Reborn as Huo Gua, I Can Travel to and from All Heavens and Worlds

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The setting is good, but the problem is that you polished the AI ​​a little too much. It's all a bunch of rubbish adjectives for AI that seem useful but are actually useless.

After reading this introduction, I felt that the content should not be read!

There's nothing wrong with it except that it doesn't look good.

It was said to be Huo Yuhao, but in the end Tianmeng and Electrolux were sacrificed, and the spiritual eyes were even replaced with Sharingan. The things he cultivated have nothing to do with Huo Yuhao. So far, his martial soul is gone, and even his soul rings are gone. It basically has nothing to do with Douluo Dalu II.

If you don't do Doupo, hurry up and develop, run around and play house with the Condor, I really have you.

Dou Po: Medusa, Qing Lin, Little Medical Fairy, the rest is decided by the readers, there are up to five Dou Po female protagonists Shooting Condor: Huang Rong Divine Condor: Little Dragon Girl Fox Demon: Dongfang Huaizhu, Tushan Honghong, Tushan Yaya The remaining worlds are to be determined, readers decide Decide who it is, you can post it under this comment

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, just write less. It's really embarrassing for this group of people.

The first time I watched it, I felt very bad, that is, the protagonist is a soul who has time-traveled over, and then he was directly assimilated in less than 500 words, and then there were all kinds of unforgettable words, all kinds of empathy, and all I had to say was I said that for you. It was really unnecessary. It was too embarrassing to do this kind of routine from 5 years ago.

I hope that the protagonist will not be like Tang San, who is both proud and arrogant. It's okay for you to be selfish. Just don't do it too much to make people sick. Anyway, it can't be worse than Tang Fozu after the later period of Dou Er, but you can't pretend to be good for you while tormenting people in all kinds of ways to disgust readers.

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Could this content get any more boring?

Actually, the first difficulty for Douluo people who want to cross the heavens is the environment. If the heavens and worlds were all in an environment like the earth, I am afraid that the Douluo people would be crushed to death by atmospheric pressure and crushed into a pile by gravity as soon as they crossed over.

Sure enough, Love Continent is all about falling in love

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It's just Douluo in the first few chapters, but it's all Douluo in the following chapters. It feels like I'm wearing a skin

The language in the early stage is refined, and the logic is clear. Before going with the Little Medical Fairy, I had the talent to be a great master. After that, the language of the plot was procrastinated, and adjectives appeared. It was like writing a running account composition. The AI flavor was too strong. Users who were attracted by the full text In it, I don't always want to see non-stop descriptions, but I want to see the plot advance and increase the strength. Love as an adjustment must be well coordinated with the main plot. The king and the ministers work together, instead of changing the main plot

Could the author not have so many character descriptions? This will look watery. You go back and forth several times to describe a character in one page.

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Drive high and go low? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It's okay, edible, not delicious. It hangs up too quickly and is destined to be cut. I'd better leave early.

No? ? Ah Ying said she was going to double wear, but it was all Douban.

What's the point of a low martial arts world😅

It has to be Douluo. In the fantasy system, Douluo's chaos and fusion are the most acceptable.

I'm curious, what level is the Dragon God in Dou Sili placed in Dou Po?

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Author, can you please reduce the content of the world after traveling through the world of Dou Po Cang Qiong?

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