I Was Born in Mondstadt with the Holy Sword in My Arms

There is no difference between Mondstadt and the country's death. There are old aristocrats in the country who have been separated. Although the top leaders are fishing for fish, they have a single vote to veto it. The leaders below are not willing to make progress.

I came here to see the sparks of the collision between King Arthur and Teyvat, but the pace is so slow and the Holy Sword is never used. Speaking of which, the power systems of the two are not much different. One is the star anchor and the other is the elemental power. The power system of the Holy Grail is more rule-based, and the elemental power leyline is also the same. There is no need to suppress the combat power. Looking next door, Warhammer Lion has no fighting power in the Holy Grail World, it is just a push. This is not meant to be pushed sideways, but I feel that the protagonist is so weak, and I added a setting to weaken the Holy Sword that absorbs power. Is this really necessary?

I thought it was Tianqiong Faniya on the cover

Born with a holy sword in his arms, he stabbed Mama to death when he first ascended to the throne.

But! …… …… Stop it! …… …… No way. ... ... The author has a strange hydrological structure, and he keeps repeating the same argument over and over again. I will take a break for a few weeks and then come back to take a look😨

I always feel like I'm just saying the same thing over and over again, which seems awkward.

There are strange sentence breaks and paragraphs. Does this author not read his own books?

Isn't it overwhelming, byd?

There are a lot of people here, come and hang out_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_ If you like watching Teyvat fanfiction, come and see me o(╥╥)o

I just read this book. To be honest, I still have certain expectations and favorable impressions of Genshin Impact fans who are relatively rare at the starting point. However, the following problems are really annoying: 1. For some reason, a problem that has already been explained is always repeated, which makes people confused 2. First, the third-person switch is very It's unnatural and often confusing 3. The logical order of some sentences in the article is completely reversed or even confusing 4. Author, since you are writing a fanfic, you should dig deeper into the text, or indicate that you have made a second creation somewhere in the text, just like the previous paragraph where it was said that the protagonist is the Adventer. Really, my head was dizzy when I read it. 5. I don't know why, but the protagonist always gives me a kind of mysterious confidence that he will win no matter where he is. It makes people feel a little brain-congested 6. The protagonist's golden finger should be curry sticks, so why do you have to ban him directly? If you say that using curry sticks in combat consumes a lot of money, I have no objection. But it can neither be summoned nor used to equalize a, which I think is a bit excessive. It gives readers a direct feeling that you want to suppress the combat power, but you don't have a very suitable technique, so you just give the golden finger to the ban

It's nice to look at, but what about people? Isn't it really the same?

Come on, don't stop, basically no one will read it in the early stage, only if the number of words is more, will anyone read it.

Why do I feel like something is wrong and not smooth? Of course, the author's works are very good-looking, and it's almost enough to read them once. It's strange if there is no other meaning.

Taigouba is colloquial, and it is divided into strange paragraphs

Overall, there's nothing wrong with it. It's just that the battle scenes are a bit lacking.

Genshin Impact

It's a good start in Mondstadt. The old aristocratic rule has been overthrown, and there is a peaceful and non-oppressive growing environment. The rice god Sumeru doesn't care or can't do anything. Bandits, robbers and corrupt officials are rampant. You will suffer the same crime when you travel there. Before the plot begins, Barbatos, the god of wind, has recovered from his injury and is about to wake up. It should be good for Mondstadt. There are some concerns in the book. The original work of the Knights was not very expressive because most of the high-end combat expeditions at that time. If we push the plot more than ten years ago, there should be no expedition. At this time, there are gods on Mondstadt, and there are many strong knights below. Don't tell me, Mondstadt can really compete with Liyue (just kidding) 🙂

After reading a few chapters, I identified it as written by AI.

The writing is okay, but the problem is that there are too many comments about the Seven Kingdoms, which causes the plot to advance too slowly, which makes me feel like it is always in the water. . . What a pity, looking forward to the next book