Eternal Life Starts from the Chat Group

Add Fang Han as a friend in the eternal world 🙂

When I saw Tang San, I didn't want to look anymore

The eternal world is really difficult to deal with, because the time of the main plot of Fang Han in the original novel does not count as time acceleration. It seems that the Supreme Being was broken in just 5 years. Baby Nebula became the Heavenly Lord. If the protagonist cannot become the Heavenly Lord in 5 years, he might as well hug his thighs. Can anyone in other worlds become the Heavenly Lord in 5 years? The original description of the Heavenly Lord is that he is the Lord of Heaven, at least he is on the road.

Go in and grab Yang Xiangxiang's Divine Elephant Prison Suppressing Skill and the Marks of the Gods, and not be exposed to the reality of the future?

Alas, what should I say? The writing is lofty, but as soon as it gets into the main content, it starts to draw its hips and write about Zhu Xian. Let me go, the protagonists you write are all fantasy content, and then you come up with a fairy fantasy content, a fairy tale content, and it is also a sadistic fairy tale content about love, hate, and hatred.

Adding a chat system can especially improve the word count!

Why did Baguio pop out?

Delete the dialogue scenes. It really affects the readers. I almost want to quit. First, it's really too long and boring to read. Second, it doesn't match the character. What is the original Vulpix? He is just a love brain who has lived for hundreds of years and is nothing. Can he understand what Fangyuan said? ? Can you still have a lengthy discussion with Fangyuan? Moreover, the Zhuxian world has a universe and the concept of ten thousand realms? It can be said that many concepts are not available in the world of Zhuxian. You are really generous with your dialogue. Let's delete them all. Maybe the author has been preparing for a long time, but maybe they are nothing. Although it sounds ugly to say this.

Are you sure? I've read so many fanfics about the immortal black and yellow world with spiritual roots, how come I don't know about it? Created by the author

I can't understand the dialogue, I'm really speechless. If you say this to a Liu'er, will he understand? Love-minded stuff, and it's so long and boring, it's just toxic.

I no longer had the desire to watch anymore. No matter how I look at it, it doesn't look right. Let's forget it, right?

A nanny article? The high-level world can reluctantly understand that there will be rewards in the future, but the low-level world doesn't even say thank you? The world's low-level people can't repay and don't even have their thoughts, right?

It all depends on whether the author can persevere. Alas, there is no news about many good-looking authors. Either they were criticized by others and the author is unknown, or they disliked the poor performance and failed to meet the author's expectations. There is no news. I just don't know if this author will be able to do it.

There is a big problem with the input method. They use ellipses. Just type them in. Don't just type periods. This is too unsightly.

My direct book will definitely not be too long. You are in the eternal chat group and I will write about Zhu Xian. What to read about Zhu Xian? Do you watch Bitter Love?

What the hell does it feel like? It's not a chat group anymore.

The author needs to think carefully about how to write online articles, and you are still a fan. Of course, if you write it to practice writing or to entertain yourself, then I didn't say anything about it.

There are too many periods, and the number of words has been lost even before it is published.

I took a look, and I probably know the problem. There are too many meaningless modifiers, and the protagonist is not the kind of person who is a netizen. If you look at the chat content, you can clearly see that the protagonist and other people can't actually chat together. The author chose to give Xiao Yan a relaxing scene, but If you are the protagonist and do not interact with him, you can refer to other chat groups and directly ask Meng Qi, Shi Hao, Ye Fan, and Xiao Yan to come over. Meng Qi, Xiao Yan, and Ye Fan will be responsible for picking up the funny scenes. Shi Hao can provide sufficient resources to the protagonists who do not have many early resources. The second group let Lin Dong go in because he was the youngest and had the lowest cultivation level. He could joke around as a little brother for a day, and Lin Dong would soon trust them. Fang Han and Han Li were not suitable to be in this kind of group, as they were loners. There is a saying that none of the protagonists of Shenji are very suitable because when they were written, Shenji had a violent aura, ranging from Immortal to Holy King to Dragon Talisman. At that time, Shenji and a group of friends were working hard in Zongheng, which was unavoidable.