Devouring the Starry Sky Starting from Martial Arts

It seems to be quite richly written, but in fact the rhythm is almost broken. As a fan of Devouring, more than 70 of them are still scheming with people on the indigenous planet. How long will it take to be on the shelves?

The writing is very good, much better than those fan stories that always follow the same development routine as the original protagonist! With such a huge world background, those fans can only write along Luo Feng's growth plot line, the same old small planet cultivation to genius battle to the primitive universe to the mission of supervising the domain lord to the battlefield outside the domain lord to the Ancestral God Cult and so on. They are simply bastards!

The overall world view of Swallowing Starry Sky should be brave and progressive, and it has a lot of cheats. Logically speaking, it should be written by a genius. Why do you always write some stupid things in the early stage? It has no meaning for the subsequent development of the overall plot.

Because there are not many descriptions of bloodline levels in Tomato in the early stage, I believe everyone also has some questions. For example, why in the early description of cultivation, it is clearly mentioned that cultivation will cause genetic transformation, but this transformation will not trigger changes in the genetic level? I personally put forward some guesses for everyone to develop their ideas. 1. The relationship between cultivation, bloodline level and genetic level It happens that Tomato Universe likes secret pattern diagrams, so here I will use secret pattern diagrams to illustrate. If we regard the genes of life as secret patterns (this is also expressed in the form of life structure diagrams in the later period of the original work), then an ordinary life with 1x genetic level has only one layer of secret patterns. Normal cultivation is the process of continuously improving this one layer of secret patterns (so normal cultivation and improving the realm will not change the genetic level. This is very clear in the original work). Multiple genetic levels means having multiple layers of secret patterns. This theory explains an interesting question very well: [Why are there only integer multiples of the gene level?] Unless you truly understand the secret patterns and the essential composition of life, it is possible to create non-integer multiples of the secret patterns, instead of stacking them layer by layer according to the existing improvement route. The bloodline level is when the strong pass on the key features of their perfect secret pattern to their offspring. The offspring only need to follow the diagram and absorb energy to automatically complete the secret pattern without having to perfect it themselves. However, there is a limit to the ability of a single layer of secret patterns to self-replenish. When you reach higher levels such as Domain Lord and Realm Lord, you must have multiple layers of secret patterns (multiple genes) to automatically supplement them. Therefore, higher-level bloodlines in the universe generally have several times (monster clan royal family) to ten times (starry sky beast peak bloodline) gene levels. [Don't read this paragraph] As for why the self-replenishment ability of a single layer of secret patterns (1x gene) has a limit, it is more troublesome to explain. It can be understood as a compression algorithm. The amount of information that can be transferred between two generations is limited. For the same size of the compressed package, a compressed package using a more sophisticated compression algorithm (multiple gene levels) can transmit more information without distortion. As for what level this change started from, it's a matter of opinion. I personally think it started from the domain lord level bloodline. The cosmic level bloodline is not impossible, but the planetary star level bloodline is definitely not involved. There is evidence, such as the early copy of Xueluo Continent. The lower limit of survival in Xueluo Continent is close to planetary level (7th level bloodline). Under such a high lower limit, there must be a lot of planetary level (5th-6th level) and star-level bloodlines (3rd-4th level). However, except for the Xueluo Crystal, the natives of Xueluo Continent do not show anything special at the genetic level. If they had basic genetic levels, they would definitely be in more than this situation. Second, the genetic level of the human domain lord level bloodline A simple vertical comparison shows that the peak bloodline of the starry sky beast is 10 times that of the demon clan's royal family, which is about 6-8 times inferior to the peak bloodline of the starry sky beast. From this, it can be inferred that the domain lord level bloodline may be 4-5 times, and the cosmic level bloodline is 2-3 times. Of course, this is as overestimated as possible. In fact, I think it may not be achieved. Maybe the Manka Stars and the Huangshen people only have 2-3 genetic levels. The resources to improve the genetic level based on race cannot be inherited by blood crystals. Even if it is only the initial investment, it is absolutely astronomical. Third, the genetic level improvement of the Blood Crystal and the plasticity of the divine body The Blood Crystal is different from other types of genetic level improvement resources. This is especially obvious before immortality, because it is obviously an external force, and it even needs to be actively driven to be effective. But after reaching immortality, there seems to be no such statement. It's strange, isn't it? But I don't think that's surprising. Because of the immortal divine body, it is malleable. The divine body of the Lord of the Universe is obviously highly malleable, and can even actively improve its genetic level to adopt the path of divine power. However, Immortal and the Lord of the Universe are both divine bodies, so don't they have this kind of plasticity? The answer is actually very obvious, yes. Although the original universe prohibited such active changes for various reasons, this plasticity still exists. Therefore, the immortal divine body that changes its genetic level through external forces such as the Blood Luo Crystal will be completely fixed with the help of the plasticity of the divine body and become his own genetic level without the need for active driving. Compared with other characteristics of the immortal divine body, this is the essence of the existence form of divine life. There are too many articles that can be done with this high degree of plasticity. I originally wanted to talk about something else, but after thinking about it, it seems unnecessary, so let's stop here. Four: A little bit of imagination If the children in the Origin Continent are all immortals, wouldn't the immortality of the lords be equivalent to the most noisy stage of 8-12 years old? Give me immortality during the most noisy stage, emmmm. . . .

It seems that I have done a lot of research on the original work but the writing has a strange smell. 1. The character of the protagonist collapses. When he was on the indigenous planet, the protagonist seemed to be working hard to become stronger, which was more in line with the feeling of the original Devouring Starry Sky, focusing on cultivating strength. As a result, the male protagonist seemed to have suddenly lost his mind as soon as he was introduced to the universe, and Yan Shi suddenly turned into a human-shaped aphrodisiac. Everyone wanted to take a lick of it, and the protagonist was so licked that he didn't know what the universe was. And he has always been involved in various conspiracy theories, and he is afraid of that. It seems that he has a persecution delusion and feels that people all over the world are trying to harm him, but his acting skills are not good enough. 2. Forcefully suppress the combat power. With Devouring ➕ Coiling Dragon, both of them can't compare to the pure native of the heroine. Invincibility at the same level is not enough anyway. Every problem can only be solved with a higher level of power after a breakthrough. On the contrary, the heroine keeps leapfrogging. 3. A confusing supporting role. It can be seen that the author wanted to make the supporting characters as full as possible, but it was too messy. For example, just the few scholars in the monastery, the general and Lin Chong, do they have any need? There is also special-level student Liman. This woman's character is even more outrageous. She is pure M. Being a special-level student means that at least she has a domain at the planet level. In the future, almost all immortals can become domain masters. If you don't work hard to practice, you can give a star-level lick every day. I really don't understand. 4. The protagonist has no goals. In the original work, Luo Feng's growth was forced by life and death crises. He would die if he didn't get stronger. Family, friends, the earth, and the human race would all be destroyed together, and then he would reach the top of the universe sea step by step. Does the protagonist have any sense of crisis? It is said that he awakens Su Hui, but what is the difference between it and time-traveling? There is no father or mother here, and there is no bloodline concern; the planet he comes from seems to be threatened by the beast tide, but it is actually under control; the woman he likes is stronger than him, and does not need his protection; the rare sense of crisis is made up by the protagonist, so the protagonist has no stage goal of training at all, as if it is useless no matter how fast his strength increases.

Why do you want to be an apprentice? You wrote that the indigenous planet didn't even teach you how to understand the laws! Those who grind and chirp and cannot teach the law of perception are all rubbish and have no meaning! Just improve your physical fitness quickly in the early stage!

Secret pattern? Pure energy? There are so many things that the Secret Pattern Diagram can do, which is directly equivalent to having Chaos Monuments everywhere, right?

The subject matter feels okay, but the progress feels too slow. Goldfinger's writing is very strong, but the progress is so slow. And since a new world has been opened for writing fan fiction, it's best to introduce the background of the world. Some characters appear out of nowhere. (Friendly reminder, I have read a lot of fics, and basically all of them were killed in the Earth chapter or the apprentice level for more than 100 chapters). The world view of Devour is too big, and if you press the rhythm in the early stage, you will probably die.

It's too close to Luo Feng. What can we do in just over a hundred years? It's not like we have to participate in the same talent competition then.

I can only say that we are destined to meet again after entering the universe.

Good guy, it's almost chapter 100, and he's still an ordinary planet-level player, just playing house 😅

The more I watch, the more I feel that the protagonist has traveled through the Source Star or the Earth during the Mountain and Sea Realm period.

In the early stage, there was only one word that messed up the rhythm. The reason for the beginning of the earth was to save trouble. It gave me the feeling that the author was not suitable for writing fan fiction, or that he was not suitable for writing devouring fan fiction. Jiuding might be more suitable.

The level of the secret realm can definitely be written higher, integrating the world view like Jiuding Ji, acquired, innate, virtual realm, innate planets, virtual realm star level, etc. This will make it more immersive. After all, Jiuding Ji is familiar to everyone and has seen it a lot. When I get to the virtual realm and get in touch with the outside world, I just participate in a wave of genius battles and get on the right track. However, the author has his own ideas. After all, novices, who doesn't have those few years 😁

I'm not in the right rhythm lately. I feel petty after going to the starry sky.

The writing is very messy, the main character is like a rootless duck who floats wherever he goes without any personal opinions.

Too little. I finished reading it in less than ten minutes.

I hope everyone can click to the last page of the book and see the ranking after reading. This is really, really important to me Thank you!

Tomato also has a good martial arts novel, Jiuding Ji, which I personally feel is pretty good, no worse than Swallowing the Panlong.

The hang is too small, or the progress is too slow.

Division of cultivation realms 33 Lord-level Hunyuan beings 32 World-level Hunyuan beings 31 Higher Hunyuan beings 20~30 Low-level Hunyuan beings - God Emperor 19~20 The Ultimate Realm of the God King - The Ultimate Realm of the Universe God 18 The Second Level of the God King - The Second Level of the Universe God 17 The First Level of the God King - The First Level of the Universe God 16 Master of Chaos - Chaos Realm of the Void God 15 Eternal True God - Void God Unity Realm 14 Void God - Void God Birth Realm 13 The Strongest Man in the Universe - True God Lord 12 The Fourth~Sixth Level Lord of the Universe - True God Venerable 11 The first to third levels of the Lord of the Universe - the True God and the Mighty One 10 The Lord of the Universe - the fourth-level heavenly god 9 The immortal king - the third-level heavenly god 8 The immortal prince - the second-level heavenly god 7 Immortal Army Lord - First Level Heavenly Realm God 6 Realm Lord One~Ninth Level - Peak of God Level, God Level Limit, Realm God Threshold 5 Territory Lord One~Ninth Level - Early, Middle and Late God Level 4 Universe Level One~Ninth Level - Demigod Early stage, middle stage, peak (extraordinary level) 3 Astral level one to nine - early stage, middle stage, peak of saint level (extraordinary level) 2 Planet level one to nine - early stage, middle stage, peak of flying level (extraordinary level) 1 Intermediate God of War, High God of War (Apprentice Level) - Title Level (Star Level) 1 Elementary War God (Apprentice Level) 1 Senior War God (Apprentice Level) - Silver Moon Level (Star Level) 1 Intermediate War God (Apprentice Level) - Meteor Star (Star Level) 1 Elementary Warrior (Apprentice Level) 1 Advanced Warrior (Apprentice Level) - Heaven Level (Ordinary Level) 1 Intermediate Warrior (Apprentice Level) - Earth Level (Ordinary Level) 1 Elementary Level Warrior (apprentice level) - human level (ordinary level) 0 students Understand the division of realms 25 The Tao of Hunyuan level>The highest level of power 24 Shortcut 23 World-level Chaotic Source Bloodline Mystery 22 Semi-Hunyuan Level Fusion Path—Ultimate Realm Level Soul Path—High Chaotic Source Bloodline Mystery 21 God Emperor's Later Level Fusion Dao—Super-Limit Level Low Chaotic Source Bloodline Mystery 20 The ordinary path of the semi-Hunyuan level - the fusion path of the middle stage of the God Emperor - the mystery of the God Emperor's consummation of the lower Chaotic Source bloodline 19 The ordinary path of the late stage of the God Emperor - the fusion path of the early stage of the God Emperor - the soul path of the third killing move level - the low Chaotic Source of the late God Emperor Mysteries of Bloodline 18 The ordinary path of the middle stage of the God Emperor - the soul path of the first ultimate move level - the mystery of the lower Chaotic Source bloodline of the middle stage of the God Emperor 17 The ordinary path of the early stage of the God Emperor - the fusion path of the ultimate level - the mystery of the low Chaotic Source bloodline of the early stage of the God Emperor 16 The Ordinary Way of the Ultimate Realm - the Fusion Way of the Second Level of God 15 The Ordinary Way of the Second Level of God - The Fusion Way of the First Level of God - The Soul Way of the Second Level of God 14 The Ordinary Way of the First Level of God - The Soul Way of the First Level of God 13 The law of chaos - the Tao of the chaotic level 12 The source of the law - the source of the rules 11 The self-created tenth-level secret method - the rule system 10 The self-created sixth-level secret method - the eternal level of the Tao 9 Create your own strongest secret method - open your own way 8 Law of time + law of space - a lower source law that fuses with the corresponding higher source law - the rules of heaven and earth 7 Law of time - law of space - fusion of four gates and one Grade Divine Heart 6 The mysterious law of the upper-level origin - fusion of three gates and one-grade Divine Heart 5 Recognition of the upper-level origin law - the fusion of two gates and one-grade Divine Heart 4 A lower-level origin law - one gate and one-grade Divine Heart 3 Part of the laws - true meaning and divine heart 2 realm - the realm of all things 1 artistic conception - the unity of heaven and man "Snow Eagle Lord" God Emperor's strength division 20~31 33 Lord-level Hunyuan Life Level: Lord Practitioner - Born Ancestor of Hunyuan Life 32 World-level Hunyuan Life Level: Lord of the Origin World World-level Hunyuan Life - Born World-level Hunyuan Life 31 Advanced Hunyuan Life Level: Born High-level Hunyuan Life Source of life - the ultimate realm of soul Tao + the origin of the world 27 The level of the master of the old nest of the abyss sea: the master of the old nest of the abyss 26 the level of the prisoner of the old nest of Hunyuan: the prisoner of the old nest of Hunyuan - the master of the half-way abyss sea 25 beyond the gods Levels of the top powerhouses of the Emperor: Master of the Abyss Sea under the city - Prisoner of Chaotic Source nearby 24 Levels of top powerhouses of the God Emperor: Enlightenment of Semi-Chaotic Source - Bloodline Practitioner - Prisoner of Chaotic Source in the distance - Double Path Half-Chaotic Source 23 Levels of perfection of the God Emperor: Late stage of the God Emperor Enlightenment of Taoism - Semi-Chaotic Source Bloodline Practitioner - God Emperor Perfects Lower Chaotic Source Life - The Third Killing Move of Soul Path 22 God Emperor's Late Stage Levels: Mid-stage God Emperor Enlightenment - Bloodline Practitioner of Late God Emperor - Low Chaotic Source Life of God Emperor's Late Stage - The First Killing Move of Soul Path 21 The middle stage of the God Emperor: Those who have enlightened the Tao in the early stage of the God Emperor - The blood cultivators in the middle stage of the God Emperor - The lower Chaotic Source life in the middle stage of the God Emperor - The ultimate dual path realm + the highest secret transmission + the highest secret treasure 20 The early stage of the God Emperor: Those who have perfected the Dao of the God King - The bloodline practitioners in the early stage of the God Emperor - the lower Chaotic Source life in the early stage of the God Emperor - the ultimate realm + the highest secret treasure 19 levels of the ultimate realm: the enlightenment in the early stage of the God King - the enlightenment in the middle stage of the God King - the bloodline practitioner in the early stage of the God King - the bloodline practitioner in the middle stage of the God King - Yuan Shenjun A practitioner with full bloodline - the ultimate realm of body refining flow - the second level of the universe god + the peak secret treasure - the second level peak of the universe god + the supreme secret "Swallowing Starry Sky 2 Origin Continent" God Emperor's strength is divided into 20~32 33 Lord level Hunyuan life level: Lord cultivator - born ancestor of Hunyuan life 32 World level Hunyuan life level: Lord of the origin world World level Hunyuan life - bloodline practitioner World level Hunyuan life - born world level Hunyuan life - shortcut 31 Higher Chaotic Source Life Level: Bloodline Practitioner High Chaotic Source Life - Born with High Chaotic Source Life - Close Path 30 Level of Breaking the Method with Strength, First Edition: Breaking the Method with Strength, First Edition 29 Extreme Fusion Path Semi-Chaotic Source Level: Extreme Fusion Dao Half Chaotic Source 28 A trace of advanced Chaotic Source power level: A trace of high Chaotic Source power 27 Beyond the God Emperor's invincible existence level: Extreme fusion of the late Tao God Emperor 26 The God Emperor's invincible existence level: High Chaotic Source life will ——Successful in refining the world-class Hunyuan bloodline——Fusion Dao Half Hunyuan 25 God Emperor's peak existence level: Bloodline cultivator——Ultra-limit low Hunyuan life——Double Dao combined with exquisite semi-Hunyuan——Fusion Dao God Emperor late stage 24 God Emperor perfection level Times: Semi-Chaotic Source Enlightenment - Bloodline Practitioner - Divine Emperor Perfecting the Lower Chaotic Source Life - Dual Path Cooperation and Exquisite Divine Emperor Late Stage - Fusion Tao Divine Emperor Middle Stage 23 Divine Emperor Late Stage Level: Divine Emperor Late Stage Enlightenment - Half Chaotic Source Bloodline Practitioner - Lower Divine Emperor Late Stage Hunyuan Life - Dual Paths Cooperate with the Subtle God Emperor in the Middle Stage - Fusion Dao in the Early Stage of the God Emperor 22 Divine Emperor Intermediate Levels: Enlighteners in the Middle Stage of the God Emperor - Bloodline Practitioners in the Late God Emperor Stage - Lower Chaotic Source Life in the Middle Stage of the God Emperor - Dual Paths Cooperate with the Subtle God Emperor in the Early Stage 21 The early level of the God Emperor: those who have enlightened the Tao in the early stage of the God Emperor - the bloodline practitioners in the middle stage of the God Emperor - the low Chaotic Source life in the early stage of the God Emperor - the ultimate realm of fusion of the Tao 20 The early level of the God Emperor of the bloodline genre: those who have enlightened the Tao in the upper limit of the ultimate realm - the bloodline practitioners in the early stage of the God Emperor - —Dual Paths Cooperate with the Exquisite Ultimate Realm 19 Ultimate Realm Levels: Ultimate Realm Enlightenment—Hunyuan Materials Ultimate Realm Life Forms—Hunyuan Bloodline Ultimate Realm Life Forms—Ultimate Realm Hunyuan Bloodline Creatures—Fusion Tao God King Second Level—God King Second Level Peak + Special Inheritance

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