Get the Inheritance of Undead Magic at the Beginning of Coiling Dragon

Your introduction will probably dissuade a lot of people because they don't know the plot. . .

My personal opinion is that instead of being a time-traveler who doesn't know the plot, a semi-native who incorporates some knowledge is actually easier to accept. It is easier to create an original character image by abandoning unnecessary modern habits.

Is it necessary to flashback twice in the first chapter?

The biggest problem with this book is that the level is raised too fast. There is no need. There are so many things to write about about borrowing money and countries. Why is the level raised so quickly? Originally, what I remember most about the Coiling Dragon is the first few chapters where the Warcraft Velociraptor appears, and the release of the Dance of the Level 8 Fire Serpent, which is particularly deep in my memory.