
Time Traveling Condor: I'm Crazy for the West
穿越神雕:我为西狂
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- 1.2M Words
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- Martial Arts
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- Male
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- Wuxia Fan Fiction
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- 4mo ago
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- Qidian
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There is a male protagonist and the remaining characters are all female, which shows the characteristics of this book.
It's so uncomfortable to listen to the book. There are hundreds of Yang Guos in one chapter.
Write quickly, it's all for you
The heroine cannot live without Huang Rong, just as the martial arts district cannot live without Jerusalem
Jin Yong is really a weirdo. Nowadays, many people should send him blades, right?
Your protagonist can't even change Guo Fu, so you ask the protagonist to change Song Meng?
Aunt Guo, let's play a friendly match too
No wonder this author has written more than 1 million words and is still level 2
After reading the previous free chapter, Yang Guo wrote the same thing as rz, does an adult's soul hate someone and show it on his face? Don't you know any other way? Cheng Ying, who had to cold-violate a child and offended Guo Fu, was isolated and then left without saying goodbye. He left the money so that he could kill Guo Jing directly. Forget it, he still had to beat those three losers. What was reasonable turned into unreasonable. Suddenly, people being bullied from a weak point under the roof turned into a conflict between children. Then he ran away for fear of being retaliated by adults.
Xiaowu pushed Lu Wushuang, and the protagonist slapped him so hard that his nose bleeded... Guo Fu sneaked up on the protagonist and let him go easily. You... Graduated from Sichuan University, are you so licking?
After reading Chapter 27, I started to use my wits to develop the plot. The little kid Guo Fu liked the protagonist (Yang Guo), but the protagonist didn't like Guo Fu's personality and deliberately ignored Guo Fu, causing Cheng Ying to be bullied. Then the protagonist said to himself that Peach Blossom Island could not accommodate the two of them, so he found another place. In the original work, Guo Fu's character has grown in the later stages, but now she is just a little kid. As an adult time traveler, Yang Guo, would it be very time-consuming to teach her just a little bit? Isn't your title about opening a harem? Wouldn't it be better to take in Guo Fu and take over Guo Jing's industry and connections, and save the country in a later stage? Wouldn't it be better to be your own boss? Or use Guo Jing's relationship to acquire Huazheng, so as to gain the opportunity to inherit the international group across the Eurasian continent. Otherwise, it would be to prostitute girls from all over the world, watch Guo Jing's family die in battle, and then the protagonist would take the harem to the ancient tomb to reproduce, and finally build a dungeon?
Author, do you want to dominate the world and kill the Song Dynasty? The Song Dynasty was really disgusting. Internal strength and true energy are the most productive forces in the world of martial arts. If we form a cavalry that can master dragon-elephant prajna skills and internal strength, wouldn't it mean that we can easily defeat the Song Dynasty, Liao Kingdom, Jin Kingdom, and Mongolia? Combining science and internal strength, we can directly compete for world supremacy and change the regrets of history. This is how the following book is written in Tianlong World
I clicked it three times, but I still can't resist it.
A mature adult couldn't even handle the emotions of a little girl... In the end, Cheng Ying was isolated and didn't reflect on her own problems, which made her feel so wronged that she became numb.
Well written
It's a good thing that the protagonist didn't become a disciple of Peach Blossom Island. Huang Rong would not really treat Yang Guo as a family member. Ke Zhen'e's character was okay but his hatred for Ouyang Feng and Yang Kang was too great. Joining the Ancient Tomb Sect is the best choice, but the Quanzhen Sect is also good. If you want to rebel in the later stage, the Quanzhen Sect and the remaining forces of the Jin Kingdom can be used. Don't worship Zhao Zhijing and just let Qiu Chuji teach you from generation to generation. You may also have the opportunity to become the head teacher.
Forehead
I think the reborn Zhao Zhijing looks better 🙂
Personally, I think everyone can be accepted except for Guo Fu, a stupid woman.
Can you take Li Mochou to bed too?
It has a childlike feel to it, and the protagonist is like a resentful woman who is still young.
Compared with the family, country, and world, martial arts is nothing worth mentioning.
Nowadays, those who write about martial arts also focus on trivial matters such as martial arts, the love between men and women, and personal grudges and hatreds. It's not that you can't write. But times have changed. Nowadays, people are exposed to too much information, including all types of online articles. Similar content has been written in almost all kinds of online articles. However, due to the author's writing skills, experience, knowledge composition and other factors, there are still very few cases where politics (courts, hegemony, national wars), economy (ancient farming, modern industrial and commercial wars), culture (literary men, things in the entertainment industry) are integrated into a book, and the writing is relatively harmonious. If the author of this book did not limit himself to the so-called martial arts, martial arts, and love between men and women, then this book would still be very interesting. I believe the performance of the book and the author's gains (including but not limited to reputation, income, etc.) Will not be much worse. Check out the author's subsequent creations.
Why is there no Huang Rong as the heroine?
Yang Guo should be the most handsome male protagonist in Jin Yong's works, right?
Living under Huang Rong's hand, she ended up confronting Guo Fu everywhere. Nb, do you know how to rely on others? Don't seek comfort in life, but don't live in other people's homes and bully other people's children.
It is shameful for someone like Li Mochou to have a harem! 1. Eliminate the price of evil Li Mochou's crimes are obvious to all: bloodbathing Lujiazhuang, killing babies, forcing He Yuanjun to death, and killing fellow Jianghu people. If the protagonist not only does not kill her, but takes her as his wife and concubine, it is tantamount to declaring that "as long as she is beautiful enough, evil deeds can be forgiven" - this is a denial of all victims. 2. Distorted the moral stance of the time-travelers The time-travelers should have brought modern values: human rights, rule of law, and justice. However, the act of "recruiting Li Mochou" has become a replica of the feudal logic of "the strong take all", and the protagonist has become a slave to beauty and power, rather than a restorer of order. 3. Pandering to vulgar pleasure, sacrificing narrative dignity The essence of this type of plot is to cater to the abnormal pleasure of "conquering the villain's beauty", replacing the moral decision-making with lust, and reducing the supposed heavy "confrontation between good and evil" to the jealousy of the harem. 😡😡😡😡
When you take Li Mochou, a demon who kills innocent people indiscriminately, into the harem, the overall legitimacy and concept of right and wrong in this novel are not completely gone. Summary: text trash can.
One of the most disgusting people in Jin Yong's novels is Li Mochou. This person sounds very majestic and evil. He is nicknamed "Chilian Fairy". His persona has always been that of a domineering president. Anyone who stands in his way will die. He seems to dare to destroy the world at any time and be the enemy of the whole world. In fact this is a huge illusion. A She chased Lu Zhanyuan to the wedding, but was stopped by an old monk, who beat her up and forced her to promise not to do anything for ten years. Ten years later, she came back to kill the entire Lu family, including her ex-boyfriend's brother and his entire family, including the long-term worker, maid, and two underage children. He also said majestically: "Since I have printed nine bloody fingerprints on the wall of the Lu family, these two little girls must be killed!" Having said that, did you find anything wrong? Did Li Mochou forget something? What about the old monk who deserves to be killed the most? This thief ruined your great cause of revenge and even forced and humiliated you in public. Isn't it the so-called death of those who stand in my way? Why did they kill even the long-term workers but forget about this monk? The answer is very humorous. It turns out that this old monk is a senior monk from Tianlong Temple in Dali. Tianlong Temple has strong martial arts skills and a tough background. It is a meditation class exclusively for the Dali royal family. Li Mochou does not want to mess with it. Since I can't afford to offend him, I might as well forget about it selectively, kill only the poor and untouchables like long-term workers and maids, and continue to act like a domineering president. Jin Yong revealed a truth: all domineering presidents are selective domineering. Two If you look through the book, you will find that Li Mochou loves to do this kind of thing, bullying the weak and fearing the strong all day long. Her love rival is called "He Yuanjun", so others cannot use the character Yuan. "I once destroyed sixty-three warehouses and shipping companies on the Yuan River, just because they had this bad word on their signboards!" Even the surname He is a capital offense. She killed a passerby, Mr. He, and his family, more than 20 men, women and children, just because his surname was He. When the family was wiped out, the poor He family didn't know why they died. On weekdays, anyone who offends Li Mochou will be "immediately killed under the palm of Chi Lian Shen", which is awesome. However, if you read the book, you will know that these rules of hers only apply to warehouse owners, low-level old boxers, passers-by, children, and migrant workers. In Jiaxing, a lot of people offended her. Ke Zhen'e offended her, and Wu Sanniang offended her. They beat her with sticks and swords to prevent her from taking revenge. Li Mochou didn't kill anyone. Towards Ke Zhen E, she "just let him go today", "always be merciful" and "meaning to give in". She didn't dare to hurt Ke Zhen E even after beating him for a long time because his apprentice was Guo Jing and she couldn't afford to offend him. The same goes for Wu Sanniang. During the melee, Li Mochou only picked ordinary people to kill, and did not dare to attack Wu Sanniang. She said, "I have no holiday with Master Taohua Island and Yideng, so please leave." She can't mess with the Quanzhen Sect either. The Quanzhen brothers went to encircle and suppress Li Mochou, but Sun Buer was hit by a poisonous needle. Li Mochou also took the initiative to deliver the antidote to eliminate the misunderstanding. The Quanzhen sect all lamented that they came as soon as they came without bringing anything else. Later, Guo Fu led a group of friends to besiege Li Mochou, trying their best to deal damage. Li Mochou was afraid of his parents and did not dare to take action. She is the one who knows best when it comes to watching people eat and drink. She doesn't dare to mess with those who have a background and bullies amateurs to death. Three The people who offended Li Mochou the most were Huang Yaoshi and his family. Huang Yaoshi asked Xiao Cheng Ying to slap her in the face. It was a real slap, very crisp: "There was a loud slap, a clear and crisp slap in the face. Li Mochou had never been so humiliated in her life." Li Mochou quickly forgot about it. After that, she never mentioned a word about revenge for many years, completely forgetting this biggest shame in her life. To the weak, it is wrong to change their surname; to the strong, it is okay to smack their lips. When a weak person touches her red line, the weak person disappears; when a strong person touches her red line, the red line disappears. Li Mochou once stipulated that as long as someone mentions the name of his love rival in person, he will die or I will die. What would happen if Huang Yaoshi said "He Yuanjun" a hundred times in front of her? Who would die? I guess Li Mochou would only say that she has been having tinnitus recently and her hearing is not good, so don't make a fuss. She also complained that Master was partial to her, but she never dared to cause trouble when Master was around. When the master dies, he will immediately come back to bully his junior sister Xiao Longnu. Professionals choose soft persimmons. Four Because I had seen Jin Yong and met Li Mochou a long time ago, I have long been disenchanted with this so-called "domineering strongman". The so-called "strong man" is nothing more than less conscience and more shamelessness. He is nothing more than being very solemn and playing background music when trampling on the weak. Their essence is to transfer all insults to the weak by the strong and retaliate against the weak; they are just ordinary killers and common people's hammers, posing as if they are detonating Huashan, beating the weak, and grabbing the easy ones to bully them to death. Even if anyone makes me unhappy, I will beat my wife, children and apprentices, such as bullying Hong Lingbo and Lu Wushuang. It's like not killing any of the Dongxie Sect members who bullied Li Mochou the most, but in the end he only killed his own young apprentice, Hong Lingbo. The most ironic plot is that Li Mochou claims not to be offended, and anyone who looks at her one more time will die. As a result, Feng Mofeng, an abandoned disciple of Huang Yaoshi, got into a fight with her, burned all her clothes, and died in the street. It stands to reason that it is time to detonate Huashan on the spot and fight against the Dongxie clan. But Li Mochou just started to forget again. The enemy on the opposite side, Yang Guo, couldn't stand it anymore and threw some clothes over. Li Mochou actually nodded: Thank you. Looking at someone accidentally means death; burning all your clothes in public and giving them a piece of cloth means thank you. Then maybe some people still admire him: Mr. Li is such a domineering CEO!
Lazy bag
I hope book friends who are passing by will not be deceived. West Kuan is not crazy, it can be called west Kuang 😒 If you haven't been scared to tears by the protagonist's silly words after reaching chapter 12, you should be able to continue reading, but I have to say goodbye first.
Update soon, boss! Good-looking, good-looking
In the original novel, Yang Guo likes Guo Fu
After five chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.
It's full of poisonous points. I feel like the protagonist doesn't look like an adult time-traveler. The ups and downs of conflicts are very stiff. In the first few chapters, the author's various conflicts are not smooth enough. The changes mentioned in the introduction are completely missed by west Kuang.
How come the more you look at the back, the more poisonous you become😰
It's so poisonous that if you just follow the original work, you won't be able to write it if you leave the original plot.