Starting from the Purple Jade Gourd and Becoming Evergreen

The second generation of Han Lao Mo 🙂

After reading the reviews so far, I think it's a good product, and I can look forward to the future. Since you are in the mortal stream and have a golden finger similar to the little green bottle, you have to follow the footsteps of Old Demon Han and protect everyone in front of you. The main line must be to practice hard and find a stable place as much as possible to upgrade. When you reach the Nascent Soul Tape stage, it is the climax to tape. Wangyu has a lot of tips for downloading dungeons, such as arranging opportunities and treasures for the protagonist. The dungeon is not discovered by the protagonist, but there are things that the protagonist needs. At this time, the protagonist comes out of seclusion for a long time to replenish supplies. When the dungeon is about to be opened, he is invited to download the dungeon. There is a reward to get it and there is a chance to get the dungeon. After downloading the dungeon, the people around him are wiped out due to various dangers, and the protagonist takes advantage of the situation. When arriving at the core area of ​​the dungeon, the protagonist has to be the oriole behind to get the best stuff and run away. Or take the best things in advance, discover that the core of the copy is in great danger, run away in advance, and the protagonist silently becomes the big winner. This kind of silently making a fortune is the most satisfying. The final reminder is not to write about the protagonist being targeted at every turn, as if the whole world is against the protagonist. No one will offend others casually. Both the protagonist and supporting characters should have online IQs.

Come on, as long as the fighting scenes don't involve cutting and slashing with weapons, it's a good fairy tale.

Are there multiple heroines? If it has no heroine or only one heroine, don't watch it.

There are many imitations of ordinary people, but many of them exaggerate the golden finger and suppress the protagonist's cultivation. This book can be relaxed and moderate, which is better than 80% of ordinary people's novels on the market. Also, it would be better if you come up with your own new ideas.

Personally, I feel that the writing style is relatively immature at the beginning, and there is a lot of room for improvement, but there is no obvious poisonous point. It is considered a good mortal's food. Remember to stay tight and don't waste it. At present, the protagonist is following the template of Han Laomo. The bad thing is the escape weapon. The author will arrange it as soon as possible. It's good to go up, and there are formations, so you have to arrange new opportunities. Whether you encounter a formation genius transaction, or you need to inherit and lick the package when you download the dungeon, you must arrange it as soon as possible. Finally, I would like to remind you to remember to prevent fire and destroy the corpses and traces after killing people and licking the package

Not bad, why are my grades so bad? I'm really worried about the author eunuch

The indigenous protagonist and the sense of déjà vu in the legend of a mortal cultivating immortality

Author, there are too many narrations, but the plot is advancing. It takes a long time to explain everything. There is no plot at the end of one chapter. It all depends on the narrations you wrote.

Your talisman came out too early. No matter how you play in the later stage, your steps will be messed up easily.

It's good and well written. There are more dungeons and more exercises to practice the demonic body and body. Kill the monks instead of wasting your soul. You can enter the corpse into the banner and refine it into a demonic corpse. All these will enhance the protagonist's strength. I like to read Mortal-style novels, and I'm also looking forward to seeing what the main character's natal magic weapon is. I personally recommend Ten Thousand Soul Banners to have a complete set of magic weapons.

Is he a eunuch? I saw it before I started watching it and asked first.

It's okay. It's just that the character description of the protagonist is not good. Others are okay.

If the author wants to make money, I feel that this setting is not fun enough and the money comes in fast enough. If I want to gain reputation, the slow pace is fine.

Does the author have an outline? Were you enthusiastic about creating in the early stage? If I hadn't estimated the probability of being a eunuch, it would be a bit high. I read several well-written books, but I committed suicide because of the lack of publicity and lack of follow-up reading. The Invincibles of the East have had too many.

4...4 Monthly passes? The author still dares to write

Authors like to imitate, so it is better to write about ordinary people directly. This way, the results will be better, and they will not be eunuchs.

Come on