Naruto: Transmigrating to the Warring States Era, I Rise from Infancy

Double standard, plus a dog-licking protagonist, who pretends to criticize Madara and Hashirama's friendship and looks very angry, but then licks the Uzumaki woman on the battlefield.

In fan works, the protagonist's abilities and characteristics should be constantly re-created and brought out new ones. Otherwise, it would be too old-fashioned to always follow the abilities of the original work.

The most taboo thing about fan works is scribbling basic data

I very much hope that there will be a protagonist who creates techniques that are constantly superimposed on the Blood Succession Snare. The techniques are more and more related to the world and the nature of immortality, and create a training system energy that is different from chakra. A Naruto fan who creates transcendence Generally speaking, if you change the original setting or create it privately, many readers will not recognize it, but as long as you say that the character has created a new technique, and that this technique does not have an outrageous addition to the current protagonist's combat power, and has some characteristics, then readers will recognize it. In this way, the technique gradually advances, which means that the protagonist slowly advances and makes progress. It is easy to control, readers can recognize it and it always brings a light sense of freshness. If you use it well, you can write a book with good average quality.

He behaves so devilishly, showing the wisdom of an adult when he is only a few months old, and even teaches others how to practice. Generally, babies who are only a few months old can't even crawl, and how can they talk when their throats haven't even grown? Where does the protagonist's knowledge come from? To others, this is not a genius, but a horror. Maybe they will be imprisoned and soul-searched.

There are some biases. I beg you to read it and tell me whether my writing of Hashirama is strong or not. I admit that there are setting errors, but I will not write about the imbalance between Senju and Uchiha. If you can tell that something is wrong after reading just one chapter, then which novel on the market can withstand reading like this?

Is this how you founded your country? The emperor's position can also accommodate family members.

After reading the first few chapters, the protagonist is a few years younger than Madara. As a result, the protagonist in many previous chapters is just a supporting role, and there is no desire to read further. Moreover, the protagonist's own research should not be spread casually. One is that there is no way to explain how you got it, and the other is that the supporting character's initial combat power is already high. If the protagonist shares the results, his combat power will be inflated, and the plot cannot highlight the protagonist.

The ninja who went on the mission with a newborn baby was pregnant and gave birth during the mission for ten months. . . . Don't understand.

After coming out of the Immortal Path, I was so depressed that I even developed a clone flow. After my main body fell asleep, wouldn't I have to switch to a clone to take over? Well