Tycoon: I Can Withdraw My Ancestors' Fortune
神豪：我能提现祖宗财富
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 205k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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Synopsis
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96Chapters
1.3kRecommendations
3.5kFans
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Nobody reads your style. Your first book was great; people liked your realistic portrayal of arrogance because everyone is an ordinary person who needs to project themselves onto the protagonist and fantasize about becoming powerful and wealthy. Ideally, you'd have a single word that commands a huge following. That's satisfying.
There are too many books about picking up girls, and none of them are particularly good. The story of grandfathers making money is also only briefly mentioned. What makes this theme unique is that it involves time travel and making money. There are too many books about picking up girls, so keep it simple. There's no need to go into too much detail about showing off.
The plot shouldn't be exhaustive... The hotel singing, games, and women are too verbose; it would be much better to break it down into three parts and embed them with other plot elements... Many people probably stopped watching because they're experiencing aesthetic fatigue.
A bowl of noodles is 90% soup
I spent several hours catching up on the updates.
Seeing the latest update, I have a few impressions: the plot points are numerous and well-connected; the author is emotionally rich, knowledgeable, and wise. The only drawback is the infrequent updates. 🙂 4k words daily, giving you a voice. 6K words a day, I'm rooting for you! 8K words daily, monthly votes welcome! Daily 10,000-word update, likes and recommendations With 20,000 words updated daily, you'll have a great scholar to debate the classics for you!
It's a really well-written novel that you can even learn something from; it's not just a mindless shopping story. I'll definitely subscribe to it as soon as it's released. It's great!
It's really beautiful.
The author should probably start over. The writing is alright, but the premise—the contradictory theory—is problematic. You say you can change the past, but will the present change too? It's even uncertain if you exist now. Unless you refine this theory, the novel's potential is limited.
Why don't you just take your previous novel, the one with the "big brother" persona that your brothers wanted to see, and start a new one based on everyone's suggestions? It'll definitely work. You've cut it over and over again...
Do you really need to look at this to pick up girls? It mainly depends on your ancestors. Your ancestors are only briefly mentioned; now you're describing them in so much detail.
Boring. It's already so watered down before it's even released. Hurry up and write about your ancestors. Stop watering down your real-life dating stuff.