Obsessive Person

It's good, but the clip jumps too fast 🤐😜

If you only read the first few chapters, you will only feel confused, but if you read it carefully, the writing of the latter part is fascinating. I just hope that the author can take some time to provide more updates ✊

On the first day the new book was released, I didn't even have a personal computer. In the past, there were several human-machine voting and collections when publishing books. . . Although I know my writing is terrible, I can't even stand the human-machine anymore. . . . 😭😭😭

I think the writing is very good. Nowadays, most people pursue refreshing, and sometimes they are too brainless. Authors like the author who write beautifully and polish the details are rare.

I read a few chapters in full. The title and introduction of the book are not attractive. It can be seen that the author is working hard to write, but it feels that there are too many ineffective descriptions, such as too detailed descriptions of fights, detailing every punch and kick, which weakens the plot of the novel. If the author wants to achieve results, I suggest that he first change the title of the book to highlight the highlights of the work.

Collect each other's collections and exchange happiness! New book "Where have the departed souls gone?" Please give me more suggestions, thank you

After reading the first three chapters, I really could use some revision, but then I don't understand why it's called "The Obsessive"

The writing style is very high and well written. After the submission is reviewed and the contract is signed, maybe it will become more alive.

Is the investment made through brushing? Why is there so much?