Online Game: NPC Militia Recruited from the Start

The protagonist reminds me of Xiang Yu; his individual combat power is off the charts. But this is a team game, and the author doesn't give him any overpowered abilities. He just improves little by little, like squeezing toothpaste, which is frustrating to watch.

The main character's army relies solely on the main character. Stop constantly buffing the supporting characters and look at the main character's army. Only the main character is truly capable; the rest are just average at their level. You're only buffing the supporting characters, not the main character's troops. Without the main character, the army is useless.

Team assignments are based on luck rather than contribution, plus some NTR storylines, and the protagonist's character changes frequently.

Your title made me think it was fan fiction about some game. I only realized it was an online game novel because I was quick to react. Perhaps you should consider changing the beginning to "Online Game Novel".

I commented on chapter 228. Author, please explain what happened in that chapter! Giving away treasure chests and new troops—you can't just suppress it like that! Couldn't you have done it secretly? Why even write about it? You could have just given the troop to someone else! Why write about it at all?

Eunuchs always start by not updating seriously, and the author is currently showing clear signs of self-castration.

Why do people read novels? Isn't it to see things that don't exist in real life? I have a guaranteed pity system in games, and I have one in novels too? Everyone eats dumplings during Chinese New Year, right? And what about those legendary items? Your combat power can remain the same, but you need the equipment!

A very novel writing style: the protagonist is a native NPC who cooperates with a player (who is also a part-female character), sharing profits 50/50, and they go on adventures in the game world, similar to a Heroes of Might and Magic novel.

The protagonist's strength increases too slowly; his combat power is still barely above average.

The main character's team feels too mixed. Why are all the demons in the party? Can a Templar Lancer and a demon be in the same team? We talked about similarity before, but demons definitely don't have much of an appeal.