Douluo: the Shadow Pope in the Hall of Spirits

Chapter 9 is really extremely poisonous. As a member of Wuhun Palace, the protagonist is even considered a core member. Faced with a person who has held her hostage for a long time and is an enemy of Wuhun Palace, he actually doesn't hand her over to the higher-ups of Wuhun Palace? What? The protagonist actually later said that he was not the Virgin, and that he didn't hand it in just because he didn't sense the murderous intention? Jue Juezi

That undercover agent is too disturbing to the audience. It can be dealt with in one sentence. There is no need to write so many scenes. Just spend one chapter explaining where the undercover agent came from and why Qian Renxue went undercover. It is too superfluous to write so many chapters about the undercover scenes.

In summary, the protagonist is a bitch who helps others despite being threatened by others. He claims that he only wants to live a happy life, but in fact he wants to jump into a pit of fire. She is not qualified to say that she repays her kindness. Faced with a spy who threatens her with a knife, he helps her regardless of past grudges and feels like he wants to die on her behalf.

Is that Absalom taking advantage of the protagonist's sympathy?

Have you ever been pope? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Not very close to God, but a little far from man.

Cut it out, author, your book has no clue. In every aspect, it fails.

The book is relatively slow to read, and everyone was unhappy with it, so I kneeled down and apologized. If you have anything to say, you can send it. Whether it is a complaint, an opinion, or a comment, I will be very happy to see it. Also, please don't keep books. It's my fault that the books are not good-looking, but sometimes I write books with good intentions, but I can't control the ending of the work. So everyone's existence and discussion are flames, bright flames on the cold continent.

What's wrong with connecting the protagonist and an undercover agent, who are not the same person, and describing psychological activities? There's an emotional line?

I read the comments and they all have opinions and suggestions about this book. This is still a new book. I don't know if the bad parts have been revised. Of course, the author has to make his own subjective judgment.

How many pages does one Absalom have to write?