China Entertainment: Abstraction Starts with Sword III

Evaluation, the abstract is not abstract enough, the entertainment is not entertaining enough, the fun is not fun enough, there is no meaty drama, and there is no sweet love! Tasteless food

I've seen everyone's criticisms of Xiao Pujie. The author of Pujie Xiao is not strong enough in writing, and there are some deficiencies in positioning, including the poisonous points some people say. You can comment more and I will work hard to correct it. Although the sound is a bit sharp, I will work hard to correct it. Thank you all

In the first chapter of the game, he was forced to play awkwardly, and in the company he was playful and smiling with his boss to make his presence felt. Do you think your mother can do whatever you want because she has a relationship with her?

The ideas are well conceived, and you can see that they are really thoughtful. The shortcoming is that the writing is not strong enough, and many things I want to say are not expressed clearly. I hope there will be improvement in the future. In addition, regarding Fan, there is nothing wrong with the writing. If there are no controversies or twists and turns in the story, it can easily become a running story. Highly similar plots can easily lead to fatigue and unfinished work. I hope it can be dealt with later

Why are everyone making critical comments? I read a few of them, and I think they are okay. The author's writing is okay, but his writing skills need to be improved.

Is the author a newbie? I feel like you are still very talented, but there are still some minor issues in many areas. For example, isn't the protagonist's first investment scandal a movie? Why do you want to turn it into a TV series? Why do we have to turn the movie into a TV series when we can obviously get a movie card? After all, there are so many TV series. The characters are nice and interesting to watch.

Isn't this embarrassing? It is recommended to change

I've decided on the big speechless incident. I just saw it today and it's not updated anymore.

Give it up, you will definitely pounce. What's the selling point? I didn't see it.

I just finished reading the first three chapters and I don't think the writing is bad. It's better than other similar novels in the ranking. The first book for a newcomer is very good. The author should not be influenced by Shennong and just write according to his own outline. If you don't write the first book according to your own ideas, it will be absolutely crooked and follow what the readers teach you. You can let the readers provide suggestions. Don't be affected by the poisonous comments in the comment section, your writing is very good.

Are you out of your mind? What did you write?

This time is most suitable for shooting F1 authors, plus IMAX visual effects. I think the box office will explode.

The heroine Shi Shi is very good ^_^, but she is too abstract. In fact, it doesn't matter if the protagonist is abstract and funny sometimes, but most of the time she has to be more serious.

Funny Birds

Let's re-open a novel about a poetic heroine. In fact, there is nothing wrong with your writing. The main problem is that the character of the protagonist is not well established, and anyone who reads it can easily get into trouble.

Let's re-open a book! This book is useless

There's no need for bulldozers, just two female leads.