Rebuilding a Chaebol’s Life on the Peninsula

There was some interaction before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it was just a game. I guess the data was too miserable 🙂

The latest newcomer is Wan Yan Tuan🙂

I can't guarantee that 2/3 thousand words will be updated in one day. The posture of a eunuch

Park Ji-yeon

Li Zhien

Zero Yoona

Cut it again, this start is quite toxic, I was tricked by my uncle into serving, and I was manipulated in various ways when I came out. If I want to provide the first pot of gold, I can change the writing. The plot is also very watery.

Although there are quite a few women on the scene, they all feel distant and dispensable to me. They have nothing to do with career and have no emotions. Either write one or two main chapters first, or write it directly as a plutocratic novel. There is no heroine, only women. If you intersperse two chapters in the middle of your career, it is like scratching the surface. You can't establish a character and there is no sense of satisfaction. Wasn't it originally written about business? Directly invest money and resources, coupled with their own appearance and career, most of them can succeed. The next two people who really like to pursue it with their heart are not as attractive as you are now. Also, if you don't want to end it, don't get married. You can have children, but no one likes to read about married life. Don't be like the one in the farm. It's strange that the heroine compromises when the Shura field is not good in the later period. Finally, write quickly and don't stop updating.

Chapter 47 is annoying to watch. It seems to have eliminated the threat and helped the opponent, but in fact, it informed the opponent of all effective attacks. It is a huge loss.

Park Ji-yeon