up the update
You can see, there are still some flaws.
For one, the author wants to write about everything, and each game is about the same length. Internet novels, such as online novels, are still based on articles and seem to have no focus. If Real Madrid, Barcelona and Atletico Madrid in La Liga were written in more detail, it would be more reasonable for the other chapter to end. There are many competitions, in addition to the league and the King's Cup. There are 38 league rounds for 20 teams in the league, the first three rounds of the King's Cup are single knockout rounds, four to seven rounds of double round robin plus the finals, a total of 12 games. There is no problem in making up 100 chapters. There are also national team games, a lot. It is best to awaken the memory, as it is troublesome for natives to write. Secondly, the author's information is not complete, and reporters 1 and 2 make people laugh. Just make up a random Jeanna Sanchez. Thirdly, the social relationship can be omitted, especially the underage Qingmei, which does not add any bonus to the novel, and the foster family will even lose points. If you don't know how to write about family relationships, you can just use it as an orphan. You can adopt it. The most important thing is that the biological son has been found. Why are you dragging him over to play football? It's like calling my teacher in the composition, and you write about how naughty his son is. The number of words is just water. Because the teacher is dealing with students, and the person who trains the children is the parent, who has nothing to do with the teacher. I have read several football novels about Qingmei, but they were not satisfactory. To put it bluntly, you haven't even written a serious football article clearly, and you still write about family love, so it doesn't count. The excitement of adolescence can only be beautiful wishes. Adults still think it's too childish for childhood sweethearts to grow old together. Finally, the words of netizens and the words of the audience should be put aside. If you write more, you will drown. Come on, we will be the first to place an order after it is put on the shelves. Whether you can order them all depends on whether you can correct the shortcomings later.
When I entered the national football team, I just read a book and realized that I could score goals. The other system rewards regular skills, such as being able to score 100% goals in the penalty area and shooting with a zero angle with the heel. I think this kind of skills may allow the national football team to enter the World Cup
Can a 16-year-old in La Liga sign a professional contract now?